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Tainui fumbled nervously with his backpack, drew out another datapad and studied it for a few moments before handing it to the warrior with obvious reluctance."This is kinda hard for me. There's something I've gotta do shortly and there is a chance...Well, if I don't come back I want you to give that to Two-Talon for me."
"Not come back?" Hunts-In-Grass' eyes widened with alarm and he quickly lurched to his feet again, stepping closer to Tainui as if to prevent him from running away. "What exactly are you planning to achieve?"
After spending a couple of minutes bringing him up to speed on the Taniwha project, Tainui was grabbed roughly by the warrior and held in a vice-like grip, the talons digging painfully into his skin. "Hrrr, that course of action is madness! This one cannot permit this!"
"Goddammit, Hunts! As a warrior, I would've expected you of all people would understand," Tainui growled at him, desperate to prevent the waver in his voice from choking him up. "I'm not doing this 'cause I want to, I'm doing it 'cause I have to. Don't you get it?" he pleaded. Reaching up he rested a hand on the warrior's chest and dropped his voice to little more than a whisper. "I failed in my promise to protect Andrej. But I'm not gonna fail in protecting you two."
Hunts-In-Grass recoiled as if stung, releasing him from his grasp. The problem was that he did understand what was driving the small, brave human. And if their situations were reversed he would be doing exactly the same thing. However, Tainui had already sacrificed so much and it struck the warrior as being wrong for him to be expected to give up the last, most precious gift he had to offer: His life. Even if it was being offered freely...
"And you do this without coercion, hrrr?"
"Yeah. I volunteered. You guys will have your hands full and are needed here. There isn't a lot more that I can do -"
"This one believes you have already contributed enough. The Original Home fleet is hurting because of the innovations you provided for us."
Tainui shook his head. "You know as well as I do that it ain't enough. Please! Just promise me that you'll give that bloody datapad to him if anything happens to me, alright?"
"What is preventing you from communicating this to him yourself, hrrr?"
Tainui avoided meeting his friend's eyes and turned to fumble with the zip on his backpack, irritated with himself for showing weakness in front of the warrior. "I dunno if I can, bro," he muttered quietly, knowing full well the warrior would have no difficulty in hearing him. "I dunno if I'm brave enough to do that with what I'm about to do. He might try to talk me out of it. And... and I'm scared he would succeed."
Hunts-In-Grass glared at the datapad as if it might explode in his hands and sighed, realizing the human was right about Two-Talon's likely reaction. While he didn't like it, as a warrior he respected Tainui's decision.
"Hrrr...Very well. If this one survives the approaching battle then he will deliver your message. Be certain you do return so this one is not forced to perform this onerous task, however! You know this one does not desire to lose you also."
"Heh - I'd miss you too ya daft, emo bugger. You guys are my family now; a scary, demonic, alien-lizard family, but still family." He laughed, trying to dispel the serious mood that had overtaken them both. "Don't worry your little lizard head about it. I have no intention of dying out there anytime soon."
Pocketing the datapad, Hunts-In-Grass stood up and pulled Tainui into a tight four-armed embrace, crushing the human against his chest. "There will be dire consequences if you break that promise, little-one. Stay safe and may the Revered Ancestor's guide you, strange, silly little human."
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Tainui, a young Maori guy about to embark on a rather perilous mission is entrusting the Vanguard warrior Hunts-In-Grass with a message to his friend, should he not make it back.
Scene from my first novel - The Cold Wind - illustrated by the talented 343GuiltySpark - check out his fantastic work here: [link]
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Comments: 33
LINCARD1000 In reply to Myrethy [2014-11-25 06:34:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you... I've been very fortunate to work with some fantastically talented artists.
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Myrethy In reply to LINCARD1000 [2014-11-25 15:45:00 +0000 UTC]
Indeed you have, all this stuff is great!
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Dalek-Z [2014-05-18 15:18:48 +0000 UTC]
Your character is so cool and I love him, his muscular body and face are awesome!!!
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LINCARD1000 In reply to Dalek-Z [2014-05-20 02:57:40 +0000 UTC]
I Appreciate the compliment, thank you The artist did a great job of depicting my aliens to look, well, alien.
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LINCARD1000 In reply to usershadow [2010-06-10 06:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Check out the art that Jim has in his gallery, he does some amazing work
Thank you for the comment.
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Twentieth [2010-05-14 02:02:55 +0000 UTC]
This is more detail than my own imagination thought up when i read your story. This is excellent. The poses really give these two proud statures. Lovely
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LINCARD1000 In reply to Twentieth [2010-05-15 19:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you - sir!
It was a small scene in the scheme of things but I kinda liked it, figured it showed a more human side to Tainui rather than his usual confident, cheeky side.
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MrMinos [2010-05-14 00:46:09 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic artwork with superb, vibrant color. What a wonderful take on a character.
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LINCARD1000 In reply to MrMinos [2010-05-15 19:37:14 +0000 UTC]
What a lovely comment - thank you yes, Jim (the artist) definitely came up with quite a different look to the Vanguard, bringing out their more demonic aspect.
