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Description Early from work
The day is ending
Your feet long to walk
And the road is bending.

It's been hard
You need rest from the day
But rain's come
Washed all heaviness away.

Stalking quietly
Along the street
Staring into the puddles;
Your reflection's the only person you meet.

You like it that way
Your mind gets its rest
Under dark clouds
Wandering in content loneliness.



Billa Road, Bangor, NSW // Australia // March 2007


//these words are my own//copyright elizabeth karas 2007
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Comments: 18

baRoN37 [2007-03-26 01:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Love the weather swap in the reflection

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lizelei In reply to baRoN37 [2007-03-26 05:15:49 +0000 UTC]

hehe cheers mate, I appreciate it

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MONSTA123 [2007-03-20 12:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Puddle photography great scene

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lizelei In reply to MONSTA123 [2007-03-25 06:52:23 +0000 UTC]

I love my puddles yes yes

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Zeeraphaith [2007-03-20 02:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Man that one is neat! The light and the good weather in the reflection.. oOOooo, sorry about requesting a print on your other piece that was just my wild clicking going bad.

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lizelei In reply to Zeeraphaith [2007-03-25 06:52:49 +0000 UTC]

hehe cheers mate I'm glad you liked it what did you think about the poem?

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Zeeraphaith In reply to lizelei [2007-03-26 03:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, some of the flow is a bit jagged and doesn't seem so smooth, the part of the rain washing away the heaviness is quite a cool picture. What the poem says is nice about relaxing from the hustle and bustle of every day life.

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Zeeraphaith In reply to Zeeraphaith [2007-03-26 20:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah, i see what you mean.

And you're welcome!

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lizelei In reply to Zeeraphaith [2007-03-26 05:15:23 +0000 UTC]

its not meant to be smooth, its supposed to show the disjointed thoughts of a long days work; only slowly winding down, still a little stressed but in the end relaxed.

thank you though for critiquing it i very much appreciate it

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ibikeditoru [2007-03-17 13:45:57 +0000 UTC]

really nice photo with clear reflection...

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lizelei In reply to ibikeditoru [2007-03-25 05:33:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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JudgementOfMan [2007-03-17 10:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful picture and poem sweetie still cant believe its reflected, its just...wow. The sky is amazing!

Great work love

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lizelei In reply to JudgementOfMan [2007-03-25 05:31:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks bubby haha too cute of you xxx

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JudgementOfMan In reply to lizelei [2007-03-25 18:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Hehe le blush thank you xxx

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redredwinealert [2007-03-17 10:08:21 +0000 UTC]

very nice Liz.

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lizelei In reply to redredwinealert [2007-03-24 07:12:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks Al

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deviant-sarge [2007-03-17 07:12:48 +0000 UTC]

beautiful shot hon

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lizelei In reply to deviant-sarge [2007-03-17 08:51:29 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you

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