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logitechk1 — The Power of Propaganda: Chapter 6, The Armistice [NSFW]
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Description “Oh sir, no. I can’t accept these chocolates. You don’t want a slim girl like me to outgrow her clothes now do you?”
“Nonesense a girl like you has beauty to spare. Besides these chocolates support the war effort!”
“In that case I guess I’ll have one, but I will do some extra drills tomorrow”
*Audience laughing*
~Tanja van Dijk in a short commercial to promote war bonds.

-Five weeks later-
Tanja was getting huge. She knew this. While at the beginning she could pinpoint every pound that she gained. Since she was still skinny back then. Now however she only noticed it from time to time. One of the most confronting ways she noticed was weighing of course. And today Cindy wanted another way in. Tanja looks at the mirror as she takes a bite of a cookie that Cindy had handed her. Tanja takes a good look at her body and is confronted with the reality of her overindulgence. Her face was chubby, though still had its natural beauty. Her shoulders were wide, her upper arms had pillowed up with fat. She takes a bite of the cookie in her right hand and stretches her left arm. A trail of fat jiggles and hangs of her bicep. Her breasts were large, filled with soft fat straining her bra. Underneath them a thick roll which formed the transition of her bust into her belly. Her belly was enormous. Her skin was still very pale, since she is a natural red head, or perhaps even paler. It was riddled by stretchmarks  which were directed to her deep belly button. Somewhere covered underneath pounds and pounds of flab were her once visible abs. The top part of her belly served a sort of pushup for her breasts. The bottom half only made her figure wider. Giving her bloated figure a apron of fat hanging about a third to her thighs. Tanja’s thighs touched all the way to her knees and had their own stretchmarks. Tanja finishes the cookie and turns around. She puts her hand on her enormous ass and sighs. Not only made her hips her figure very wide. Each butt cheek was large and sagging as the many layers of fat just kept piling on.
“Time to get on the scale fatso” Cindy says after a short whistle. “Then it is breakfast time, we can’t waste too much time not fattening that ass of yours up.”
Tanja rolls her eyes in annoyance and waddles towards the scale. Cindy steps in her way and hands her small box with four glazed donuts.
“No need to not be eating” Cindy says and steps out of the way. Tanja steps on the scale, which was normally for cattle. Cindy takes the read out display and walks behind Tanja. Tanja hears a beep and then silence. She looks over her shoulder to find Cindy looking at the display with raised eyebrows. Then a large smile appears on her face. She turns the display around and Tanja gasps.
“Not bad fatty” Cindy says patting the various fat bloated areas of Tanja’s body. “559 pounds of woman. That means you beat phase ten. Your weight can now easily be expressed in metric tons! I want you to really think about this. You are over a quarter of a metric ton now!”
Tanja looks in horror at the number. She was more than 435 pounds fatter than she used to be!
“Now it is time to make you even fatter” Cindy continues “Phase eleven will be a big one. Getting you to even bigger sizes. You have to weigh five times as much as an average woman of your length. For your information an average soldier of your height weighs about 130 pounds. So….”
Cindy turns her hand indicating that Tanja had to do the math.
“600 and ….50 pounds!?” Tanja says shocked. “another 91 pounds!?”
“Correct fatso” Cindy says gleeful “So get that fat ass moving and start eating.”
“Are you insane? I will be a blimp!” Tanja say frustrated.
“Oh I know. You are already huge” Cindy says stepping close to Tanja “We just have to make sure you get enormous. You probably notice your condition isn’t what it has been. Imagine that. Walking will just be even more difficult. That fat ass of yours even bigger and that belly will hang even lower.”
Cindy squeezes the fat of Tanja’s belly apron and her left butt cheek.
“Now I know you are going to say you don’t want to get any bigger. Or you don’t want to be fat” Cindy says soft, but the laughs loud. Almost maniacal. “Well let me tell you this fat ass. You are already a fat blob! And as long as I am near we will make sure that you will get fatter. And fatter and fatter! Now plop your fat ass down somewhere and get to feeding yourself!”
Tanja feels a tear dwell up. She wipes it away and then waddles her figure to the next fattening meal.  
 
Outside Elain immediately notices something is wrong.
“How did it go?” She asks concerned.
Tanja just shakes her head as she waddles towards her seat.
“That bad?” Elain says even more cautious “How….. How much do you weigh now?”
“5-5-9” Tanja says somber. “And they want more.”
“Big numbers, for a big lady. But don’t let that get you down” Elain says, trying to think of something to brighten Tanja’s day. “How about we go for a swim, that will relax you and take your mind of stuff!”
“A swim?” Tanja says as she eyes the large pool “I haven’t even thought about swimming. I don’t even know if there is a bikini for me.”
“Cindy told me there is” Elain says excited “I’ll get it and you will see. In no time the two of us are relaxing again.”
Elain quickly walks to the shed with supplies and comes back within a minute with a bikini. It was a black one, the amount of fabric was a lot. Tanja knew of course that her body and especially her rotund butt needed this much fabric.
“Arms up” Elain instructed with a big smile.
“Elain I am not su-” Tanja starts, but is interrupted.
“Don’t worry, it will be fun” Elain says helping the huge woman into her bikini. Elain was experienced in this now so it went swift. She walks around Tanja and looks happy. Then a look of concern come over her.
“W-what? What is it?” Tanja asks insecure.
“I was thinking” Elain says focusing on Tanja’s huge belly “You are a natural read head. And you are quite pale. So we have to get some sunscreen.”
Tanja usually just avoided the sun. And ever since getting bigger she was even less outside.
“I’ll go and get some” Elain says friendly “Do you also want a bite?”
Tanja just stands there unsure on how to react.
“It’s all right. You are among a friend” Elain says flashing a sweet smile.
“Yes please” Tanja says soft, looking down. Only seeing her enormous belly.
Elain nods and walks off again. Later she returns with  a large bottle of high factor sunscreen and a box of half a dozen donuts. Tanja takes the box and can’t help herself to swiftly start eating.
“Alrighty you just lie down and we will be swim ready in no time” Elain says as she stands next to the large chair meant for Tanja.
Tanja lies down and Elain wastes no time to apply the sunscreen. She starts with Tanja’s huge belly. Applying fast amounts of sunscreen to the pale jiggly dome, letting it trickle down the sides. Then she gently rubs the lotion in. Making soft circles in the doughy mass.
“It does feel quite nice” Elain says as she kneads Tanja’s belly. “You are quite warm and soft.”
Elain gives Tanja a friendly smile and continues. After applying it to Tanja’s thick thighs, Tanja needs to turn around so she can do the back. Turning around was a bit of a slow and tedious process for someone Tanja’s size, but Elain was patient. And as the fourth donut enters the fat woman’s mouth she tries to ignore how much her fleshy body jiggles at the slightest movement. Elain had gotten to rubbing the sunscreen into the folds of fat of Tanja’s back and was being quite thorough. Then she moved on to Tanja’s ass, which needed sunscreen despite the large black bottoms she was wearing. Elain was rubbing in the oily substance and she can’t helped but feel a little surprised or impressed. There wasn’t the slightest hint of muscle as she kneads Tanja’s fat butt.  It was all just jiggly fat. When Elain is done the donuts are gone and she excuses herself to get changed in swim gear as well.

