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looking-for-my-emo — Death shall release me.
Published: 2010-11-28 12:24:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 389; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Death shall release me.


I hold this knife between my hands,

Throbbing pain inside me makes my fingers clench.

Standing on the edge of the blade, my life does another balancing act.

The fall seems so far down.

A quick death....Painless.

No need to worry, this swift movement will be effortless.

My body convulses.  

Tremors of pain rake through me...I shatter...

The pieces falling one by one off the edge of my blade, pushed by pain,

held, by nothing.

The fall so effortlessly, seeming to relish the oncoming death.

They hold out their arms as they fall.

Shedding only a single tear, a tear that holds all their pain.

As it flies away they smile...

Death has made the pain, fall, away.
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Comments: 10

Zacano [2011-02-18 14:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm annoyed by the fact you said it sucks because it's actually good

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looking-for-my-emo In reply to Zacano [2011-04-06 19:16:57 +0000 UTC]

My new accounts name is xpoeticsoulx

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samsam594 [2010-11-30 07:09:09 +0000 UTC]

This does not suck, very good. Sorry for your not good day

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looking-for-my-emo In reply to samsam594 [2010-11-30 21:26:54 +0000 UTC]

thx...and some days are good, some are bad, i guess we just have to hope we don't get the bad.

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samsam594 In reply to looking-for-my-emo [2010-12-01 01:10:48 +0000 UTC]

yes we do

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looking-for-my-emo In reply to samsam594 [2010-12-02 21:19:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the Llama badge

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TheAwakenedAngel [2010-11-28 18:42:21 +0000 UTC]

love that. all I'm gunna say about it.

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looking-for-my-emo In reply to TheAwakenedAngel [2010-11-30 21:26:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks, im glad you "love" it.

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Akemi135246 [2010-11-28 14:28:57 +0000 UTC]

this is really good ^^ i like the way you tied it all together.

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looking-for-my-emo In reply to Akemi135246 [2010-11-30 21:26:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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