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"Octavia! Octavia can you hear me!? I need you to answer me!"Octavia's hearing was muffled. The voice that was calling out to her seemed very distant, deafened by the roar of an intense pounding in her head. She moved slightly, but her body felt heavy.
'W-What…in Equestria happened…answer who now?' She thought, slowly regaining her senses.
"Oh thank Celestia she's waking up! Someone get her a glass of water!" The voice was deep and husky.
'Must belong to a stallion…' She thought, her mind swimming. She slowly opened her eyes, immediately shutting them again. The light on the ceiling was blinding. She sluggishly raised a foreleg over her face, covering her eyes as she slowly opened them once more.
"How are you feeling, Octavia?" The husky voice asked again. When she focused her eyes on the source, she saw it was her doctor.
Doctor Haysworth was a short, but solidly built Earth pony. His coat was a pristine white with a light orange mane, bright green eyes and a stethoscope for a cutie mark.
"…I feel like I was just hit with a sack of bricks…" She replied weakly, two aides slowly helping her back to her hooves.
"You gave us quite the fright. It's not often that we have patients collapsing in our examination rooms." He chuckled.
"I am also terribly sorry for not telling you the news. I had a vaccine to administer to an elderly patient, so I was in a bit of a hurry."
"It…is no trouble at all, Doctor…no trouble at all…" She said, her voice much softer than normal.
"…So it's true then…I'm pregnant?" She asked timidly, hoping against hope that what had caused her to faint was simply a joke.
"Yes, you are, Octavia. You're going to be the proud mother of a colt or a filly." He smiled warmly.
"Now, judging by the amniotic fluids found in your blood, I can state that the foal is about three weeks along, and should be due sometime next September." He said, jotting it down on his clipboard.
"I cannot begin to fathom how this happened…I have not had any "relations" with a stallion…" A shocking discovery overcame her.
"…Does that mean…the foal…is VINYL'S?!" She shrieked, her pupils shrinking to pinpricks and her tail fraying out like she had been hit with a bolt of lightning.
"Excuse me? Did you say you had NOT had relations with a stallion? Astounding! This- this is remarkable!" The doctor said, a look of excitement filling his eyes.
"Octavia, do you know what this means?! You're the first mare to have a magically-induced conception in decades!" He said.
"This is amazing news! I've never delivered a foal created through magic! That'll show that old coot of a father that I'm good at what I do!" He sneered. The other nurses and assistants gave the doctor a worried expression.
The doctor blushed, and cleared his throat. "Again Octavia, I give you my most sincere congratulations!"
"I-I do not understand. What do you mean, 'magically-induced conception?' Is that even possible?" She asked, unable to put the pieces together.
She knew, as any other pony, how foals were made. It was usually between a mare and a stallion, they had intercourse, and they conceived, simple as that. She then sighed.
'It just HAD to be me.' She grumbled. She then began to think.
"Wait…you said that the foal was three weeks along?" She asked, curious.
"Yes, I did. Why?" The doctor asked in return.
"…No reason." She said, her expression becoming stoic as she remembered back to three weeks prior; the last time her and Vinyl had gotten "intimate."
She then pondered how she was going to evade the law once she got a hold of Vinyl.
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Comments: 6
KawaiiFeather [2011-11-27 16:42:27 +0000 UTC]
Omg. Hope Vinyl can run faster then a furious, pregnant mare...
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suika2344 In reply to dlazerous [2011-11-04 04:06:23 +0000 UTC]
or Equestria is like canada
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EveMonsta [2011-10-30 08:35:37 +0000 UTC]
I can tell this is gonna be an interesting story I can't wait to see what happens
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TheWerewolfNobody [2011-10-30 02:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Read this quickly before I got to work on some assignments for school, so I can't proof-read it yet, but just a couple things
- Perhaps instead of each chapter having the same 'Two's Company, Three's a Crowd' for each chapter, specify what chapter it is - maybe shorten the deviation title to 'Three's a Crowd' so the chapter number can fit in... I thought you'd re-uploaded the prologue when I checked on my phone earlier xD;
- If you'd like me to pre-read, maybe send me the story in a note so I can take a look at it before it gets posted? I know what it's like to want to have the next chapter up desperately, but good things come with time 8D
Once I get my assignments half done (shouldn't take more than an hour or so) I'll get to work reading it more thoroughly - but from the quick read I had, it was quite amusing xD
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