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Lizardman76 — What I'm working on now 4
Published: 2006-04-22 20:49:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 27
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First draft COMPLETED. I've noticed that from the first to final draft, my stories can fluctuate as much as 10%, so the word and page count can still drastically change. 19,000 words and 89 pages later, the revision of this first long tale of mine is through its first phase. With some more editing it should be ready for sale.But, since no one bothered to comment on the last one, I won't release any details with this one. Sorry, I even tried to point this out to people and they seemed not to care.
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"Thirteen words per sentence? That's unlucky."
"Alright - fourteen words then."
"There, you see? It was unlucky; you've got to write more words now."
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53 frikken words for one sentance?! thats CRAZY!
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The story is first-person perspective reflecting on not only his past but the current events of the story. Sometimes he describes comparisons between things, and many of those are 30+ words.
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