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I added more details, changed Travi's sleeves (they were supposed to be red, and i paintem them blue XD), added Lightnings, detailed the sky, changed a bit the colors, i put more blood...i gave Lori a sword (still, it can't be see because of Solcanubí ''ears'')
I want moar critiques and tips, please!!

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There were many rumors here in the sky about a powerful storm taking travelers and innocent people into it's deathly claws. Of course because it's a rumor, many people didin't believe in it and between those people were Travi and Lori, one day Travi decided to fly with Lori in the sky just to have fun.

"Hey Lori! Let's fly!" Travi was very excited about the idea to fly with his best friend and play and chat and show of a little, Lori became a little surprised about the statement "Wow! Um..yeah sure!" Lori agreed and the two jumped out the platform of the plaza in Skyloft, Travi called his Loftwing and could see how his friend fall gracefully in her Loftwing, which was named Solcanubi and featured beautiful brown feathers, on the other hand Travi fell with his face in the back of his Loftwing Ventus, the impact bothered him a little but at least he landed on the cobalt blue feathers of his friend and the two set of. Suddenly while flying a large tornado came through the clouds, swallowing everything, Lori and Travi tried to back of but the realized it too late and were sucked up by it. Wind, harsh sounds and pieces of wood, metal and all kinds of things passed through the guys, they tried to evade all these obstacles to no avail and were hitted hard and each gained serious injuries. Travi quickly tried to release him and Lori from the tornado, he knew that if they last any longer they would die. "Lori!" Just as he called for his friend a big chunk of wood went right into his head "Whoa!" But he managed to evade it, finding Lori's wherebouts he reached her the best he could. "Lori! Gah! Lori! Hear me!" Lori was very frightned and it could be seen in her expression, Travi almost stayed in shock when he saw her but managed to stay focused. "Lori! We have to get out of here! Ugh! Try to follow and do like me!" Just as he say he began to move in circles around the tornado, Lori commanded Solcanubi to do the same of Ventus and soon the two were flying at lightning fast rates, Travi was trying to talk with Lori even in this rate of speed and it was really hard to do. "L..Lori! Ugh! Tr..try to..to...Gah! Ugh! Try to reach the corner! Th..that way we can get o..out! Gah! B..but we must do it now" Travi pointed Lori where to go, the nodded and followed Travi. The two reached the corner at full speed, their Loftwings barely could sustain anymore but they resisted a little more longer, just as they reached the corner of the tornado Travi pushed Ventus a little more, he really wanted to get out of that spiral mess and reunite with his friends again Skyloft so he pushed even more and maked sure that Lori was alright, finally . They got out, but looks like things weren't over as the only thing that could be seen were clouds, dark clouds to be exact and in them there were the ony thing that Skyloftian Knights fear: Skytails. Vicious bug like creatures with deadly red eyes that stalked the kids, thirst of blood and hungry they rushed to wounded kids. Travi and Lori quickly noticed and pushed their Loftwings to escape, with Lori having a sword they were able to kill some of the Skytails with Travi covering her while Wind Riding, however the Loftwings soon lost their confidence when they began seeing all the red eyes and got scared making Lori drop the sword, Travi managed to snatch it but he then Lori is hit by a Skytail and falls of Solcanubi. "Ahhhh!" Lori just screams for her life, fearing death she closed her eyes. "Noooo! Lori!" Travi couldn't do anything with Ventus and Solcanubi in a shocked state so he only had one choice: Jump from Ventus and rescue by himself Lori, without thhinking twice Travi leaped from Ventus and fell right to his friend, grabbed her and without hesitation called his Loftwing which quickly recovered from his trance and rushed to save his friends, the weight of two people on his back was very hard to take but in situations like this Ventus puts extra effort in all of his actions, Travi soon found a small island with a cave and directed Ventus and Solcanubi there. Looks like they founded a refuge just i time, Ventus and Solcanubi were too tired to continue flying and their wounds started to take effects on their performance, Travi placed Lori with Solcanubi as the comfty feathers would serve as a pillow for her, Travi took of his tunic, shirt, boots and gauntlets, stabed the sword on the dirt and lied down to get some sleep. "I really messed up today...I'm an idiot..." Travi was blaming himself because of Lori and the Loftwings, now they're hurt and scared, Ventus heared that and reached him, he layed with Travi and cuddled with hin trying to comfort him. "Thanks dude, still....we have to do something about this storm..."

History written by

ZOMFBBQ!!!
As i can see, Travi, Lori, Ventus and Solcanubí are having a bad time!

This thing took 47 Layers (Yes 47 layers) and some hours of working...
i can't draw human faces, but i like how this came out

Almost forgott it!

