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You and me were meant to beThe question is
When are we going to get it?
Wondering what would change
I've started to think
How I would feel without you
How I felt before I met you
Would it be the same?
You and me were meant to be
The question is
What are we going to do about it?
Wondering what has changed
I've started to reminisce
How was I back then?
Innocent? Unknown? Scared?
Happy perhaps?
You and me were meant to be
But the question is
Who the fuck cares?
Something is about to change
It has to be
Otherwise...
We just won't make it
Wondering if
You and me were meant to be
I tried to deny us
But it just didn't work
If I woke you, would you scream for me that
You and me were meant to be
And there is no question about it?
Please?
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Comments: 21
WhatAmItoYou [2011-01-11 02:48:30 +0000 UTC]
If you hadn't put the please at the end... it could have very well changed the entire meaning of the poem.
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Loosyth In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-01-11 13:36:51 +0000 UTC]
You're right. It wasn't even there at first but eventually I put it there. I don't really know why.
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WhatAmItoYou In reply to Loosyth [2011-01-11 13:59:59 +0000 UTC]
then you're a true writer. Most writers who are 'real' tend to put something in their stories that even they don't understand but can make the work they did even better.
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Loosyth In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-01-11 14:08:01 +0000 UTC]
Tell me about that. It's funny how some people try so hard to be the best but their work is so... soulless then.
But I am not saying my work is great. .)
Thank you!
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WhatAmItoYou In reply to Loosyth [2011-01-11 14:10:04 +0000 UTC]
XD no problem... oh man your making me self conscious. I don't know if my work has a soul... I'm gonna go check! *laughing* I'm just messing around.
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Loosyth In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-01-12 08:14:31 +0000 UTC]
Please, just don't those nonsense seriously, I may be completely wrong. And believe me, your work surealy has a soul.
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WhatAmItoYou In reply to Loosyth [2011-01-12 12:12:32 +0000 UTC]
that's good. I've been a writer since I was six years old... that'd suck if I couldn't even give it life.
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Loosyth In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-01-12 15:14:43 +0000 UTC]
Only six? Wow. What did you write about back then?
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WhatAmItoYou In reply to Loosyth [2011-01-12 19:34:26 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... I wrote a story about a girl named Joey Maria Woods. She was a princess of thieves who was trying to save her dad who had been captured by another kingdom. That kingdom was called the kingdom of war where her arch nemesis, a guy her age named Michael, was. It was strange and mainly full of pictures but that's what I mainly wrote about, that and the possibility of this life not being my real one.
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Loosyth In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-01-13 09:19:56 +0000 UTC]
I love the idea, it's sweet. And I think it was a good thought to fill it with pictures too.
The possibility of this life not being my real one - that's really good. Have you ever really believed this is not a reality?
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WhatAmItoYou In reply to Loosyth [2011-01-13 12:22:48 +0000 UTC]
yes... but I prefer this reality to my daydreams. In this reality I'm stuck paying for all of my sins but in my own little worlds... everyone, including myself, has already forgiven me.
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Loosyth In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-01-13 12:45:49 +0000 UTC]
I see... Human's fantasy is really an interesting thing.
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DJChocolate-Lover [2010-12-30 01:26:03 +0000 UTC]
I like this and how the emotion seems to change as it progresses.
Who the fuck care?
Who the fuck cares?
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Loosyth In reply to DJChocolate-Lover [2010-12-31 08:33:43 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes it really seems nobody cares. Including me...
Thank you very much.
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victimofadr3am [2010-12-29 15:46:35 +0000 UTC]
Really amazing as most of your poems brings up the feeling of irony and longing.
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KalineReine [2010-12-27 00:29:08 +0000 UTC]
That's so sad... But there is such truth in your words.
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Loosyth In reply to KalineReine [2010-12-31 08:34:35 +0000 UTC]
I am afraid so...
Thank you.
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