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A wonderful tale of whimsy...in dedication to my dog of 16 years, Lacey, R.I.P. (and for my kitties, Nikki and Zoey, whom make an appearance at the end)...I have only to read this, and I can be with Lacey again.
THE HIDDEN PATH (Chapter 1 of 21)
The two young girls ran together through the big field of buttercups; laughing, and making bubbles…It was Isabella’s tenth birthday, and she and her best friend Janey decided to break away from the rest of the party to enjoy the day for a while on their own. The sun beat down hot upon them as they ran, on that warm June day. Stopping to catch their breath, to cool off a bit; still laughing. They sat down almost simultaneously; giggling, waving their wands in the strong breeze; watching as the bubbles grew larger, until they could grow no more; then they’d break off, and fly away in the warmth of the day, off into the pale blue summer sky. They were sat nearest to the entrance of the forest, which both girls knew they did not have permission to enter; when sudden movement at the mouth of the entrance caught Janey’s eye. She glanced over, just in time to see Jimmy Barlow’s dog, Chip, come bounding out, quickly heading towards them. Janey was terrified of dogs! Immediately she stood; while at the same time announcing the dog’s presence to Isabella as she was running away, her curly blonde hair flying in the breeze; lifting her mid length skirt as high as it would go, her little legs moving as fast as they could possibly take her; back towards the birthday party crew. Chip, nipping close at her heels the entire time; thinking it was all just a big game. And before Isabella could even say anything back to her, Janey was almost clear out of view.
Isabella sighed, and leaned back on her palms; observing the scenery around her…
It was so pretty here! She thought…Not just yet wanting to leave this place; (even though it was her special day, and she was sure her parents would be wondering where she was)… After a few minutes passed, she sighed again, brushing the earth from off her hands onto her blue jeans; she stood to get up, when she noticed something glittering to the left of her, in the wooded area. Her eyes grew huge when she spotted the most beautiful silver butterfly she had ever seen! But this was just no ordinary butterfly! Its wings glistened, and sparkled brightly in the afternoon sun like tiny clusters of diamonds! And before Isabella knew what she was doing, she was up and chasing after it. Clear into the forest, taking a turn she had never seen before, without thinking…In her eager pursuit…She chased that butterfly for what felt like forever; but it always seemed to ‘just’ evade her grasp… And by the time she realized what she had done; to her horror she also realized she was lost! “Oh my” She said to herself out loud…”What am I going to do now?” She stopped, and did a slow turn… looking all about her, in every direction. Tears glistening in her big blue eyes… She was so tired from the wild chase; she was sweating too. She sat down on the cool earth of the forest floor in the shade of a big tree. Her back up against it; streams of sunlight casting down upon her head, catching on the reddish highlights of her dark brown hair. She plastered herself against the tree for some time, frightened to death to even move. But then…“I really must find my way out of here”!! She exclaimed suddenly, with desperation! She rose once more, commanding her feet to walk… Tears running steady down her cheeks…
Up a short distance ahead, she noticed a flock of birds scrounging for food; she removed a small bag of potato chips from her shirt pocket which she had saved there from the party earlier; crushing them up. She gave them to the birds… (Even in her fear, Isabella’s kindness was unscathed)… She continued to walk then…Not knowing at all where she was going... All she did know was that she was scared, ‘Very scared’. And there seemed to be no hope of finding her way home anytime soon.
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Comments: 47
JoeDiamondD [2018-06-17 03:44:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you should publish, its a pity to keep your talent only on DA literature. After i read your note, i thought, now this is a very positive and smart girl and i wanted to go again on tour port. Your literature is picture in words, colorful and detailed not to mention very well "blended" If you decide, ill be the one who makes you cover :hug"
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LindArtz In reply to JoeDiamondD [2018-06-18 11:47:38 +0000 UTC]
You read the whole thing?
Thank you So much for your very kind, and encouraging words. It means a lot to me. And I will Surely keep you in mind! You would be the Perfect person!! !!!
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JoeDiamondD In reply to LindArtz [2018-06-18 13:34:25 +0000 UTC]
You should try online literature and use Amazon to sell
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LindArtz In reply to JoeDiamondD [2018-06-20 20:18:47 +0000 UTC]
Can it still be done, since I've published it here already??
