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Published: 2012-12-02 01:17:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 974; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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Description The high altitude carrier soared above the clouds in a low orbit above Mobius, out of sight of enemy surveillance, and out of range of any artillery that may pose a threat to it. In the cockpit, Farah-Se checked her coordinates. She was nearing the drop point. Farah-Se contacted Gien-Nu to tell her the news.
"Coming up on drop site. Payload delivery in 30 seconds. Have fun."
"Roger that," came Gien-Nu's reply.
Farah-Se punched a few buttons, opening the bomb bay doors. A green light lit up on her console, indicating that she was above the target area, and Farah-Se released her cargo.
"Drop pods released."

Two objects emerged from the belly of the carrier. Shaped like ugly metal teardrops, they plummeted towards the ground, quickly reaching terminal velocity. Inside one of the pods, Kiera closed her eyes and tried to keep her lunch down as it threatened to repeat on her. It was the first time she had traveled by drop pod, although 'travel' was a bit deceiving. Falling was a much more appropriate word. Strapped into a harness, she had no control over what was happening, and that frightened her the most. She had heard stories of drop pods malfunctioning, the retro thrusters designed to slow them for landing having failed, resulting in the pods being crushed upon impact with the ground. With her were four other members of the 14th Assault Platoon: Ali-Co, Miki-Ce, Seenas, and Meri-Sa. Both Seenas and Meri-Sa seemed to share Kiera's sense of trepidation. Ali-Co and Miki-Ce, however, acted differently. Ali-Co had managed to smuggle a small radio into the pod, and both of the veteran troopers were singing their lungs out as rock music filled the confines of the drop pod.
"I'm on a highway to Hell! Highway to Hell! I'm on a highway to Hell! Highway to Hell!…"
"Those two are crazy," Seenas said, craning his head around to look at Kiera.
Kiera simply nodded.

Why did it have to be a deep strike mission. Damn drop pod insertions… I hate them!
Kiara-Ne's bad mood grew worse as the 14th fell to earth. With her in her pod were Gien-Nu, Shackler, Zippa and Cyclan. Kiara-Ne's stomach turned somersaults as the pod rocked with turbulence, and she growled. Gien-Nu, despite looking a bit green, seemed to be coping with the drop, occupying herself with organizing the final tactical information they would need when they landed. Cyclan meanwhile looked nervous. Harnessed next to Zippa, he couldn't take his eyes off her hands. Small flames enveloped them, showing her nervousness at the drop, and eagerness to engage the enemy. Another patch of turbulence shook the drop pod, and the flames around Zippa's hands flared up. Cyclan worried that if Zippa got too jumpy, she might accidentally fry them all with her flames.

"What on Mobius was that?" Meri-Sa cried out as the drop pod shook violently.
Ali-Co laughed.
"Enemy artillery I'd say," she told the medic. "We're probably in range of their guns."
"Can they hit us?" Kiera asked
"Only if they're lucky," Ali-Co replied. "Hopefully we're falling too fast for them to get a lock on."

Kiara-Ne grit her teeth as the drop pod was tossed about. The muffled sounds of explosions could just be heard coming from outside.
"Status," she demanded of Gien-Nu.
The communications officer checked her readouts.
"Coming under enemy fire," she replied. "It's only going to get heavier from here, Ma'am."
"Ground support?"
"Syntar reports infiltration has been successful, and he's in position. Deimos has our armor support in place, and will link up once we've made landfall in T-minus 50 seconds."
"It's about time," Zippa growled. "I hate feeling this exposed."
"Alright," Kiara-Ne said "Everyone get ready for combat. Shackler?"
The sounds of snoring answered her, and Kiara-Ne sighed.
"Will someone wake up Shackler."
Cyclan nodded, and managed to elbow his fellow trooped, waking him up from his nap.
"Huh? What?"
Shackler looked about and yawned.
"We on the ground yet?" he asked
"30 seconds," Gien-Nu replied.
Shackler smiled, looking forward to the coming fight.

Ali-Co turned off the music as the information that they were about to land filtered through. With twenty seconds left before impact, the drop pod's retro thrusters burst into life, slowing the decent of the pods. The harnesses that held the members of the 14th reacted to the sudden deceleration, air pockets in them inflating slightly to help cushion the shock on the troopers. Kiera breathed a sigh of relief. There was a heavy thud, and the pod tilted suddenly as it crashed into the ground. A moment passed, and then the harnesses released, and the sides of the drop pod peeled open to allow the legionnaires to disembark.

Grabbing their weapons from the overhead compartments, the 14th charged forth. Kiara-Ne glanced across at the other drop pod, relived that they had also made it safely to the ground. Around the drop site, the enemy were in disarray with the assault platoon's violent arrival. As her troops fanned out to secure the area, Kiara-ne smiled. The enemy never knew what hit them...
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Comments: 34

JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-20 22:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Iceheart: That is why you always bring the AA! *Gets on the radio.* Salamander group 15 are you all asleep?
(I am presuming they are attacking the AMA. )

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 05:06:04 +0000 UTC]

(Any generic enemy. It could be the AMA though)


Kiara: When we hit the ground, fan out and secure the area!

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 10:03:14 +0000 UTC]

(Ok.)

Iceheart: *Gets on a radio.* Search the area, they must have landed close.

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 12:11:23 +0000 UTC]

(Kiara draws her gun and lobs a couple of smoke bombs

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 19:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Trooper: Look Field Leaser smoke!