Not much later Tanja was standing in front of the build in stairs of the large pool. She adjusts the black bottoms again and looks over the clear water. There was also a smaller iron stairs at the deep end of the pool, but Tanja feared she might get stuck or even break it. She slowly wades into the water. At first she doesn’t feel much, but slowly the pressure on her feet gets relieved. As the water goes up to above her belly button, Tanja actually smiles a bit. She felt much more nimble than she had felt in quite a while. The maximum depth at the end of the pool is just below her breasts. Tanja wades up to half way of the pool and hears footsteps. She turns around and sees Elain walking up in a bikini. Elian had swift and seductive steps, which combined with the bikini showed off her slim figure. She threw some floatables in the pool and then jumped gracefully into the deep end.
“Told ya it would be nice!” She says as she surfaces near Tanja. “Come lets go to the edge, you can see the entire valley from there.”
Elain swims ahead and Tanja wades after her. She was too big or out of shape to mimic Elain’s swimming. While Elain hangs over the edge looking at the view Tanja soon realizes she can not do the same. Due to the size of her belly she cannot get as close as Elain. Elain laughs, but as in a friend who laughs at another friends silliness. After sitting and enjoying the view for a moment Elain starts chatting.
“So I was thinking about this” Elain said “Whenever something bad used to happen to me. My mother always said. Let’s focus on the good things. So I thought why don’t we do that. What is actually good about being a girl in your situation.”
“Good?” Tanja says puzzled.
“Yeah. So for example exercise” Elain explains. “I hate exercise, like hate it with a passion. However, I do it to stay fit and in shape. But for you there is never a need to exercise. I mean that is kind of nice.”
“Eh… I actually liked sports and stuff” Tanja says as she understands what Elain is talking about. “But I guess no one really liked military drills, and I won’t be doing any of those anymore”
“Yes! See positive things.” Elain says excited “What else?”
“The food is quite good, although I feel hungry faster. I never really have to go without food” Tanja continues.
“exactly. No guilt feeling either” Elain says “No need to be counting calories, just enjoy what you are eating.”
“And I have more time for reading now” Tanja says “I mean reading and eating and the same time is quite relaxing.”
“If you have to sit still on your little butt anyway you might as well relax” Elain says, jokingly referring to Tanja’s enormous ass as little. Tanja actually manages a laugh and splashes some water on Elain. Who laughs back.
“Big girl still got some sass in her” She says laughing and pats her own flat tummy.
“Oh shut it you skinny shrimp” Tanja jokes and they both laugh.
“And besides you really got a unique figure” Elain says honest “And that is something that I still find admirable.”
“What do you mean?” Tanja asks.
“Well it is not often you see a woman with so much… eh… meat” Elain tries to formulate her thoughts “You know with such a powerful figure. I believe there is value in that big butt and large belly of yours.”
Tanja looks at Elain like she is insane. Elain just lifts her shoulders to indicate she can’t help herself. However they are shortly after interrupted by Cindy’s cold voice.
“What is going on here?” Cindy’s asks threatening.
“Eh… you said that we both were allowed to swim” Elain quickly explains.
“True, however there is a rule” Cindy says looking at Tanja “That fatso has to have a snack at all time. So hurry up and get her one. In fact make sure that on each side of the pools there is something to eat for her.”
Elain swiftly gets out of the water to later return with a large milkshake. She hands it to Tanja and heads back to get more snacks. Cindy watches stern as Tanja wades towards the edge and starts eating again.
“Remember Tanja it is your task to make sure you get even fatter” Cindy says as Elain sits down at the edge of the pool “So either you stuff your face and make that belly grow. Or I will make sure of it. And trust me, you don’t want that.”
Then a pleased smile comes over her face as Tanja keeps eating and she leaves again.
Elain and Tanja soon get into conversation again, with the difference being that Tanja was now stuffing her face while talking or listening.

-A week later, battle of the Werner-Dam-
The battle was fierce and as usual the propaganda machine from the States General was fully supporting it’s own troops and demoralizing the Republic troops. On their side of the front line pictures of Tanja and Elain in the angel and devil outfits are distributed. On the other side of the battle line pictures of an enormous Tanja, leaning against the glass wall of a horizon pool are dropped. Her vast amounts of belly fat pressed up against the glass, while she shovels a large snack of sausages in bread into her mouth. She is shown laughing, enjoying her time. What the soldier of the republic didn’t know was that Tanja was laughing at Elain, who was out of the frame of the picture.

The pictures on the States General’s side, of Elain and Tanja. Had the description: “The enemy’s angel got rather plump. Their strongest soldier can’t even fight her own appetite?” On the back was a description of how Tanja, once famous and feared. Now only sat on her ass, eating and ever growing fatter. This made the soldiers less fearful of the enemy, which was good for the State General. On the other side the pictures of Tanja in the pool and other pictures of Tanja living the good life at the lodge set contempt. Not just that, but it made the soldiers wonder why they were even struggling this hard. Their battle champion had let herself go and just accepted the easy life in the States General. Letting herself go like this, what a disgrace!

Then the radios of the republic called for a retreat of the scene. They called it a tactical repositioning, but the soldiers knew they were giving up this position. All this fighting and meanwhile and their battle angel was doing, was eating.

