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Published: 2004-06-08 16:38:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 73
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Description See me dance,
I am here,
and I smell your memory.

Taste the secret that we share,
hush my love, a little longer
a little,
twist and spin, I upon your web
caught
distraught

Alone in center pining,
within silken threads invisible shimmer,
rustled sigh and I,
am quiescent

Adore, my lord, darkened heart
and worship my tangled dance
tripwire tight,
and trapped by tendrils

Iridescent hue,
and you,
gift me this love.
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Comments: 5

invictus-muse [2004-08-01 15:54:05 +0000 UTC]

How beautifully you have laid down these
words I've overlooked your page far too
long. appologies.

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stormclouds [2004-07-16 04:29:29 +0000 UTC]

There is something about this piece that drags me into it. Perhaps it's the extremely erotic, yet underlying tone I percieve it to have. Excellent work.

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ladynyk [2004-06-09 05:47:23 +0000 UTC]

I think I'm wearing off on you *wink*

Stunning. A wonderful transmission of emotion to art.

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littledeer In reply to ladynyk [2004-06-09 13:01:15 +0000 UTC]

You Faved me!!! *kiss* now I know I'm getting better.. and yeah.. there is a lot of recent influence to better writing.. so .. in a way.. it really is you rubbing off on me.. hmm.. writing by osmosis?..

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codebluessm [2004-06-08 23:28:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, great use of vocabulary here! I can see that you and sihn have similar writing styles. Great work Chelle!

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