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Published: 2013-08-18 00:44:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1646; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 0
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Squirrelpaw and Leafpaw,who just became apprentices as shown in the picture ^w^I really wish this had a background. I suck at backgrounds :/ They seem to take forever to do..
Anyways please crit !! because I've never had a proper one before ;7; and I would like to know what I should work on c:
I know the eyes look like the need more lighting- I'll try to give them a bit more next time >~<
Squirrelpaw & Leafpaw © Erin Hunter
If you want to use this for a tribute video or something PLEASE ASK for permission and send me a link to your result
Not that anyone has taken my art for videos anyway [as far as I know]
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Excellent job! These two look adorable. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
There are a few things that I'll point out to you here that you can fix in future drawings. One would be that their expressions, although very appealing and cute, both look almost exactly the same! It isn't as exciting as it would be if they had different happy-looking expressions.
Also, I love the way you did the eyes. Soooo adorable. <3 Making their eyes and heads this large really does make them look like kittens! But, if I were you, I'd add another spot of light on each eye near the bottom. That would bring out a livelier expression, too!
Overall, great work! These two look like they're having a lot of fun. ^^ Your style is pleasant and cute; I love it!
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O MY GOSH I COULD JUST DIE OF CUTENESS HERE - faints -
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AWW MAH GOD! MUST CUDDLE WITTLY KITTIES! ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE! ^_^
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