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Published: 2012-12-01 13:12:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 5373; Favourites: 388; Downloads: 163
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Description macro shot of a feather... aww. there must be broken wings out there~



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Comments: 81

photo-exile [2012-12-02 20:07:59 +0000 UTC]

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For sure that's great photo. It really catches people's eyes and in some way is kinda abstract.

It hasn't got any disturbing elements and composition is really well made but I think that maybe square one would be even better for this shoot, however, I could be wrong one.

There's not a lot of colours but it's good because it emphasise simplicity in this photo.

I admire you for making such amazing depht of field. It ends in really good moment not giving impression of fuzzy picture I belive it was the hardest part.


Everything in this picture is wonderful and you showed real skills. You have power to make something common into extraordinary thing.

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lisarime In reply to photo-exile [2012-12-02 20:48:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for this amazing critique! I really love it ♥

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photo-exile In reply to lisarime [2012-12-02 21:15:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. It was first time I written one Anyway I hope I wasn't too chaotic

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lisarime In reply to photo-exile [2012-12-02 21:16:09 +0000 UTC]

no, it's just awesome :3

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photo-exile In reply to lisarime [2012-12-02 21:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Awesome is your photography

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lisarime In reply to photo-exile [2012-12-02 21:28:21 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks!

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remadance [2012-12-01 22:36:32 +0000 UTC]

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In short: I love this piece! It is just attention grabbing, easy to look at and 'explore' visually, and I haven't seen a similar photos before which always makes a photo that much more fantastic.

The tones in the photo blend very well - there is no awkward parts in the photograph anywhere in my opinion. The fact that it goes from the pale yellow to the deep dark purple is not something I would have liked mentally but seeing it here defiantly changes my mind and it really works wonderfully. It's just gorgeous.

How the feather's are broken up and going in every which way gives it a sense of movement and leaves the viewer taken the time to follow each separate section.

My only critique for this piece is to possibly have dropped the ISO, there are small little sections where I can see noise (If I look close), and since you were at a high shutter speed then the possibility of dropping the ISO and reducing the noise even further was there, however that is honestly me just trying to find something to be picky about.

If I was just browsing I would have never noticed the noise but because I'm here specifically to critique the piece for #TheCritiquable I wanted to look at every single aspect and see if there was anything you could improved on this piece.

Overall it is gorgeous - I will be clicking favorite as soon as I send this. Fantastic job capturing this gorgeous photo - I cannot wait to see more from you!

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lisarime In reply to remadance [2012-12-02 00:45:19 +0000 UTC]

Gah, I didn't expect so much appreciation *o* thank you a million times! Only thing to say: ISO is already at 200 lol

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remadance In reply to lisarime [2012-12-02 00:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I had seen that - so it was pretty low already, but I think it may have looked a bit better if the ISO was at 100 and the shutter speed was a bit lower to compensate for the darkness of a lower ISO, but like I said that was me being picky

It really doesn't look noisy - I had to get close to the screen to see it

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lisarime In reply to remadance [2012-12-02 00:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Haha okay then xD

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Angie-Pictures [2015-04-10 20:03:52 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work! Congratulations on the DD!

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TheLittleMaja [2015-03-12 20:36:45 +0000 UTC]

So simple but beautiful.

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lisarime In reply to TheLittleMaja [2015-03-17 20:05:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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JohnAshleigh [2015-03-06 00:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic shooting. Well done on the DD. Thanks for sharing.

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lisarime In reply to JohnAshleigh [2015-03-17 20:06:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much c:

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Lintu47 [2015-03-05 09:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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lisarime In reply to Lintu47 [2015-03-05 12:09:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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Lintu47 In reply to lisarime [2015-03-06 17:13:47 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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lovemyscars [2015-03-04 20:59:37 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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lisarime In reply to lovemyscars [2015-03-04 21:51:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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JenFruzz [2015-03-04 20:56:51 +0000 UTC]

I love the smokey illusion. Nice work and congratulations on your DD!

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lisarime In reply to JenFruzz [2015-03-04 21:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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nipchen [2015-03-04 20:13:15 +0000 UTC]

stunning photograph! well deserved DD

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lisarime In reply to nipchen [2015-03-04 21:51:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!

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infinityart-com [2015-03-04 19:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Hello,

We are middle school students, who are big fans of your art.

We are doing a website project for our tech class.

This is not for commercial use.

We just want to showcase some more advanced art and photography

Your art will inspire other artist joining the site.

The site is currently not published, but should be in a few weeks.

With your permission and the art of your choosing, we would like to post some.

With credit given to you, of course.

Please contact:

Infinityart.com@gmail.com

~Directors of InfinityArt.com

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lisarime In reply to infinityart-com [2015-03-04 21:45:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's unexpected! Thank you very much for this chance. I'll think about it, may you send me more information about it?

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NismyFForm [2015-03-04 18:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Lovely composition! Nice abstract feel to it too.  

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lisarime In reply to NismyFForm [2015-03-04 21:51:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3

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krasblak [2015-03-04 16:52:55 +0000 UTC]


Wow! Congratulations on the Daily Deviation recognition!

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lisarime In reply to krasblak [2015-03-04 17:25:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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Phreja [2015-03-04 13:57:14 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!   

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lisarime In reply to Phreja [2015-03-04 17:25:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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UnbearableME [2015-03-04 12:56:42 +0000 UTC]

 

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wasabiiid [2015-03-04 12:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow awesome artwork!! Any chance I could use this as a background visual for a music video on my music channel? With credit of course - www.youtube.com/wasabiiid

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lisarime In reply to wasabiiid [2015-03-04 12:24:31 +0000 UTC]

As long as you credit me and don't edit it or even remove the watermark, it is okay. Thank you very much for the appreciation!

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k-i-mm-i-e [2015-03-04 08:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Congrats, I'm happy for you.   

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lisarime In reply to k-i-mm-i-e [2015-03-04 10:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Omg, thank you so much for the suggestion! ;_; you cannot image how happy I am now for my first daily deviation *_______*

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k-i-mm-i-e In reply to lisarime [2015-03-04 12:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Well deserved.

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augenweide [2015-03-04 08:11:17 +0000 UTC]

glückwunsch !

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lisarime In reply to augenweide [2015-03-04 10:39:28 +0000 UTC]

dankeschöööööön

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Photometheus [2014-03-01 22:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful! It's like some otherworldly creature reaching out with its gentle and soft tentacles!

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lisarime In reply to Photometheus [2014-03-02 00:01:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3

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Kitsune-KunJA [2013-08-07 22:02:14 +0000 UTC]

This is exquisite.

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lisarime In reply to Kitsune-KunJA [2013-08-07 22:20:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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PoetryOD [2013-08-03 14:52:51 +0000 UTC]

Hi there I featured this piece here: Cradling Feature . I hope you like it

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lisarime In reply to PoetryOD [2013-08-03 18:03:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ;O; <3

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cool-a-llama [2013-01-12 22:06:21 +0000 UTC]

. Can't fault it. Love the abstract feel to it

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lisarime In reply to cool-a-llama [2013-01-12 22:12:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks (:

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cool-a-llama In reply to lisarime [2013-01-12 22:17:36 +0000 UTC]

S'ok
Fancy doing a watch swap?

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lisarime In reply to cool-a-llama [2013-01-12 22:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Normally I don't do something like that, I only watch deviants who are really outstanding to me. But I really appreciate it if you'd watch me!

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