-Two weeks later, back at the lodge-
Tanja’s weight had crept up to the 574 pounds. Right now she was in her air conditioned room stuffing a huge meal into her cavernous stomach. The lunch she was on right now was mostly fried food. She huffs and takes another handful of greasy onion rings. Making her stomach feel even more compacted as more and more food is added.
“Common fatso keep eating” Cindy commands. “You still have a double barbeque cheeseburger after this.”
“But I am getting full” Tanja whimpers, rubbing her bloated gut.
“I already told you. I decide when you are full or not” Cindy says stern, pushing the burger towards Tanja “now eat!”
Reluctantly Tanja takes the first bite of the burger. She barely even tastes it, but she feels the grease coming of it.
“Good girl” Cindy says pleased wiping the bit of grease from Tanja’s cheek. “Just think of this. After this you can go and relax a bit and for dinner you can prepare yourself with enough fattening döner kabab for small sports team.”
Tanja whimpers again, but keeps eating.
“Don’t whine” Cindy says putting some empty plates away “You also have to get some snacks from Elain when you are done here. Now hurry up. Unlike you I want to do more than just sit on my ass all day.”
Cindy has only grown more pushing when it comes to food and the filling of Tanja’s stomach with it. For this lunch she had prepared four double barbeque cheeseburgers, two small baskets of fries, A stack of fried onion rings, fried fish, enough mayonnaise to cover all items, two small tubs of gravy for dipping the fried food in and to wash it all down a rich milkshake and a tall glass of sugary soda.
Tanja finally manages to fit the last bite into her large belly, which looks even more bloated than usual. Cindy stands tall and looks at the huge woman leaning back in her specially made chair. Today Tanja was dressed in top that left her blubbery belly exposed and a skirt that did little to hide the size of Tanja’s enormous ass. Tanja sat like that for a minute before Cindy told her to go outside. Cindy gave her both hands to help her up. Tanja hated to admit it, but it was easier like this. Once standing she waddled to the garden. Cindy shakes her head, but smiles as the huge woman leaves through the double doors.

Once at the garden spot Tanja feels a bit relieved that she actually can sit down again. For a 574 pound woman the short walk was what counted as exercise. Not much later Elain shows up in her waitress outfit. Probably send by Cindy. She hands Tanja the snack menu, which changes from time to time. Tanja sighs and rubs her still painfully stuffed gut.
“Can’t make a pick?” Elain asks, taking Tanja’s reluctancy for more food as indecisiveness. “How about cookie dough and a nice fruit juice.”
Tanja nods and Elain goes to get the items. The cookie dough was meant to bake 12 cookies. It was a peanut butter, chocolate chip variant. Elain can’t help, but give a short shiver as she looks at the 1000 calorie snack of sugars. The fruit juice was squeezed sweet fruits mixed with coconut milk and more sugar. Another 600 calories. 1600 calories in just one of the snacks she was going to serve between now and Tanja’s diner. Elain molds her face back into a professional smile and goes out to serve Tanja. Tanja is powerless against the temptation of food nowadays. Her stomach was still hurting, however the first bite of the sugary dough was in her mouth before the first five minutes had passed.
“You are addicted to food now” Cindy’s words haunt Tanja’s mind.
Tanja takes a sip from her creamy fruit drink and starts reading something. Within half an hour her stomach is pressure free and she is ordering her next snack. When Tanja relaxed her snacking went on automatic. Not even realizing how fast she was eating. Elain proposes to refill her snacks three times, only getting an absentminded nod in response. Elian smiles and goes to fetch yet another snack. That woman sure could eat!

By the time Tanja was sitting down for her massive next meal, which was dinner, Tanja felt rather ravenous again. And so the cycle would repeat again. Cindy would make sure she would stuff herself silly. Then relaxing, then more food.

Tanja was sometimes remined of army days when she though about her weight crawling up. Like a slow advance of an army trough a rough landscape. Like that army ever inching in on a stronghold. You know it will eventually reach it, but it takes time. And the time waiting is spend in anxiety. That is how Tanja felt about her weight creeping up to the 600 pounds. Currently she was at 589 pounds. Everything about Tanja was fattened. While her face was definitely the one of a plump woman, you would not say it would be the face of a woman as fat as Tanja. The rest of her body showed the many pounds rather obvious.

Tanja was sitting on the balcony reading one of her books. She tried to focus on the book, but it was not really that good and her mind drifted to the fact that she had not been supplied with snacks since breakfast. Soon Cindy appeared and by her smile and eyes Tanja could tell that she had been left without snacks on purpose.
“Come with me” Cindy commands “We got something special”
Cindy helps the fat red head get up and walks inside. Tanja sighs and walks after her, only much slower due to the couple of hundreds of pounds of fat extra on her body. Tanja waddles into the studio bungalow and notices that the camera is set up in front of a chair. The chair obviously meant for someone with Tanja’s girth. It looked more like a park bench were about three exhausted runners could rest. Or one very out of shape soldier to squeeze her hips between the arm rests. Breathing heavy from the slight walk.
“Sit down” Cindy orders and Tanja lets gravity pull her weight on to the chair. Cindy walks behind the camera and adjusts it a bit.
“So to make yourself a bit more memorable I thought we would do something special.” Cindy says still tinkering with the camera. “So we will show off how well you can eat I have made three food challenges. Which you will all do in the next two weeks.”
“Food challenges?” Tanja asks suspicious.
“Yes, since being fat and stuffing your face are pretty much the only two things that you do nowadays” Cindy says, pleased with Tanja’s insulted reaction. “The first challenge will be all about donuts.”
At that moment Elian rolls in a chart, she is avoiding Tanja’s look and walks away as fast as possible. She obviously did not want to be part in all of this. Tanja was too busy observing Elain to really take in the amount of donuts that was in front of her. Then Tanja opened her eyes wide They were stacked two high, rows of five by the length of the cart.
“75. Your first challenge will be stuffing 75 donuts in that fat gut of yours. Each donut about 200 to 250  calories.” Cindy says with a smile as she pushes the cart in front of Tanja “Now if I find you not eating for longer than 30 seconds punishment will follow. The punishment being A week of nothing but eating sticks of butter and Elain will also be punished.”
Tanja gives Cindy an angry look, it was a coward move to involve the one person that was friendly with her.
“I see you understood” Cindy says with a cold look “Now get to eating fatso”
One part was reluctant obeying orders from the skinny wench. The other part of Tanja however was hungry. Slowly the first donut disappears in her mouth. Soon followed by the next. And the next and the next.

“27 down, just 48 to go” Cindy says patting Tanja’s belly while she is chewing donut number 28.

At donut 40 Elain comes to bring in a drink to wash Tanja’s dry throat. Elain looks at Tanja with pity, but Cindy stuffs donut 41 between her lips and the feast continues.

“10 left” Cindy says sitting next to Tanja. She rubs the pale dome of fat and Tanja moans. “There, there almost done fatty” Cindy picks up a donut and slowly feeds it to Tanja. Tanja who is now concentrated on massaging her painfully bloated gut.

