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Description I felt like drawing one of the new trainers from Unova, Kamitsure.

And I know she doesn't use a Jolteon, but I thought it would look cool if she had one. Plus I didn't want to draw Emonga.

I think I did well on this picture, but I'm fine for any criticism.

Programs Used: Paint.NET
Kamitsure belongs to Pokemon
Art by me
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Comments: 16

cloudmuffin727 [2010-11-30 08:19:54 +0000 UTC]

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My first critique xP Here's I go...

First of all, in terms of colours and anatomy on her, you've done pretty well on it. I like - scratch that - LOVE the way she poses; it give a bit of some impact to the image ^^ The shadow behind her is pretty much what makes the artwork have that "CHALLENGER APPROACHING (DUN DUN DUNNN!)" feeling e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> You've also gave the Jolteon that perfect, fierce emotion on its face, which adds up the artwork perfectly.

There is a bit you need to work on though, such as Jolteon's pose. It's alright, but the legs at the back aren't really right. Considering that it's most likely to be standing, I guess you might need to make it look like it by making it a bit straighter. Regardless, the artwork is still find ;u;

This is my first critique so I just hope it's not that bad ^^'

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LiteralNovice In reply to cloudmuffin727 [2010-11-30 20:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was not surprised I was going to get something on Jolteon, I actually added it in as a last minute idea. And yeah, it was kinda hard to pose it.

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Alex800 [2011-04-22 12:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job on this! Did you use a tablet?

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LiteralNovice In reply to Alex800 [2011-04-22 14:01:23 +0000 UTC]

No, not for this one. Just used a mouse.

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Alex800 In reply to LiteralNovice [2011-04-22 18:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Really? Great job then :3

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Negaishipping-King [2010-12-24 15:24:26 +0000 UTC]

really good. please make an Iris and a Negaishipping Picture too, because i loooooove your style!!

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LiteralNovice In reply to Negaishipping-King [2010-12-24 23:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. I'll see what I can do.

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Negaishipping-King In reply to LiteralNovice [2010-12-25 13:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes, thats very nice from you! Im looking forward to see it on deviantart soon! Happy holidays!

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NuciComs [2010-12-12 06:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Nice job!

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Masterge77 [2010-12-03 01:54:10 +0000 UTC]

I wish she had a Jolteon, or at least a Bachuru, since the ENTIRE gym only uses 3 Pokemon, an electric Zebra, a bigger electric Zebra, and an annoying squirrel

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Thongchan [2010-12-02 00:52:00 +0000 UTC]

she's awesome!

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LiteralNovice In reply to Thongchan [2010-12-02 04:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Yesh, she is, she is.

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MagicFishies [2010-12-01 23:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Cool! Wonderous job!

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lucky88duck [2010-11-29 21:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really good! Nice use of the curve tool XD I can't work it, I always go free hand XD

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LiteralNovice In reply to lucky88duck [2010-11-30 20:00:54 +0000 UTC]

Awww~ Thanks, I have trouble going free hand meself! XD

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lucky88duck In reply to LiteralNovice [2010-11-30 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just don't have the patience to use the curve tool

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