I'd not know where to start, to be honest. Never did that sort of thing before.
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JoeDiamondD In reply to LindArtz [2018-06-21 03:07:56 +0000 UTC]
What, you mean cover?, people usually do that on the online books sold on Amazon and i think it can
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LindArtz In reply to JoeDiamondD [2018-06-21 22:50:17 +0000 UTC]
No, I mean the story it self. Seems to me I heard somewhere before that if you have it published anywhere already, publisher's won't be interested in buying them.
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JoeDiamondD In reply to LindArtz [2018-06-22 03:30:24 +0000 UTC]
This aspect is beyond me, honestly i have no idea ...you should ask, or keep in mind for the next one
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LindArtz In reply to JoeDiamondD [2018-06-29 01:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Apparently you can (though I imagine it would have to come down from here eventually, not certain about that, though... ) .. Here is what I found, if you'd care to read it too, for the sake of knowledge..
www.huffingtonpost.com/allison…
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LindArtz In reply to faryba [2017-10-27 22:52:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you read that whole thing! I. Truly. Appreciate it. Thank you, Faryba.
!!!
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faryba In reply to LindArtz [2017-11-06 11:14:23 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome my wonderful friend
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MamaMika [2017-01-05 20:30:55 +0000 UTC]
!! Wonderful story ... I read with pleasure .. !! Thank you!!
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LindArtz In reply to MamaMika [2017-01-06 01:01:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so very much, Maria! !! It's rather a bit long, so, I'm very happy you read it.
!!
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empellina [2016-10-27 15:58:47 +0000 UTC]
This is just wonderful! And more to go...can't wait to have time to read it. I was looking for a new book.
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LindArtz In reply to empellina [2016-10-28 23:55:07 +0000 UTC]
It helps keep my dog Lacey alive whenever I read it... The story starts getting better around chapter 7 or 8. It's a child's fantasy though, so I'll understand if you don't read it through.
Thanks for your interest, Maryellen; and for all the favs. !!!
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empellina In reply to LindArtz [2016-11-10 19:20:56 +0000 UTC]
I will read it...have to put it on my list. I read so much!
I like all kinds of things. Always reading youth books too.
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LindArtz In reply to BillyNikoll [2015-04-30 14:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so very much! !!!
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LindArtz In reply to Fajralam [2015-03-24 19:57:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!! (did you read the whole thing?
)
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LindArtz In reply to loreleft27 [2015-01-28 19:49:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh thanks so much, Lorene. (It really starts to pick up around chapter 7)
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virnagray [2015-01-24 02:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Awww! poor baby!
I love the imagery in this story
superb job!:heart
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Applemac12 [2015-01-23 22:43:24 +0000 UTC]
O.k I usually start with the first posted deviations until I realised you posted the last chapter first!
I'll try to get through them all Linda - please forgive me if it takes me a bit of time!
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LindArtz In reply to Applemac12 [2015-01-24 18:00:47 +0000 UTC]
Just came to realize the confusion, Vin. It's okay. Thank you.
!!!
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Applemac12 In reply to LindArtz [2015-01-24 21:30:35 +0000 UTC]
Lol - I saw it and thought 'what happened to all the previous chapters?'!
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MarcoHerrera [2015-01-23 18:10:03 +0000 UTC]
Great story..can't wait to see the rest of the chapters!!
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LindArtz In reply to MarcoHerrera [2015-01-23 18:44:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Marco. (a tad long though, I realize)
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notmor [2015-01-21 22:16:44 +0000 UTC]
this is a great start Linda..i'm already very concerned for Isabella
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notmor In reply to LindArtz [2015-01-23 05:40:48 +0000 UTC]
you are always most welcome dear girl
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LindArtz In reply to notmor [2015-01-23 18:55:17 +0000 UTC]
Now you sound like Harris. "my dear girl"
!!!
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notmor In reply to LindArtz [2015-01-23 19:42:39 +0000 UTC]
haha you caught that did ya ...actually i cannot lie i must have subconsciously said that tho i have used dear girl before
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notmor In reply to LindArtz [2015-01-24 00:37:14 +0000 UTC]
oh you you are too cute dear girl
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