“And done” Cindy says popping the last bit into the stuffed obese woman. Tanja just leans back, taking labored breaths. Cindy stands up and watches pleased. It was quite a mess with crumbs  everywhere. However, it was the result that counted and that was that most of the 75 doughy snacks were now inside the huge woman’s belly. Waiting to be turned into more fat. Cindy walks back to the camera and takes a few detailed shots. Of the amount of powdered sugar and glacing that was on Tanja’s belly. And a final one of Tanja’s food stained face. Cindy smiled, excellent pictures for propaganda purposes.

-Third challenge end of the lodge period-
The second challenge had been eating cakes as fast as possible, but Cindy had been slightly disappointed by how well Tanja managed to do that. Actually getting a bit of smug smile from her former commander. Today however she would get back at her. It was their last week here after all and she had to show that woman who was boss.
“Today we will do the next challenge.” Cindy announces to Tanja, who of course knew already because the chair and camera had been set up “This will be the platoon pie challenge”
“The what?” Tanja says confused.
“Platoon pie, the idea is simple. A platoon pie is a large oven dish which should be enough for a small platoon of about 10 to 12 soldiers as a meal” Cindy explains “However you are going to eat all of it, by yourself.”
“Are you insane!” Tanja asks stunned, but her nose picks up the scent of meat and potatoes and Cindy smiles as Elain walks in with the dish. It was enormous with a thick crust. “Cindy I can’t possibly eat for 12 people”
“10 to 12” Cindy corrects “And you will have to or else poor Elain will also have to suffer for your bad behavior now it is time to get started.”
Cindy slams down the cutlery and waits for Tanja to pick them up. And Tanja starts eating. Bite after bite of the meal goes in her mouth. The taste was not too great. Tanja actually caught herself wishing she was having fries or her other usual junk food right now.

“I am sure you are interested in the ingredients” Cindy says when about a quarter of the oven pie is gone.
“Not really” Tanja says annoyed in between bites. Getting a pinch of her arm fat as punishment.
“Shut it fatso, you only have to use that mouth for eating.” Cindy answers agitated. “Now as I was about to say the ingredients are fairly simple: A pound of butter, Two pounds of grinded beef, four pounds of potato, a dozen eggs, a pound of full fat cream, some herbs and bread dough to finish it off. And voila a meal suitable for a fatass like you.”
Tanja wants to responds, but quickly decides what is better for her. And that is to just keep eating.
"Really commander?" She asked and even if Tana wasn't looking at her she could just hear the smile on Cindy's face from her tone alone, "I just told you that you'd be eating over a pound of butter and cream, and 4 fricking pounds of meat and you don't even blink? I bet hearing about all that food, just made your hearth flutter. Didn’t it fat ass?"
Indignant Tanja tries to open her mouth but Cindy silences her by shoving more food in with her bare hand.
"Now, now fatty don't talk while you eat, you might choke! And we can't have that can we?" She laughs and uses the fat on Tanja arm as a napkin to wipe her hand off.

Halfway trough things were already starting to get tough. At a quarter left Cindy started helping her again. Tanja reluctantly took the bites she was offered. Tanja whimpers and moans in between. Each bite adding pressure to her poor stomach. In the end all the food actually manages to get into her enormously overstretched stomach. Cindy trails her finger along the curve of her belly.
“Amazing” she says honestly marveled. “I have never seen anyone eat so much. Never thought I would as well.”
She puts her hand on Tanja’s belly. Even though it was stuffed beyond compare, her belly was still soft due to layers and layers of fat hanging of it. Tanja makes a pained expression and Cindy lifts her hand.
“So sensitive” She says still baffled “Just think at how much you can eat when you are even fatter. Which at this rate will be a piece of cake”
Tanja honestly doesn’t want to think about that at all. She just turns her face away with a painful frown.
"Remember when you used to make faces like that when you just started gaining weight? Back when you were stuffed after eating a cheeseburger or two. Now you gobble those burgers up like they are breath mints." She rubbed Tanja's belly, "Just think this might have been a big deal now...but one day a meal like this will just be like a snack for you."
Tanja shuts her eyes not wanting to listen anymore, Cindy was kidding...right?


-Weeks later-
“LARDBALL GET YOUR LAZY ASS IN HERE! TIME FOR A WEIGH IN!” Cindy shouts from the edge of the door before stomping back inside.
Tanja and Elain exchange a glance, before getting into the process of getting Tanja out of her reinforced reclining pool chair.
“Do -umm do you want me to go with you?” Elain asked nervousness in her voice still unhidden as she strained to pull Tana up.
“She’ll just tell you to leave.” Tanja replies shortly, catching her breath as she gets the last of the way vertical.
“I know but well...good luck I guess.” Elain mumbles. Tanja just chuckles humorlessly at her.
“Good luck with what?” She grabs her own exposed fat belly, plump fingers sinking in down to the knuckle. Since they were both sunbathing by the pool Tanja was dressed in a two piece bikini. Which was already huge by normal standards of course, but she knew she should have gotten it sized up 25 pounds ago. “Something tells me I’ve gained weight.”
She nods her head to the stack of empty plates beside her chair.
“Yeah...” Elaine admits still struggling to fully meet Tanja’s eye. “But-”
“I know.” Tanja doesn’t need for her to finish. Cindy was never really the cheerful sort, save when she was humiliating others, but for whatever reason she had been in a bad mood all week. “I’ll just keep my head down. So just wait here and I’ll be back in a few minutes.”
“Right.” Elain gives Tanja a smile for strength and hands her a plate of deep fried corn dogs to eat while she walked, “I’ll go get the kitchen to make some cheeseburgers just the way you like them for when you get back.”