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SymbolHero [2010-05-13 21:05:19 +0000 UTC]
Whata na interesting scene, glad to see that both of you did a great team work, you with the text and him with the ilustration of the scene.
It looks prety good, and that Vanguard looks kinda rude with those tooths and spikes. I really like his details ^ ^
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LINCARD1000 In reply to SymbolHero [2010-05-15 19:38:12 +0000 UTC]
Aye, the artist did a fantastic job of illustrating the scene, bringing out the more bestial aspect to the Vanguard and the proud side of Tainui.
Thank you for the comment
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SymbolHero In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-15 19:55:36 +0000 UTC]
YouΒ΄re very welcome ^ ^
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Zerk-Dragon [2010-05-13 19:59:12 +0000 UTC]
Very good detail and i love the quality of both the characters face's
this is done right down to the point i mean really good work
I also really like the armor that the vanguard has on is it the light armor that was made in the story i cant remember having only read it once i should read it again.
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LINCARD1000 In reply to Zerk-Dragon [2010-05-15 19:39:32 +0000 UTC]
The artist is great with this sort of work, did a wonderful job with the details of both characters.
Oh, you have read the story, have you? Hope it was okay
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Zerk-Dragon In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-15 22:40:08 +0000 UTC]
yeah i read the one with the good parts still in hehe
took me a few days to read it but god if they only made more books like that then i would be the reading type
when i was reading it i wanted to stay home from school just to read it there was times in study hall when i took my psp and read it at school i just had to know what was gonna happen next
i would love to see more *hint hint* XD
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LINCARD1000 In reply to Zerk-Dragon [2010-05-16 06:49:02 +0000 UTC]
heh, well I am in hte process of writing the 3rd novel in the series. Not a quick job though.
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Zerk-Dragon In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-17 20:13:34 +0000 UTC]
well i will keep a good look out x3 and i know it takes time
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GreaseRoach [2010-05-13 19:09:19 +0000 UTC]
This is an awesome twist on the Vanguard design, and the coloring is flawless...
Jim did an amazing job on this!
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LINCARD1000 In reply to GreaseRoach [2010-05-13 19:54:31 +0000 UTC]
Aye, Jim asked for a bit of leeway on the Vanguard design and I was more than happy for him to play around with it I asked for a "book cover" style commission and he delivered exactly that... this really does look like it belongs on the cover of my novel. Now if only I could get the damned things professionally published!
Thanks for the lovely comment, by the way.
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GreaseRoach In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-14 00:16:40 +0000 UTC]
I would buy them if they were published, but after reading some pages, I suggest that you go back and spell check them more thoroughly. I've spotted some typos here and there. That's my advice
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LINCARD1000 In reply to GreaseRoach [2010-05-14 05:07:37 +0000 UTC]
Most of the spelling should be okay - words that show up as errors are probably the compound words or names. That and I wrote them to start with using NZ English, not US English and there are a few differences in spelling between the two which are still correct.
It's my grammar that sucks
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GreaseRoach In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-14 19:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that's my fault for being an American then. I also do not comprehend meters...
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LINCARD1000 In reply to GreaseRoach [2010-05-15 19:35:05 +0000 UTC]
Not a fault at all I have been writing all my new work in US English as that is where the majority of the people who are interested in my stuff are from.
2.54 centimeters in an inch, the rest you'll be just fine with
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GreaseRoach In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-15 21:16:39 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I have the conversions on some composition book from 4th grade that I miraculously still have, but most of the time I am too lazy to do any math.
I hate math
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LINCARD1000 In reply to GreaseRoach [2010-05-16 06:48:17 +0000 UTC]
You and me both, I suck at math so bad. Basically if you think of a meter as like a yard, a kilometer as like a mile - it is not exact but gives youthe same idea
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DrakainaQueen [2010-05-13 15:31:59 +0000 UTC]
Another change of style. Pretty neat !
Heh, the head is a bit scary with all those teeth XD
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LINCARD1000 In reply to DrakainaQueen [2010-05-13 17:13:04 +0000 UTC]
The Vanguard always were supposed to be a fairly demonic, scary looking kind of creature... Jim (the artist) said he was interested in trying something with the design of their heads so I let him go to town... I kinda like his design, actually!
Thank you for the lovely comment, m'dear.
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DrakainaQueen In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-17 02:25:52 +0000 UTC]
The head is really important in characters like this one, at least for me. I like your original description, is pretty nice to try different things on it
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LINCARD1000 In reply to DrakainaQueen [2010-05-17 18:00:38 +0000 UTC]
That you... and I love it when artists "think outside the box" and go with the intent and not just stick 100% to a set script, so to speak. One of the reasons I love your work so much You come up with some amazing concepts.
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DrakainaQueen In reply to LINCARD1000 [2010-05-18 00:16:33 +0000 UTC]
aww, that's really nice, it means quite much to me that you like it. I like when people like my art XD and love when commissioners are happy with it of course!
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