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littlebluewolf — Dyll trot fin
Published: 2004-11-25 08:28:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 2186; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 1252
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5 hours and 5 new frames......OMG!The head is still jerky, another frame or two would have made it look a little smoother, but I aint touching this again.
It's been screwed about with enough and I'd far rather start over
Critique discouraged as this ones not getting anything else done to it (I dont want people wasting their time unless they really want to
).
*edit*
Played about with that front leg (the one that was spazing out).
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Your quite an impressive artest. I've been browseing through your work and your characature (sp?) horses are adorable. I especially like this horse and his walk, it's fantastic.
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Its a really good horse run... are you an animation student.. or just an animator.. ? ya the head is the only thing thats a bit off... but its really good
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Thankyou
Im neither, Im only doing it for fun
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thats a rad ass job then... last year I was in classical animation and we had to do a horse run... it was hell to say the least
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wow, amazing! Do all the gaits! Walk trot, canter and gallop! and maybe pace...
What a cute horsey! ^^
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Once I get this trot one sorted (I cant stand seeing all the errors >.< ) I might have a go at my most dreaded gait... the walk XD
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Yep, you'd never figure, but walk is reallllly hard... to draw i mean. ^^
Keep up the good work!
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Look at him go! since it's only animated at the segments of major change, it's a bit much to try and say it's spazzing out, becuase I'm sure if it were your choice to do that much for it , you would pull it off quite well. ^^ My only bug about it is that his tail seems a little smaller than usual... aside from that, you got it all on the dot, he blinks, he sways, everything!
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Ive actually been playing about with it some more (bad blue, bad bad!) so I now have a version where his legs are correct (it was a bugger to do ;_
Aye I'm thinking of keeping his tail this length
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Now for the lope! Dyll must lope! And he needs last name.. why not Pickles? Dyll Pickles. =]
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I like it. Hehee, he is a cute guy. I still like the folds in the skin.
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mmm looks nice but you missed a frame on the right back leg. and her trot using her right limbs are higher than the left one. looks really hard.
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Aye Im going to add the last few frames to make his legs look smoother
The shortness is merely an error >.< (I suck I know >.< )
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you shouldn't do this with the eye o.o
that makes it more random /:
but the trot is great ... he may is a little bit slow at it @.@
as if he'll fall asleep in the next moment o,o
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Yeah I messed up the head generally >.< (I really dont understand WHY I made his head turn like that in the first place ;_; ).
The speed I'll play about with later (as Ive only just figured out how to set the frame reat in Flash XD).
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they are in 12 fps now
go hiher and it will be quicklier ((:
you find it under the scene
it's call properties - in the right you can controll the fps (((:
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Arg.. crapdamnit.. I'll fix that now 
Thankies muchly
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He is when I click the download button thingy. Either that or you fixed it REALLY fast...
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You're not touching it again? I can tell you what's wrong with it. O.o;
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Well... I might do actually, as it's really bugging me XD
If you've got any tips, I'd love to hear them
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Well when the back right leg and front left leg touches the ground, they automatically snap to the back.. Not sure if that wasn't noticed or you just didn't finish it..
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Ahh you mean the way they sort of flip up a bit?
That was intentional :3 (just to make him look more floppy), though I just realized I've missed it out on the other two legs -__-.
Does the flippy feet make it look 'off'? If so, I'll not make them that way again
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No.. It's not that.. look at the walk cycle.. Notice how one pair of legs has like 5 frames where they're on the ground, and the other pair of legs has like TWO frames when they're on the ground? They kind of snap from the front to the back..
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OH!!!
Now I CAN explain that
When I added the new frames I concentraited on the first few leg sequences. *stupid*
Ok, now I HAVE to fix it.
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This is awsome. I wish i had the patience for animations. Very adorable.
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Thankyou
I have no patience whatsoever, so Im certain you'd be able to make a better job of it than me!
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Aww, very cute little character, colors are almost identical to my mule char, which is kinda kool/strange.
And I love the chubbiness, he looks so huggable. ^-^
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Thankies very much ^_^
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the right hind leg jumps over few frames if you look at it carefully.
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Those three frames are moving too fast (it look sok on the .gif).
I'll have a go at fixing it later
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ah yes, much better colored! Great work, he has a nice smooth trot to him now! Great work!!!
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