“Took your sweet time.” Cindy’s foot tapped against the floor, “Did piggy find some lard on floor she needed to stop and lick up?”
Tanja averted her eyes without a word, she could get through this fastest if she didn’t try to fight back.
“And why isn’t there a snack in your hand? On a hunger strike?” What was unnerving Tanja the most was the fact that Cindy wasn’t sporting her usual sadistic grin.
“I just finished a plate of-”
If Tanja’s body was still capable, she would have jumped back in surprise as Cindy lunged a hand towards her face. Not in a punch she realized, but to shove food into her talking mouth, cramming in a piece of fried chicken with such force that she nearly made Tanja choke on it.
“There is no finished for you, flesh bag! just eating.” She slapped Tanja’s ass making her yelp over the food stuffing her mouth. It wasn’t the usual playful slap but the full force of Cindy’s strength. Cindy had been especially grumpy lately.
“Now quite wasting my time and get on the fucking scale!”
Tanja waddled forward as fast as her body could, panting through her nose the moment she finally stepped on the cold metal cattle scale. She finishes the fried chicken and quickly begins grabbing the gummy candies left out for her by the scale. She ate faster and faster, keeping her mouth full partly out of fear that Cindy would try to shove something else in her mouth, but also because eating was making her feel just a little less nervous.
Cindy walks over to the control panel and presses the button, Beep-Beep-Beeeeeeep. There is a single second of silence and then-
“610? 610!? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDD-” Cindy finishes with punching the front of the display panel.
“It’s eight more than last time.” Tanja says then instantly regrets it, seeing the look of hot fury across Cindy’s face. Tanja shuts herself up by hurriedly stuffing more candy into her face, but the damage is already done.
“Eight? Eight?” Cindy yells loud enough that the whole house could hear it. “I TOLD YOU LAST WEEK THAT I WANT YOU TO GO TO TEN POUNDS PER WEEK! AND YOU STILL EXPECT A PAT ON THE BACK?”CIndy had stomped over to get right into Tanja’s face. ”You wanted to lay back and take advantage of what I went out of my way to give you?” She slaps Tanja’s hand away from the candy bowl and makes her withstand the full weight of her stare bearing into her from above. “No more coddling! No more books, or pool time, or radio, or anything else save stuffing your gut until you nearly burst! You’re going to march to your bed and you are not even going to STAND until you give me those two pounds you owe me plus interest!”
Cindy slaps Tanja hard against the stomach, and the shockwaves ripple through hard enough to make the surprised former commander fall onto her massive ass. The whole room shakes from the 600+ pound weight dropped on it.
“And say goodbye to your friend. You should have spent a little less time gossiping and more time gorging! Shame your location is a state secret though, they have to take her out back and-”
“Wait!” Tanja yells eyes going wide. “Wait please just give me another chance! I’m sorry- I just I just-” She grabbed at the bottom of Cindy’s pants desperately begging.  She grabbed at the bottom of of Cindy’s pants desperately begging. After so much time forced into laziness the once battle hardened reflexes of her mind had lost their ability to quickly adapt to and overcome panic. She buried her head in Cindy’s legs begging for her to stop.

Unbeknownst to Tanja, Cindy was looking down of the sight of her ex commander with a look of surprise. The woman she used to fear and perhaps even respect, reduced to a blubbery mess of flesh quivering. Cindy smiled, She had done that. She had been the one to turn this world icon into this. She couldn’t help but laugh at the sight and feeling the bad mood that had gnawed away at her start to float away. Still that wouldn’t mean she’d let Tanja go quite so easily.
“Alright, piggy alright you can calm down.” She patted the mess of red hair below her, “It’s not your fault it’s mine. I should have known better then trust you with any responsibilities.”
Tanja looked up hope filling her eyes, “Does that mean you won’t-”
“Don’t get ahead of yourself lardy. I’m going to give you a second chance but not let you off the hook completely.” She smiled wider, “Lucky for you I have just the thing. Stay there on the scale for a bit and give me a minute, I think I have just the thing to make back the pounds you owe me.” Leaving those last words hang in the air, Cindy strolls from the room leaving a very nervous Tanja.
-Ten minutes later-
Elain!” Tanja shouts relieved when she sees her walk into the room carrying a wide coffee table.
“Careful tubby don’t give yourself a heart attack.” Cindy snickers coming in after holding a silver domed tray with two hands. In short order both the table and tray are placed just in front of Tanja as she still sits on the scale.
“You now Tanja if you didn’t spend so many hours lazing around the house, you might have known there was this nice little butcher shop just down the mountain. They make a lot of good stuff you’d like, roast chicken, beef, veal, duck, hamburgers...and a little thing called the “Sea burger.”
Tanja nervously gulps, “Sea burger?”
Cindy nods enjoying drawing the moment out, she stalked around getting behind Tanja’s back.
“Yeah, but if you are hoping to taste something a little salty sorry to disappoint you. It’s not Sea as in the ocean but C the roman numeral for 100. And do you want to know why?” Cindy pulled of the lid of the tray revealing the most massive steak that Tanja had ever seen. “Because this baby is 100 ounces of pure meat. Cindy’s hands snaked their way onto Tanja’s shoulders, rubbing them like a couch would before their star boxer’s title fight.
“That’s just over six pounds. And you are not going to move that butt an inch until you eat it all. I’d say after that we’ll be square.” Cindy pushes apart some loose strands of red hair to whisper in Tanja’s ear, “Now the butcher shop even offers a challenge. Eat it in under 90 minutes and it’s free, but I want you to try just a bit harder. Since after all you are a fat cow who’s only purpose is eating. 60 minutes…”

