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Published: 2004-03-06 04:40:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1522; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 94
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The night is long with impetuous delight,Lovers lie in heated passion.
The air is moist, the love is fear.
Distress wanes, anger nears.
He pants with lust and power,
Her love is rot, hate and fear.
She cries softly and slowly,
He pants quickly, not noticing her eyes slip away.
She thinks of her knife, hidden beside her bed post.
She longs to grab the knife, her fear is clear.
Her hand slowly nears the knife,
She hesitates: fear dominates.
His eyes move toward hers,
He sees the knife and does what she should have.
With knife in hand he fucks her more.
Her tears stream, blood flows.
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Comments: 35
very nice piece. i liked that..poem/story. very depressing very sad how it ended for her. if only he hadnt seen her looking at the knife.
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I dont like the way that you imply its the victims fault the act occured cause they didnt stop it. cause thats bullshit!
its quite a good piece of poetry in itself but I dont like it.
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Good stuff Adam, didn't know you were a poet
And I agree wholeheartedly. Hell, call me extremeist, but I wouldn't mind seeing the death penalty extended to Rapists, they're the scum of the earth.
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Hey buddy,
You know what, I tend to agree. Rapists should all die.
~Adam
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O_O
I chew my nails, so I can't exactly claw anyone's eyes out. O_O
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I understand your lethal weapon advocacy, but it's not that simple. In the heat of the moment, the o'l "deer in the headlights" kicks in for a lot of women. A woman I know dated a self-defense instructor, knew all the ropes, etc. She was attacked and was so terrified that she was unable to fight back. And if nothing else,
"Imagine if a guy broke into your room at night and he found a gun in his face after he got in, he'd leave you alone real quick."
A woman is more likely to be raped by someone she knows and trusts. Talk about a mind bender.
As for the poem itself, I haven't drawn a conclusion yet... I'll get back to you.
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That's very true but of course I deal with the smaller percentage of rapes that happen as in the situation in the poem, late night break in turns into rape. Smaller percentage but then again it still happens.
Over-simplification is my game, I tend to believe that if taught correctly women can overcome the deer in the head lights problem but that's just me 
~Adam
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Did you read the description per chance?
~Adam
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Yes, I did. That's what's the worst part of it all.
Dude, I've been raped, it wasn't the most pleasant, and to hear you blatantly say that it's practically our fault for not stopping it?!
^_^ That pisses me off, y'see that? Right there?
OH such off-pissing. Thank you for your time
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Excellent work... I think you really managed to capture the emotion... Too bad she didn't kill him when she had the chance
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Thank you
Yea I was rooting for her and then I saw that fear just overcome her and I knew it was over 
~Adam
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I am very impressed with this poem. Very emotional and you certainly caught what a woman would feel in that situation. Very thought provoking as well. Men should really think about this more like you did. Very very good job. You are certainly talented with a pen, paper, and words.
~Rae
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Thank you so much for the great compliments, I very much appreciate it.
I have to let the real credit go where its due: to God, without him, I wouldn't be able to do anything
Thank you God for allowing me to do what I do and supporting me.
Again thank you for the compliment Rae
~Adam
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Dont mention it! Just keep writing :-D
~Rae
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When I saw a poem called "Rape", I knew I had to read it. Some really intriguing visuals in here, albeit disturbing and to be perfectly candid too vivid and personal. The morality is clear though lost on many. And the struggle can be tuned, no matter the reader.
Terrifying, in greatness.
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Thank you for your awesome compliment and sorry for the delay in writing back
I have been stalking your gallery for a long time, I was wondering when you'd get around to saying hi.
~Adam
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I'm wondering if I should be flattered or semi-concerned that you've been watching me so vividly. I was gone, as you probably know, so I didn't get back to anyone. But your comment reminded me that there are people deserving of my love and affection. Not you, of course. But some people.
And people say I'm not funny
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Ah I see
And, uh hunny, they're right
~Adam
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Woah... got my heart pounding with that one. I loved the flashes of thought, or description... you really captured the heat and intensity of the situation.
My favourite part was She hesitates: fear dominates.
Completely marvelous.
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Thank you so much, your thoughts have made my.. day, week, month, all of the above 
Brilliant? Mmm.. Far from it but you rock for it anyhow
~Adam
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Fine... I was just picking out these lovely His and Hers towels (with cars and flowers on them, respectively
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Well thank you 
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I completely agree thanks for caring enough to comment
~Adam
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Wow, that is so emotional and thought-provoking. Knowing people who have been raped (including an ex) I know how it can affect them, and people around them. +fav for definite.
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You're too kind
~Adam
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distressing.. at least lol. you could put more story into it, however... this would make a cool prose.
mom and dad always taught me to fight for my life... i believe they would have more damage done at the end of it, than me.
they'd be one sorry looking person after i was done ripping into them.
julie
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I originally had it about twice that long with much more of a prose-etry feeling to the peice and well, it just wasn't enough information in the point of the peice to warrant that length
I love you baby
~Adam
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