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Published: 2004-10-02 00:44:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 538; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 20
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Description An urge, a need,
I cut and cut until I start to bleed,
The flesh rips and tears with ease

I lose myself in the blade,
It replaces my hate,
It coddles my spirit with pain

I make a mistake,
I punish myself with pain.
I don’t want to be myself

I will carve a better me,
In my skin
I hate myself even more for it.

I condition myself through pain
I never learn,
I will eventually, if I keep cutting…
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Comments: 24

bitanathofgad [2006-06-23 08:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Very well written, both versions. Especially liked "I will carve a better me."

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WhenTheCutGoesInDeep [2005-01-27 04:17:11 +0000 UTC]

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NotEntirelyMe [2004-12-13 22:47:10 +0000 UTC]

briefrespite pointed this one out. very amusing indeed.
kind of sad that people respond like they do.
quite clever in someways although a bit blatent. having said that some people haven't exactly got the idea yet.

anyway rarara

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linked In reply to NotEntirelyMe [2004-12-13 23:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, blatant is as blatant does .

I tried to catch the realism of the thinking process they must go through, think I got it on the head or no?

~Adam

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wiccan-skiez In reply to linked [2005-05-07 10:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Could be perfect to some but certainly not all. Cutting or any form of selfharm is different for everyone. Usually there is a lot more depth to it than first appears and the reasons and emotion behind it differ. But you got the basics for most cutters I think

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NotEntirelyMe In reply to linked [2004-12-13 23:26:16 +0000 UTC]

erm...fairly exact but not perfect.
i've been there and done that and am not sure....to a certain extent but only on a fairly basic level...impressive attempt considering.

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inmyroom [2004-12-13 22:46:29 +0000 UTC]

haha. fun times.

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briefrespite [2004-12-13 15:17:21 +0000 UTC]

made me laugh so much.
good job on that

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linked In reply to briefrespite [2004-12-13 15:32:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

I try

~Adam

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briefrespite In reply to linked [2004-12-13 15:34:32 +0000 UTC]

lol yes. I like the comments above by people who took it seriously
i mean
the category it is in is SATIRE
respect

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SelflessDefect [2004-12-06 02:06:52 +0000 UTC]

always strange to read all of your emotions like that....this is very well written I like it very very much, nice job.

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linked In reply to SelflessDefect [2004-12-06 02:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

~Adam

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SelflessDefect In reply to linked [2004-12-06 02:10:49 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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linked [2004-10-18 07:34:25 +0000 UTC]

An urge, a need,
I cut and cut until I start to bleed,
The flesh rips and tears with ease

I lose myself in the blade,
It replaces my hate,
It coddles my spirit with pain

I lost my friend,
He left me alone in this cold world,
Without a warm embrace.

I'll cut some warmth into my skin.
I feel worthless,
I'll feel better when I drop this warmth into this world.

They'll all love me,
When I warm them with my own blood.
Why don't they feel as warm as I've made them?

---

A different version

~Adam

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spookie [2004-10-05 03:48:49 +0000 UTC]

I like this... but do you really feel the physical pain over the emotional pain while cutting?

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linked In reply to spookie [2004-10-05 03:52:21 +0000 UTC]

I do not cut, I took someone's thoughts and experiences which he expressed and used it to make this.

Thanks for the compliment

~Adam

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spookie In reply to linked [2004-10-05 04:06:25 +0000 UTC]

I do though.

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linked In reply to spookie [2004-10-05 04:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Well this was written in dedication of all those who do... I'm always here to talk as I said before .

~Adam

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nabulae [2004-10-04 13:32:58 +0000 UTC]

its beautiful.

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linked In reply to nabulae [2004-10-04 16:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Any specific part that you liked the most? Any way I could improve it?

~Adam

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pinkfairies [2004-10-02 01:03:48 +0000 UTC]

I love this!! I can SO relate to the exact feelings shown!! Nice one!!!

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linked In reply to pinkfairies [2004-10-02 01:06:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you took the time to read and tell me your feelings

If you need to talk about it just gimme a hollar

~Adam

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pinkfairies In reply to linked [2004-10-02 01:08:30 +0000 UTC]

Cheers! Ill be watching you i like your style! lol your a good writter

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linked In reply to pinkfairies [2004-10-02 01:14:17 +0000 UTC]

So sweet thank yo ufor the compliment

~Adam

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