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logicfun — Silver Surfer and Galactus ink
Published: 2011-04-21 10:21:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 5199; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 364
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Pencil by [link]Digital ink with photoshop
You can use it to color,just ask permission
My color [link]
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I'm shooting at this kind of blind so bare with me since I don't know what program you used or what your process is. So I'm just going to go on what it looks like you did and critique that. So if I'm way off, just disregard what I'm saying. LOL
It looks like you adjusted the levels and then spotted the blacks and worked on the characters with out touching the hatch work on the planet or the in Galactus abdomen. If that's the case here's the thing. First off, adjusting the levels is being called digital inking and its not. Its more of photo manipulation. That being said, if that's what you chose to do, all good. But on hatch work areas and a few other spots I'm noticing, your getting dirty look from where the penciler smudged the pencils. On something like this where the penciler put down so much lead, its going to happen. So try going in and dodging out some of those smudged areas. Then go back over it zoomed in and burn the hatch work back up so that you get a dark clean line and it gets rid of the smudges. Just makes for a cleaner and tighter looking piece and really lets the hatch work come out. I mean lets face it, if the penciler spent the time to put it in, its our job to do the same.
Aside from that, I would just say watch some of your holding lines around the asteroids and Galactus hands. Beefing those up a little will push his hand forward and put those objects in the correct plain in space. Such as the asteriod at this stomach. Bulk up those holding lines a bit and it will push Galactus back. Thats really about it. Watch holding lines to create some depth cause some of the things seem to be getting mixed together and clean up the page a bit more around the hatch work.
Outside of that, its a solid piece man. Great job for sure. Keep up the good work.
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i loved this piece so much I had a go at coloring it [link]
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Nice Inks gave some color myself 
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Sorry I can't give you an "official" critique, but from what I can see, you've got a solid inking technique. The textures are rich and well choreographed. In my eyes, it loses a bit of it's lustre around the head and abs. Not to say that it isn't detailed, but in the head area there are some perspective/anatomy (even though it's a creature larger than a planet) issues. The neck's thickness throws me and so does his right antenna.
Surfer looks sweet by the way ^_^
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