WHACK! Cindy cut off long strips of the fattening meat, grilled it and served it to Tanja. WHACK! Yet each time Cindy brought her near comically sized meat cleaver come down Tanja flinched. How could she not? The other women seemed intent on aiming to cut pieces right by Tanja's hand with every swing. At first it was simply playful, but now….
“Just over forty minutes in and what have you eaten? Hardly two pounds? All that begging before and this is all you have to show for it? Pathetic even for a pig!” Cindy shouted voice rising.
Tanja grabbed a the largest strip available and hastily started packing it away. She knew she had steak sauce and grease dripping down her chin but she knew she hardly had the time to wipe it.
“Hey ummm.” Elain mumbled nervously shifting on her feet, “She already looks about a fifth of the way done...so she’d probably be done in under an hour that’s-”
“WHACK Cindy’s cleaver came down again, except this time it was cutting in halfway down to the wood pillar by Elain’s face, startling her into a yelp as she fell onto the ground.
“And that’s enough from the peanut gallery I think.” Cindy casually remarked giving just a single eye to the cowering girl by her feet before turning back to Tanja. She wriggles lose the cleaver and looks displeased at Tanja’s performance.
Tanja brought handful after handful to her mouth. Stuffing in juicy meat in and swallowing it by the mouthful, but Tanja knew she would never make it to the end like this. Her hands stopped as she tried to pant the breath to speak. All much to Cindy’s continued displeasure,
“Oh don’t you dare!” WHACK WHACK the cleaver chops and already cut piece in two. “Don’t you dare fucking stop!”
“Wait-” Tanja panted, “I need help to-”
WHACK “What you need to do is eat!” Cindy shouts “How fucking hard is that!?”
And yet still Tanja persisted, “Wait please just let me-”
“Here we go!” Cindy yelled manically looking around at an invisible crowd, “Here we go AGAIN folks!”
Her eyes fall on Tanja with pure contempt. “Are you about to give me an excuse? What’s it gonna be this time” Cindy puts her hands on her knees and leans down right in front of Tanja’s face
“Are you going to tell me that you refuse to get fat? Are you going to tell me you are still a soldier? Are you going to act all innocent and pretend you aren’t an addict that gets off on gorging yourself? Better make your last excuse a good one because it’s the last goddamn thing you are going to say before I SHOVE THAT DAMN FEEDING TUBE SO FAR –“
“My arms are tired!” Tanja screams just wanting Cindy to hear her out.
All at once Cindy’s words stop, her rage gone as she looks at Tanja as if she had just slapped her. For a few seconds she just stands there, still as a statue until…
“BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Cindy laughs out loud. Folding double from joy.
“Oh my god!” She really can’t believe the sight, “Are you still fucking eating?”
Tanja nervously chews and swallows the steak in her mouth before grabbing another strip. Tanja wished she could say she was only eating because she was concerned what might happen to her or Elain if she didn’t,  but the honest truth was the stress of the situation was driving her ravenous with a need for the comfort a full belly brought her now.
Cindy positions herself over to obese red head still eating her steak and just looks her up and down.
“Are you really the same woman who once was my commander? The same woman who used to march us day and night, the woman who could knock out fifty pull ups without breaking a sweat? Did you really become such a big lazy blob that you just winded yourself from gorging that fat face of yours for a few minutes?” Cindy asks, still erupting in small snickers between sentences.
Tanja feels the emotion well in her eyes and she looks away, back to the steak and starts eating faster. It was the only thing she had left. Cindy laughs again and goes back behind her to rub her fat coated shoulders in soft gentle strokes.
“There, there dear, there, there. Forgive me again for thinking so much of you, I should have known better.” She gives an eye over to Elain who was still in the same place she had left her, staring at the entire scene play out with wide eyes.
“Sorry for scaring you Elain.” Cindy says with a sweet smile. “But would you mind coming over and helping Tubageddon here feed herself?”
She turns back to look at the rapidly chewing and stuffing Tanja van Djik. What an absolute whale she had become.

-Later-
Elain tries her best not stare, her very best not to let her friend see the way she is looking at her and add to her grief. But it was of the hardest things she had ever done for Elain not to just stare at what she had witnessed. She was witnessing her friend act as a monster of gluttony. Eating and eating and eating with such viciousness that every time Elain had brought a strip of meat to Tanja’s face she hadn’t even needed to wait a moment before grabbing a new one to bring up the next. Tanja was done eating every time. She went on like that just eating more and more not slacking in speed until finally Elain’s hand went down and felt her finger bonk against the plate. The steak was gone, disappeared into pit that was Tanja’s stomach. And so Elain tried not to stare. She was no stranger to her friend’s gluttonous abilities, but on this level was something else.
“Almost inhuman how she can eat, eh?” Elain’s heart skips terrified that Cindy could read minds as well. The other woman just smiled at her innocently as she matted the top of Tanja’s hair, “Hardly a human at all, more like machine made purely to eat...hehehe I guess that means I am quite the mechanic.”
Elain’s eyes went over to Tanja to see if she would respond, but she hadn’t even looked up. She was catching her breath panting like a top sportswoman who just finished a race.
“She’s- she’s done now.” Elain said trying to draw up some courage,
Cindy giggled at the other woman’s anxious behavior. “No she’s not done yet, but that okay I’ll help her to the finish.”
“But- but there’s not anything left what else-” Elain stops mouth open mid word as Cindy steps over to pick up the massive plate and look at Tanja. She swirls the sauce and grease left on the plate and looks down at Tanja, “Open wide!”
Tanja blinks slowly at the sight, then does as instructed. She keeps her mouth open as Cindy pours the brown and pink sticky mess onto her face. The plate was hardly a perfect slide, so a great deal of the mess splashed wide splattering her cheeks and chin, pouring down onto her breasts and belly. Tanja just closes her eyes and lets it happen, drinking as much as she can. Because this wasn’t the worst part. Neither was the pounds of food filling her stomach, or again apparent loss of fitness, or even Cindy’s taunts. None of these were the worst of what had happened. The worst was that after all this was that she knew she would be able to eat within the hour.

“That’s it piglet, I’m not so cruel as make you to stand, so just lay down on your back. Does that feel nice? I certainly enjoy the view of watching that fat gut of your pool down to either side!” Cindy says after letting Tanja rest for about fifteen minutes. The scale beeps and Cindy looks delighted.
“617! Good work fattie! Too bad you are not a perfect eating machine. It is almost disappointing that you can’t turn 100% of that steak into fat. Ah well, do you want a lighter dinner tonight?” Cindy laughs, “Just kidding, dinner is in two  hours so I’m sure you’ll be absolutely ravenous by then. Now you did a good job eating this time, but there is no reason why you should not have a snack with you right now. I expect to see Elain in the kitchen within 10 minutes. Getting more food for you to stuff into that ball of lard you call a belly.”
Cindy’s laugh lingers in the room long after she leaves the room. Elain makes doubly sure that she is finally gone when she hurries over to help Tanja get up off the scale. She holds out her hands and tries to give her best encouraging smile.
“So ummm- you still want those cheeseburgers?” She had meant the question as a joke, imagining that after that her friend would never want to see a piece of meat again after this ordeal. So her eyes go wide when she sees Tanja slowly nod yes.

-Headquarters of section 4, two days later-
“We are home” Cindy says as she walks back into Tanja’s large cell in the gray building that is the headquarters of Section 4. Tanja is feeling a bit tired, the walk from the garage to the room seemed to be longer than she remembered it.
“Hungry?” Cindy says with a taunting smile as she watches Tanja catch her breath.
“Yes” Tanja nods honest.
“No surprise there” Cindy says gleeful “Sit your plump butt down and I will get you some snacks.”
A moment later Cindy returns with a carboard box. She drops it next to Tanja and then casually leans against the side of the couch. Watching Tanja open the box, look at it’s contents and then look up with a worried look. The box was full of chocolate bars, there must have been almost 20 of them.
“A meal consisting of nothing, but chocolate. Every girls dream” Cindy elaborates. Cindy picks up a bar. Takes of the wrapping and takes a very small bite of it “Hmmmm, so sweet and rich. That should help us to fatten you up even further. Now is there a reason you are not eating yet?”
Cindy gives Tanja a stern look who nervously starts eating. Cindy smiles content and tosses the chocolate bar back in the box.