Travi And Ventus Belongs to
And Lori and Solcanubí Belongs to

I used these brushes:

[link]
[link] §ion=&q=cloud+brushes#/d2izh3e

Description
Edit
----------------

I added more details, changed Travi's sleeves (they were supposed to be red, and i paintem them blue XD), added Lightnings, detailed the sky, changed a bit the colors, i put more blood...i gave Lori a sword (still, it can't be see because of Solcanubí ''ears'')
I want moar critiques and tips, please!!

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There were many rumors here in the sky about a powerful storm taking travelers and innocent people into it's deathly claws. Of course because it's a rumor, many people didin't believe in it and between those people were Travi and Lori, one day Travi decided to fly with Lori in the sky just to have fun.

"Hey Lori! Let's fly!" Travi was very excited about the idea to fly with his best friend and play and chat and show of a little, Lori became a little surprised about the statement "Wow! Um..yeah sure!" Lori agreed and the two jumped out the platform of the plaza in Skyloft, Travi called his Loftwing and could see how his friend fall gracefully in her Loftwing, which was named Solcanubi and featured beautiful brown feathers, on the other hand Travi fell with his face in the back of his Loftwing Ventus, the impact bothered him a little but at least he landed on the cobalt blue feathers of his friend and the two set of. Suddenly while flying a large tornado came through the clouds, swallowing everything, Lori and Travi tried to back of but the realized it too late and were sucked up by it. Wind, harsh sounds and pieces of wood, metal and all kinds of things passed through the guys, they tried to evade all these obstacles to no avail and were hitted hard and each gained serious injuries. Travi quickly tried to release him and Lori from the tornado, he knew that if they last any longer they would die. "Lori!" Just as he called for his friend a big chunk of wood went right into his head "Whoa!" But he managed to evade it, finding Lori's wherebouts he reached her the best he could. "Lori! Gah! Lori! Hear me!" Lori was very frightned and it could be seen in her expression, Travi almost stayed in shock when he saw her but managed to stay focused. "Lori! We have to get out of here! Ugh! Try to follow and do like me!" Just as he say he began to move in circles around the tornado, Lori commanded Solcanubi to do the same of Ventus and soon the two were flying at lightning fast rates, Travi was trying to talk with Lori even in this rate of speed and it was really hard to do. "L..Lori! Ugh! Tr..try to..to...Gah! Ugh! Try to reach the corner! Th..that way we can get o..out! Gah! B..but we must do it now" Travi pointed Lori where to go, the nodded and followed Travi. The two reached the corner at full speed, their Loftwings barely could sustain anymore but they resisted a little more longer, just as they reached the corner of the tornado Travi pushed Ventus a little more, he really wanted to get out of that spiral mess and reunite with his friends again Skyloft so he pushed even more and maked sure that Lori was alright, finally . They got out, but looks like things weren't over as the only thing that could be seen were clouds, dark clouds to be exact and in them there were the ony thing that Skyloftian Knights fear: Skytails. Vicious bug like creatures with deadly red eyes that stalked the kids, thirst of blood and hungry they rushed to wounded kids. Travi and Lori quickly noticed and pushed their Loftwings to escape, with Lori having a sword they were able to kill some of the Skytails with Travi covering her while Wind Riding, however the Loftwings soon lost their confidence when they began seeing all the red eyes and got scared making Lori drop the sword, Travi managed to snatch it but he then Lori is hit by a Skytail and falls of Solcanubi. "Ahhhh!" Lori just screams for her life, fearing death she closed her eyes. "Noooo! Lori!" Travi couldn't do anything with Ventus and Solcanubi in a shocked state so he only had one choice: Jump from Ventus and rescue by himself Lori, without thhinking twice Travi leaped from Ventus and fell right to his friend, grabbed her and without hesitation called his Loftwing which quickly recovered from his trance and rushed to save his friends, the weight of two people on his back was very hard to take but in situations like this Ventus puts extra effort in all of his actions, Travi soon found a small island with a cave and directed Ventus and Solcanubi there. Looks like they founded a refuge just i time, Ventus and Solcanubi were too tired to continue flying and their wounds started to take effects on their performance, Travi placed Lori with Solcanubi as the comfty feathers would serve as a pillow for her, Travi took of his tunic, shirt, boots and gauntlets, stabed the sword on the dirt and lied down to get some sleep. "I really messed up today...I'm an idiot..." Travi was blaming himself because of Lori and the Loftwings, now they're hurt and scared, Ventus heared that and reached him, he layed with Travi and cuddled with hin trying to comfort him. "Thanks dude, still....we have to do something about this storm..."

History written by

ZOMFBBQ!!!
As i can see, Travi, Lori, Ventus and Solcanubí are having a bad time!

This thing took 47 Layers (Yes 47 layers) and some hours of working...
i can't draw human faces, but i like how this came out

Almost forgott it!

Travi And Ventus Belongs to
And Lori and Solcanubí Belongs to

I used these brushes:

[link]
[link] §ion=&q=cloud+brushes#/d2izh3e