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I'm really nervous about posting this but I would like to improve at art and receive some criticism and advice on how to improve, and the only way I can do that is by posting it I really hate how this turned out but hopefully I can draw her better next time
This is actually an OC that I've drawn for a long time, she is usually human but I wanted to try making her into a Sonic styled character just for fun. I would like to start drawing her more, but it's just that she is extremely personal to me. I started drawing her during some very bad times during a period of two years and the doodles of her that exist are definitely something I would not like to show, so I thought I should start drawing her properly now that I am motivated to draw again.
She is hugely inspired by Aki Akane's music, expecially Flashback. Her name is what my mother wanted my name to be, and she was the embodiment of my thoughts during awful times. Therefore I won't write a story about her or anything, as she is supposed to be my thoughts, and is me I suppose. I'd like to draw her in a more positive light now that I too am positive, but for now here she is as a Sonic styled character ^^

Any criticism or advice on how to improve is extremely appreciated!!

Description
I'm really nervous about posting this but I would like to improve at art and receive some criticism and advice on how to improve, and the only way I can do that is by posting it I really hate how this turned out but hopefully I can draw her better next time
This is actually an OC that I've drawn for a long time, she is usually human but I wanted to try making her into a Sonic styled character just for fun. I would like to start drawing her more, but it's just that she is extremely personal to me. I started drawing her during some very bad times during a period of two years and the doodles of her that exist are definitely something I would not like to show, so I thought I should start drawing her properly now that I am motivated to draw again.
She is hugely inspired by Aki Akane's music, expecially Flashback. Her name is what my mother wanted my name to be, and she was the embodiment of my thoughts during awful times. Therefore I won't write a story about her or anything, as she is supposed to be my thoughts, and is me I suppose. I'd like to draw her in a more positive light now that I too am positive, but for now here she is as a Sonic styled character ^^

Any criticism or advice on how to improve is extremely appreciated!!