-Next morning-
The buzzer started buzzing at 8 in the morning. Tanja had forgot about the annoying alarm and opened her eyes, blinking against the lights that were turned on automatic.
“Morning fatso” Cindy says as she walks in, one of the soldier assistants behind her. The term fatso had crept into Cindy’s language more and more. And to Tanja’s shame she was reacting to it nowadays, like it was her name. “Tomorrow we will continue your regime here. Today is a bit special. So first we want to weigh you with an empty stomach”
The assistant immediately shoots into action and helps Tanja sit up straight and then stand. Cindy meanwhile walks near the mirror and patiently waits for the huge woman to waddle over. Tanja in just panties was taking slow steps. Her fat body quivering with each motion. Tanja’s belly made soft sounds as the fat apron hit her thighs. By the time Tanja had finished the short walk she was already breathing a bit heavy.
“I guess for a person as fat as you that counts as exercise” Cindy says with a giggle. Receiving a dirty look from Tanja. “Now let’s see how much fat in total you gained at our little vacation lodge.”
Cindy presses the button and Tanja dreadfully waits for the numbers to appear on the small led screen. When it does she gasps and a smile spreads on Cindy’s face.
“Not bad Tanja. You are starting to get heavy” Cindy pats Tanja’s enormous left butt cheek and smiles at her through the reflection of the mirror “And to think you are going to get even fatter.”
“Cindy, you have to stop feeding me. You can’t keep doing this” Tanja says, her voice heavy. “It is your fault I am this big in the first place! No woman should weigh 623 pounds!”
For a second Cindy seems to be baffled, like she is hearing commands from back in the time when Tanja was still in charge of her. Then an almost angry look comes over her face.
“I have a mission and that mission is to blimp you up even further. Make you even fatter as fast as possible” Cindy says squeezing the fat on Tanja’s butt cheek now “Yeah I made you this big. Because that is my job! And I don’t know if you have taken a look in the mirror recently, but I would say I am pretty damn good at it. Now you don’t have to worry about jobs or missions. No! the only thing you have to do is eat and sit on that fat arse of yours. No superiors that want reports from you, no one to chew you out when things aren’t progressing the way it should, no drills, no frontlines. You just stuff that gut and be sure to keep getting fatter!”
Cindy grabbed a roll of fat from Tanja’s belly and shook it violently, causing all of the pale fat to jiggle.
“Do you know how much effort it cost me to get this belly of yours started and then pump it this big with fat!?” Cindy says sounding more angry “How much food did I have to make sure that passed into that cavernous stomach of yours!? And each time your fat ass destroyed another pair of panties, I was tasked with replacement. All you have to do is get fat, but I am doing all the hard work. Making sure that once fit and slender behind of yours got covered under pounds and pounds of lard! And you know what? I would do it all over again if I had to. Because after all I am just a soldier right? Following orders. Those orders just so happen to make you the fatter than you could ever imagine.”
Cindy anger decreased and released Tanja, giving herself a second to cool down.
“Now because of my hard work you managed to get passed the 600 pound milestone. In fact you managed to gain your original weight of 122 pounds, plus an extra pound during our trip to the lodge. So I think it is time for celebration” Cindy says ominous. “Perhaps that way you will learn to be a good little fatty and just be jolly and eat in the future.”
Cindy walks to the door and turns to the soldier waiting there.
“Get her in bed” Cindy orders “I will be back in a minute.”

Tanja could have tried and fight it, but she knew it was better to just follow Cindy’s orders and get back in the bed. She lies down and the assistant soldier lowers the bed down completely, until Tanja is resting again. Cindy soon arrives again, but Tanja can only see her head over her own huge belly.
“Now you are probably starving” Cindy says letting her hand fall on the dome of fat that covers Tanja’s stomach. Triggered by the sense of touch, Tanja’s belly rumbles.  “Now to start off and give me some time for a celebration.  I thought it would be nice to reintroduce you to an old friend of us.”
Cindy shows the feeding mask of the feeding machine, Gaia. Tanja looks shocked and tries to struggle, but the mask is in place within half a minute.
“Enjoy” Cindy says cynical “I put it on the maximum stand, so this should be fun.”
It doesn’t take long for the fattening liquid to reach Tanja’s mouth. The machine did indeed seem to be working hard as it was pumped quite fast. The first bit wasn’t too bad since it quenched her hunger. After about five minutes Tanja felt content with how full her stomach was. The feeding machine however was not. more fattening liquid was still being pumped in her. Tanja could actually see her belly rounding out a bit as her stomach got fuller and fuller. Two minutes later Tanja’s stomach started aching, her belly even rounder. About four minutes later Tanja felt like she was going to faint her stomach stretched to the limit. Completely filled with the enormously fattening concoction. Her belly was larger than ever. Even though the layers of fat made her permanently looking round. Her stuffed stomach pushed the belt of lard up even further. A beep was heard and the flow stopped.
“Five liters of fattening goo” Cindy says looking at the read out of the machine “Not bad to start the day.”
Cindy sat down next to Tanja and patted her belly. Causing a ripple to go through the fatty flesh. Tanja wanted to curse at Cindy, but the mask was still there
“Now this is how things are going to work from now on” Cindy says, making Tanja feel like a small child “As you know we still have many more pounds to pack onto you. So we are going to kick this in the highest gear. You will be eating all throughout the day. I want a non-stop stream of food slowly making its way into your belly. There will be only be two moments when you do not have to concern yourself with food. During the shower, for which we will use Gaia again and at the end of the day.”
A muffled sound from underneath the mask as Tanja tried to speak. Cindy just raises her shoulders, indicating that she doesn’t understand Tanja, and continues talking.
“Now about the food, there will be no more picking what you want to eat. I will decide what and how much you have to eat to fatten that ass of yours up. So whatever food comes in front of your, you don’t ask questions, you don’t whine. You just have to make sure it disappears as soon as possible. Now to ensure that you are just worried with eating, I have turned the mirror scale display on to manual. So only when I want to know your progress we will see your weight.”
Another muffled sound and a bit of squirming from Tanja.
“Almost done” Cindy says patting Tanja’s belly again. “Now there are two minor points left. The first is your daily exercise time in the yard.”
Tanja’s eyes go wide when she things about this. She had forgotten about the mandatory exercise time. Or rather walking to the yard and eating there and then walking back. Cindy looks at Tanja’s reaction and laughs.  
“Exercise really is a scary word for a fatty like you isn’t it?” Cindy snorts “Well too bad, because it will still be mandatory. So once a day you will haul your fat ass out in the yard. What you do there I don’t care as long as you are eating. Now you need this exercise, we don’t want you to become immobile after all.”
Another laugh from Cindy at Tanja’s reaction.
“Now the last point is about your clothing” Cindy says looking over the curves of the massive woman “In case you haven’t notice, you are quite big. Quite plump, one would almost say fat. Now getting clothes for a woman your size has been…. Resource intensive. So to safe costs we decided the following. From now on we only provide panties and a bra. You will outgrow your clothes anyway. Besides you have fat like a walrus, with that much blubber you’ll stay warm enough.”
Tanja was furious, but could do little to express this.
“As for today. You will have a little taste of what happens if you misbehave” Cindy says getting up and turning on the feeding machine “Just in case you would have forgotten. Today you will just relax in bed and let the machine feed you.”
Cindy gives a sweet smile, flips a switch and the machine starts humming again. She dims the lights and leaves the massive woman alone.

