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I felt like drawing one of the new trainers from Unova, Kamitsure.And I know she doesn't use a Jolteon, but I thought it would look cool if she had one. Plus I didn't want to draw Emonga.
I think I did well on this picture, but I'm fine for any criticism.
Programs Used: Paint.NET
Kamitsure belongs to Pokemon
Art by me
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Comments: 16
cloudmuffin727 [2010-11-30 08:19:54 +0000 UTC]
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My first critique xP Here's I go...
First of all, in terms of colours and anatomy on her, you've done pretty well on it. I like - scratch that - LOVE the way she poses; it give a bit of some impact to the image ^^ The shadow behind her is pretty much what makes the artwork have that "CHALLENGER APPROACHING (DUN DUN DUNNN!)" feeling e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Big Grin)"/> You've also gave the Jolteon that perfect, fierce emotion on its face, which adds up the artwork perfectly.
There is a bit you need to work on though, such as Jolteon's pose. It's alright, but the legs at the back aren't really right. Considering that it's most likely to be standing, I guess you might need to make it look like it by making it a bit straighter. Regardless, the artwork is still find ;u;
This is my first critique so I just hope it's not that bad ^^'
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LiteralNovice In reply to cloudmuffin727 [2010-11-30 20:00:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I was not surprised I was going to get something on Jolteon, I actually added it in as a last minute idea. And yeah, it was kinda hard to pose it.
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LiteralNovice In reply to Alex800 [2011-04-22 14:01:23 +0000 UTC]
No, not for this one. Just used a mouse.
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Negaishipping-King [2010-12-24 15:24:26 +0000 UTC]
really good. please make an Iris and a Negaishipping Picture too, because i loooooove your style!!
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LiteralNovice In reply to Negaishipping-King [2010-12-24 23:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Hmm. I'll see what I can do.
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Negaishipping-King In reply to LiteralNovice [2010-12-25 13:02:09 +0000 UTC]
Yes, thats very nice from you! Im looking forward to see it on deviantart soon! Happy holidays!
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Masterge77 [2010-12-03 01:54:10 +0000 UTC]
I wish she had a Jolteon, or at least a Bachuru, since the ENTIRE gym only uses 3 Pokemon, an electric Zebra, a bigger electric Zebra, and an annoying squirrel
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lucky88duck [2010-11-29 21:00:34 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is really good! Nice use of the curve tool XD I can't work it, I always go free hand XD
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LiteralNovice In reply to lucky88duck [2010-11-30 20:00:54 +0000 UTC]
Awww~ Thanks, I have trouble going free hand meself! XD
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lucky88duck In reply to LiteralNovice [2010-11-30 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I just don't have the patience to use the curve tool
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