Iceheart: Head towards that direction.

(She is going to make a decoy isn't she?)

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 22:02:13 +0000 UTC]

(Kiara looks for targets through the smoke, her bionic eye seeing through the cover easily)


(Possibly )

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 22:07:36 +0000 UTC]

*AMA troopers take position behind the trees.*

(Ok. Alerting where she is via smoke may not the best tactic.)

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 22:45:47 +0000 UTC]

(kiara spots a heat signature)



(it can be effective tactic, and is used in modern warfare as cover. The smoke is thick and black. It spreads out covering a wide area. The enemy can't see through it, but with her bionic eye, Kiara can see easily)

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 22:47:33 +0000 UTC]

*The troopers hide.*

(Yes, but it can give away a position, not to mention make it a improved marker to fire long range weapons or aircraft for the enemy.)

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 23:06:31 +0000 UTC]

(Kiara fires at the heat signature)

(In this case though, the position already known, they just dropped down in giant metal 'bombs' after all )

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 23:09:46 +0000 UTC]

*A trooper gets killed.*

Trooper: Open fire!

*A spray of plasma blast comes towards her.*

(Yes, but unless they move, Iceheart can send in air support to target the "marked" area.)

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 23:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Kiara moves quickly, lobing more smoke bombs



(But then he's also attacking his own troops. The deep strike puts the legion in behind/on enemy lines, and into immediate close combat)

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 23:26:21 +0000 UTC]

*The troopers put on gas masks.*

(Yes, but the hardy 310 Raven can fly over and pick off soldiers with its machine guns.Their HUD labels friendlies electronically.)

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 23:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Kiara slips in behind a trooper and clubs him across the back of the neck



(Understood. It would have to mean that the ama would still need to disengage to a degree)

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 23:42:45 +0000 UTC]

*The trooper fires his gun in the air before knocking unconscious.*

(Yes, the ground forces.)

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-21 23:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Kiara glances are to see who else saw the shot

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-21 23:52:26 +0000 UTC]

*Troops fire in that direction.*

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-22 00:09:34 +0000 UTC]

(Kiara scrambles through the smoke)

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-22 00:15:59 +0000 UTC]

*The troopers get out of the smoke.*

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-22 00:31:36 +0000 UTC]

Kiara dives behind cover. she start picking off the troopers emerging from the smoke

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-22 00:36:31 +0000 UTC]

One of the troopers calls in Iceheart: *Sir we are under attack! Hostiles are unidentifiable!"

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-22 01:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Kiara rummages through her belt pouches and pulls out a MP-404 concussion grenade. She lobs it at the AMA lines

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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2013-03-22 10:05:13 +0000 UTC]

*The soldiers seem to have retreated.*

Iceheart: Send in a gun runner team.

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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2013-03-22 10:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Kiara waits, watching cautiously

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bawls34 [2012-12-02 01:24:27 +0000 UTC]

haha! i love it...i like seeing the 14th go into combat, they're an interesting group..and nice to see farah-se finally making her appearence.

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lizardman22 In reply to bawls34 [2012-12-02 01:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
Farah-Se came along at the right time, and i'm glad I was able to include her.
I think this shows a good blend of how the different members react to a situation like this. The younger/newer ones (Kiera, seenas, meri-sa) being nervous, while the 'veterans' (Ali-co, miki-ce, shackler, kiara-Ne) just get on with business (I can really see Ali-Co and Miki-Ce 'rocking out' during a drop, and Shacker falling asleep (A bit like Hicks in Aliens))

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bawls34 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-12-02 03:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Ali-co is actually newer to the platoon, but she's kinda a little batshit crazy when going into combat...interesting interaction between her and miki-ce, i'll have to look into that some more

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lizardman22 In reply to bawls34 [2012-12-02 04:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Really. For some reason I always saw her as more the veteran. maybe it's like you said (With her being crazy when going into combat) that makes he seem like a veteran.

That could be interesting to see (Their interaction)

This may seem like a strange question, but what's Ali-Co's sexual orientation? That RP we did with in which she interrogated Fangs, gave me the slight impression she might be bi with the way she 'flirted' with Fangs (Or was that just an interrogation technique?). It just got me a bit curious.

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Knuxtiger4 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-12-02 05:25:01 +0000 UTC]

-Comment Stalking!-

That still creeps me out. ouo;;; Sadly not the first time Fangs had ladies trying to flirt with her, happened in other RPs that I've had in the past.

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lizardman22 In reply to Knuxtiger4 [2012-12-02 05:39:28 +0000 UTC]

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bawls34 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-12-02 04:35:00 +0000 UTC]

she's homosexual, if you look back a bit you'll see cyclan had a little encounter with her during one of their platoon celebrations, it didn't pan out well

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lizardman22 In reply to bawls34 [2012-12-02 05:44:15 +0000 UTC]

No worries. thanks for filling me in.
That encounter does ring a bell.

An early idea I had for June-La was for her to be homosexual (Think Memories [link] where she kisses kiara-ne while drunk)

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sonicinterface [2012-12-02 01:24:10 +0000 UTC]

As always, not bad. But judging by that misplaced /SPAN at the end, you might want to double-check your syntax.

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lizardman22 In reply to sonicinterface [2012-12-02 01:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
And thanks for pointing that out, mate. I'll fix it up.

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