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Published: 2010-08-31 03:16:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1436; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 12
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Derived from a little word-picture I had in my head of Severus and Hermione. Critique welcome.~ Later Edit ~
The scene finally resolved itself into one of my usual drabbles, which I'm including here, for what it's worth.
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Her lips and tongue trace over disfigured, shining skin, producing the merest wisp of feeling from nerve-deadened scar tissue patched jaggedly around his neck. He can only stand there stupidly and accept the caress, helpless to know how to respond.
He turns away, unable to watch her, ashamed that this body, this ghastly, aging collection of bones and scars, is all he has to offer herβ with her glowing beauty, her bodyβs lush promise of youth.
Then her tongue sweeps over the edge of his scar, and his body arches into the sudden onslaught of sensation from sensitive, untouched flesh.
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celticreeder [2012-01-13 02:46:04 +0000 UTC]
My hand hurst just looking at all the detailing in the curls. Wonderful image!
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snapeslover [2010-12-23 07:17:53 +0000 UTC]
So lovely! ANd your little written blurb is done so well!
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Lm-Samiko In reply to snapeslover [2010-12-24 04:08:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Drabbles are my usual fandom expression, I admit, so it's nice that both are appreciated. (^_^)
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Raiderhater1013 [2010-12-06 21:44:13 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, love how you did Hermione's hair!
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MagicAlly25 [2010-09-04 19:44:55 +0000 UTC]
Lovely style. Great picture.
Will be rec'd Sunday evening on the HGSS Digest [link]
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