-Republic, in the birth village of Tanja van Dijk-
Miss Vaarn locks the high school building where she was a teacher. She listens and in the distance you seem to be hearing a rumbling. Planes were coming over again. They never targeted the small village however. She puts his hands in his pocket and walks home. Everyday the frontline seemed to get closer. The military ensured them that they still had the tactical advantage, but she was not that sure. That wasn’t all that was on her mind however. She was thinking about a former student of her. The girl in question was a pretty red haired girl with bright blue eyes and a snow white skin. A kind and pretty smile and driven attitude. Tanja had been the village’s angel long before she became a puppet of the military. That was not what was worrying the teacher however. No what worried her was the news of that pretty girl happily plumping herself up in the States General.

Miss Vaarn had first heard about this from a States General deserter, who in a newspaper claimed to have seen reports about Tanja. Indicating that she weighed over 150 pounds at that moment. The man was convicted of high treason and spreading propaganda. The next report was from a lady who had slipped trough the frontlines to the Republic. She had indicated that Tanja indeed seemed to be enjoying a good life in the States General. She claimed she had been a waitress at a gentleman club. Tanja had performed there and she had looked rather fat. About 220 pounds. Of course everyone still believed this was nonsense. Then the first pictures came. Miss Vaarn was not sure when she saw the picture, but she had a hard time not believing it was her former student. She recognized the eyes, but the woman was fat. Over 300 pounds. And things only got worst. Pictures of Tanja eating, rubbing her newly gained fat rolls. Enjoying life at some sort of vacation lodge. Enjoying a pool and as usual in the more recent pictures eating. However what bothered miss Vaarn the most was that their own newspapers had started reporting about it.
“Former angel betrays the republic. Buries her loyalty under lard!” One of them read.
“Fat filled and traitorous” Another one reads.
“How fat can an angel even get?” A more comical one read.
As to why Tanja got this big the speculations ran wild. One said that she just enjoyed the saturated life style. The others said it was because had always had diet issues. Saying she barely passed the fitness tests. This was not true, but that did not seem to matter. One  paper said that Tanja was just trying to use as much resources as possible. This paper was ridiculed afterwards. Another paper claimed that Tanja had secretly always been into some weird fat fetish. Another lie. One of the more conservative papers claimed that this could all be a States master plan. Where they would have taken Tanja prisoner force her to eat huge amounts of food to maker her bigger. That way demoralizing the Republic. This theory was waved off as nonsense as well.

Miss Vaarn opened her door and picked up the newspaper. There on the front paper an absolutely massive woman was sitting on a chair eating fries straight out of the frying basket. The title read: “600 pound land whale brings shame to the nation!” In the article they claimed that Tanja had surpassed the 600 pounds and was still getting fatter. Miss Vaarn couldn’t believe that, was that really the petit skinny Tanja that had sit in her class room? Because the lady in the picture would not even fit trough the door. Miss Vaarn shook her head, whatever Tanja was doing. It was not doing the ordinary and hungry people of the Republic a favor.
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Comments: 13

executiverogue [2019-04-15 21:29:14 +0000 UTC]

This is a great story and I've really enjoyed reading it. I hope Cindy keeps coming up with more eating challenges to push and stretch Tanja's belly. 

I'd also like to see a feedee / feeder relationship blossom between the two of them. But I understand if you don't want to take the story in that direction.

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logitechk1 In reply to executiverogue [2019-04-16 16:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment. The feedee/ feeder relationship thing, I already did it my previous story. So it would be too repetitive I did it again 

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Lentiai88 [2019-04-10 12:07:51 +0000 UTC]

I read all your stuff for 1 day and half a night. Very interesting. Do not stop There is always a place to grow. Do not stop

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logitechk1 In reply to Lentiai88 [2019-04-10 19:58:29 +0000 UTC]

As in all my stories? because that is pretty impressive

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Lentiai88 In reply to logitechk1 [2019-04-11 05:20:39 +0000 UTC]

Yes all. I have free time from work, thanks a little cold. So I sit at home and combine business (learn English) with pleasure. And your progress in writing is really noticeable. keep going!

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logitechk1 In reply to Lentiai88 [2019-04-11 15:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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EillieBilish [2019-04-09 00:09:18 +0000 UTC]

I am a really big fan of the whole like people who knew her before seeing her now thing? Like that little bit at the end with the teacher I loved the comparisons and the shock etc.

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logitechk1 In reply to EillieBilish [2019-04-09 23:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I do enjoy writing them since they are short and interesting. Like writing a little short story

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fanchan [2019-04-07 03:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Did you edit some parts out? When I first read the story, their was a part with Constantine that had a weigh in and a new goal weight towards the end. I thought it was pretty good and you should add it back in. Also, I would suggest that you can have her reach this new goal and then some. With your amazing writing abilities, I would expect a pretty good chapter regardless of what you decide to do.

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logitechk1 In reply to fanchan [2019-04-07 14:20:52 +0000 UTC]

The beginning is different. Because I had some problems with DA's file size last time. So I forgot to put the part that didn't make it in chapter 5 in this chapter. So I had to fix that. And you guessed it, that made the file too large again. So it will be in the next chapter

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Vern101 [2019-04-04 23:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Another great part always a joy to read. And I’m thinking Cindy makes Tanya do something extreme 

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logitechk1 In reply to Vern101 [2019-04-09 23:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Something extreme you say?

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Vern101 In reply to logitechk1 [2019-04-10 01:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Yea something that really pushes tanja body and mind to hits breaking point causing to strain or to actually break.

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