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Linedhel — Seduction
Published: 2006-07-27 21:18:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 386; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 13
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Description Verse 1
Outside's another world waiting for you,
Terrible, but beautiful, enchanting your mind...
Inside of you, a world of dreams, old and new,
Dare to look! Don't be afraid of what you'll find...
Seek the world of hidden dreams,
Let its darkness overwhelm you...
You are surrounded by its shadow beams,
This world you've always known as true...

Chorus
Can you hear their calling,
Shadowy whispers seeking you?
Figures of a world so true,
With a song so enthralling...

Verse 2
Touch me! I'm seducing, eroticizing...
Can you feel this passion inside of me?
These charms, this beauty, so mesmerizing...
Come follow me, I'll set you free!
Let me wrap my arms around you,
I'll show you how it feels to be romanticized...
Give in to me, let me feel with you...
And show me how it feels to be gallantized.

Verse 3
From darkness I was born,
And the shadows hold my heart and soul...
Without you all my beauty is torn,
Come join me, in our hearts we shall be whole.
You're in my world, I'll never let you go...
Through its darkness and beautyyou are mysticized...
Toghether through the shadows we shall flow,
And through love, in life and death, eternalized.
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Comments: 3

Linedhel [2006-07-28 18:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God! I'm so happy you like it, I'm REALLY happy to hear it's good... I'm almost lost for words...
thanks a lot... Your opinions are very welcome on my other deviations too...
And thanks for the favourite...

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Sychte In reply to Linedhel [2006-08-03 14:36:47 +0000 UTC]

You have reached an inspirational climax with this poem. The verses are truly marvels. I only dislike a bit the sheer chours. Nonetheless, the 2nd and 3rd verses come to aid. It takes a lot of time and talent to write a poem of such intensity, thereby I wish you the best of luck.
It's obvious that you have done this before, and I hope you'll continue on this very path.

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bow-chicka-bow-wow [2006-07-28 01:28:51 +0000 UTC]

wow. really good, and i mean REALLY good

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