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Once againI had a lovely time
Once again
I felt perfect
I can't really say
What we were doing
But I really can't forget
What we felt
I see a lot of love
Glittering in your eyes
When you're looking at me
Without saying a word
(No words needed.)
I see much more love
In your eyes than in his
It should be different
But I'm grateful it isn't
Still...?
And again
We had a perfect time
And again
We fell in love
I can't really remember
What we were talking about
But I really can feel
Our touch
Still.
Still.
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Comments: 8
victimofadr3am [2010-10-10 17:20:06 +0000 UTC]
It's not crap. Why do you keep saying that? You poetry is a masterpiece.
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Loosyth In reply to victimofadr3am [2010-10-11 07:07:27 +0000 UTC]
I don't know actually. I didn't even mean that, I think.
But seriously, I don't think my poetry is a masterpiece.
Thank you, though.
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ErosMyth [2010-10-09 13:08:57 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting to me, too. I like the dialogue and the expression of things that we tell ourselves and others. Thanks.
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Loosyth In reply to ErosMyth [2010-10-09 13:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I appreciate it.
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Loosyth In reply to reixii [2010-10-09 11:39:01 +0000 UTC]
I am very glad you did, thank you!
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