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Published: 2020-04-09 07:25:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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so- im trying to turn my main story called "inner fall" into its own original fiction instead of it staying as fan-fiction for the rest of its existence-so in order to do that im completely re-writing and re-designing some of the canon characters that were in it so they become original and not directly ripped from something else- so this first character was originally sammy Lawrence from batim, i decided to change every aspect of his design and shape language, so now this character is more neutral than friendly- i think his human design still needs some work though, so the human part of this character's design isn't official yet, if you have any suggestions on how i can change the design feel free to comment, im open for criticism and suggestions ^^ i still haven't come up with a new name for him yet so if you have any suggestions feel free to comment!
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Lily-The-Rockstar [2020-04-18 20:20:30 +0000 UTC]
i- i just realized i put his mole on the wrong cheek in his spirit form-
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LookBunnies [2020-04-09 07:41:47 +0000 UTC]
I personally like the designs? Also good luck making Inner Fall original, I know people who've done similar things and have tried to do things like it myself and it's not super easy to adapt but it's definetly worth it.
The first name that comes to mind for this person is Jordan, but I don't know if that's realistic for the time period Inner Fall is set in so maybe John or Johnson?
I don't really have any suggestions for the human design, it looks fine to me.
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Lily-The-Rockstar In reply to LookBunnies [2020-05-02 09:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^ I'm glad you like them~
Yeah, I've been having a little bit of trouble adapting so far- but I'm sure I'll get everything sorted out sooner or later ^^
I think I'll use Johnson as part of his full name and John as a nickname he goes by-
Thank you very much for the name suggestions ^^
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