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Published: 2017-07-28 17:08:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 285; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Hello, there. It has been a long time since I draw something. After a long year in school and 3 university exams, I restarted drawing.(I won the faculty of medicane! I will be a doctor! )
I used Graphite pencils, a simple eraser and color blenders. I hope you like my artwork.
There are some mistakes that I can recognise but unfortunately couldn't figured out. Please help me to fix my mistakes of my artwork by commenting me about your opinions in re my art.
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Charcoal! You've got to be kidding me! You get such great detail on this portrait, it's really great! The crispness of the eyes, alone, is really spectacular. The face and expression are both really awesome as well—I love the freckles and how you spaced them. A lot of people forget that freckles don't only reside on the cheeks, so awesome job there! Lastly, masterful work with the shading of the hair across the face. Sometimes people go too heavy with this shadow, but you kept it at a great shadow value. Excellent work! Can't wait to see what you continue to make!
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad to read such a beautiful comment. I'm flattered. I mostly love eyes on my charcoals. These days I'm trying to add more emotion to glances when I draw. I usually draw anime figures with colored pencils but charcoal has always been a passion for me. It took a lot of time to draw her, nowadays I can draw portraits faster but only with less details. I may think about sharing some of my new charcoals of people I love. I'm so happy, thanks for this beautiful comment.
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Thank you so much for your support!
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I really wish I was as good as you... but I won´t have very much time for drawing during School time now...having to go to Munich every day by Train now (60 km) takes some time...
Anyway...I love the hair *-* It just Looks so nice and realistic, also the eyes...gorgeous!
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You praise me. I'm very flattered. Thank you so so much. That's very kind of you.
I'm trying to preparing my suitcase to go to university, nowadays. I think I'll continue drawing when I went and started to university (which is 18th September!!!! The days passed so fast, I couldn't even rest!!!) . So I will start to live in a place that's 140 km's far from my hometown and family for my education. But I'll travel back every Friday to Sunday to see my family or they'll come to see me every Friday to Sunday.
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140 km....I don´t think I would be able to go that far away from my hometown and my Family. Even if you can see them every Weekend...I just couldn´t do that. But I hope everything will work out smoothly for you ^^
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This looks fantastic!! I love how you did the eyes (they look so alive!!) and the freckles, and the shadows, and the smile is so happy! 
Since you asked: I don't see any mistakes, but one thing you could try is not drawing every single hair strand - just shadows and highlights on each group/chunk like you've done, and then only a few strands in each to indicate texture. See how you'd like it that way. 
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Hello! Thank you very much for your beautiful comment! Reading such a great and talented artist as yours comment made me so happy. I personally liked the eyes and freckles on her cheeks, too. I will try to draw hairs as you said; more shadow and light, less strands. Thank you so much for your great compliments!
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Awww you're welcome! 
Just on the main body of hair, though (like within each chunk of hair). The loose strands over her face and on the ends are perfect!
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You're very very welcome I understand which part of the hair you suggested me to use more lightening and less strands while drawing. Next time I will try.
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Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it.
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Thank you so much.
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