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Published: 2004-12-13 11:18:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description Life rumbles along
This bumpy path

Like a cart with one wheel
It isn't the cart which you fear

Death is what you fear
Yet the cart is what I fear

Death is the easy part of life
In the cart, torment is oft

In death, if you've done good,
Torment is gone

In the cart, I've no energy left to grab
In death, I am energy with the universe at my core

In the cart turmoil is great, a sore ass is permanent
We as humans must toil and grasp for straw from our cart

We must live, for tomorrow
Though today wasn't gratifying enough

I fear living and
Not being enough,

Enough to grasp at the next bit of air
The grass is yet far away

When life flails down this path
I'd rather let it keep clumsily rumbling away

I'm content sitting here, bumping along,
Fiddling away with my only bit of straw

Afraid to try to grasp more,
Afraid to grasp it and be unable to tear it away

I'm depressed
I will live life in no grasping manner

It must all be brought to my cart,
Forcing its way into my hand

Even then I might not grasp it
I'd rather let it fall
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Comments: 6

tinypunkee [2005-04-28 22:25:07 +0000 UTC]

so were people always this depressed? or was depression created to benefit the drug companies? makes me wonder.

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linked In reply to tinypunkee [2005-04-28 23:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Depression is just an extreme sadness that wont go away because of the person's outlook on life or the situations they are in. At least that's how I look at it.

~Adam

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tinypunkee In reply to linked [2005-04-29 00:25:19 +0000 UTC]

key word: "outlook"

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nosugarjustanger [2004-12-13 13:24:40 +0000 UTC]

We must live, for tomorrow
Though today wasn't gratifying enough

great lines.. and you know im a bitch for poets and poetresses so im gonna watch you. i know i will, when i knew you were a poet.

glad i found you. continue writing..and im kinda pissed, why not many people are watching you.. you deserve more, imo.

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linked In reply to nosugarjustanger [2004-12-13 13:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Very nice of you


~Adam

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nosugarjustanger In reply to linked [2004-12-13 13:28:53 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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