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Published: 2012-03-08 00:05:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 715; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 2
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Contest entry forThis is Crookedjaw and Willowbreeze fishing at the bottom of the pond, with Mapleshade watchiiiiiiiing them
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Silvercat10 [2012-03-11 21:31:36 +0000 UTC]
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This peice is amazing. I love the coloring, lineart, and the fish, but your shading could use some work.
-The light from the surface is not being shown on the back fur of the cats.
- The shading could be more definite in some places, but drawing underwater scenes are hard.
The background really goes well with the bold, cartoony cats, and I also love how you did your anatomy, but the brown cat's face is a little crooked. The only other thing that I see is weird is that the orange tabby in the background looks like he's standing, but there is no ground to stand on!
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LjubaM In reply to Silvercat10 [2012-03-11 21:34:19 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you!
However, the brown cat's face is supposed to be crooked (he broke his muzzle when he was a kitten), and the orange-and-white cat is dead, but she's a spirit so she's kinda floaty
Thank you!
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LjubaM In reply to emarieh99 [2012-03-17 21:31:25 +0000 UTC]
Awww thank you! That means a lot to me!
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YuzukiTheWhiteWolf [2012-03-08 02:34:36 +0000 UTC]
So good! ; w ; Good luck! Ithinkyouwillwinthisissuperawesome!
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LjubaM In reply to YuzukiTheWhiteWolf [2012-03-08 02:52:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Haha I doubt I will win though xD
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YuzukiTheWhiteWolf In reply to LjubaM [2012-03-08 02:56:48 +0000 UTC]
FFFF- but yours is so creative! xD
Mine is just like....Cat. Flower. Grass. And something that looks like a tree or mud or a cliff something like idfk |DDD
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LjubaM In reply to YuzukiTheWhiteWolf [2012-03-08 03:07:09 +0000 UTC]
But it's so badly drawn D: I have no idea why, but lately I just haven't been able to draw well.
But yours is so nicely drawn, and I wouldn't have thought of Tiny xD
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YuzukiTheWhiteWolf In reply to LjubaM [2012-03-08 03:08:51 +0000 UTC]
Nuh, I love yours! D:
FFFF- Thanks ; u ; I thought of Tiny because I relate to him so well in so many different ways xD
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