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The house was quiet. The silence was almost painful.

Patiently, Moondancer waited while Sunset Shimmer poured him a fresh cup of tea. The teapot trembled in the grip of her magic, and her eyes were brimming with tears. Starlight Glimmer neatly leaned over to take the teapot from her wife. She wrapped gentle, comforting hooves around Sunset, and the golden unicorn immediately turned and buried her face against Starlight's chest. The silence returned.

Over in the corner, Chakra Blossom sat holding his own cup of tea. It'd grown cold long ago, but he stared down into the still, sweet-smelling liquid, transfixed by his reflection. His eyes were misty.


The air was choked with a fog of thick, crushing grief. The loss was too fresh, like a wound still bleeding.


Anxiety gnawed at Moondancer's belly. He'd come to Midnight's home under the guise of expressing his grief and consoling her mothers, but really he'd hoped to tactfully sniff out hints about what Starlight and Sunset really knew...most importantly, whether they'd be able to trace their daughter's fate back to him. At first, he'd been confident in his probing abilities, but now, taking in the tear-stained, utterly distraught faces of two mothers in mourning...well, it was sparking something far too much like guilt in Moondancer's gut. This would be more difficult than he'd anticipated, but he had to press forward. Moondancer cleared his throat.


"I...came as soon as I heard."


Starlight's eyes numbly slid up to meet his gaze. "...Thank you." She coughed awkwardly, attempting to summon a mask of professionalism. "We're grateful, dear." She said finally. "We...know you and Morning Glory were close."

"She was like a sister to me." Moondancer explained, smiling sweetly. "Not by blood of course. I always tried to guide her, to make use of her incredible talents...I always considered Morning Glory to be my little sister, but I suspect she saw me as a nagging, overprotective nuisance." He chuckled.

"Nonsense, dear." Starlight made a feeble attempt at an assuring smile. "I'm sure Morning Glory appreciated all you did for her. We certainly did." She looked down at her hooves, and her voice grew distant. "....I remember so clearly the day she was born. Holding this teeny thing in my hooves for the first time... just the sweetest, most perfect little ball of pink fluff..." Her eyes began to glitter again, and she bit her lip.

"...She was our sunshine." Sunset said quietly, sagging against her wife. "....I just don't know who could have done it." Sunset whispered. "I...I can't fathom who could have hated our daughter so much." She bit her lip, ears slicking back in pain. "We managed to transport the statue back home without damaging it, but Twilight.....T-Twilight said-" Sunset's breathing hitched. Starlight glanced up at her, and quickly reached to hold her hoof. Sunset sucked in a deep breath, trying to choke down a tidal wave of emotion. Moondancer waited carefully, ears pricked, heart stuck in his throat.

"...Princess Twilight ran so many tests. She stayed up all night." Sunset finally breathed, looking Moondancer in the eye. "But every test yielded the same result. It appears as though something managed to strip away Morning's very being-mind, magic, and soul. The crystal statue is all we managed to recover. Poor Bertram refuses to leave her side, but the fact is, the statue has no soul inside. Twilight says that for all....f-for all intents and purposes...o-our filly is d-dea-" Sunset couldn't finish, leaning forward to bury her face in her hooves. She began to weep now, loud, broken sobs that racked her whole body. Shame settled in Moondancer's stomach like a heavy stone, and he fidgeted uncomfortably.

"Dead." Starlight finished, gritting her teeth. Though she shut her eyes, a few boiling tears still managed to squeeze through. "If...i-if that's true....i-if something, some monster took our daughter away, I...." Her horn began to glow, and air became charged with her magic. "I-I'll....there won't be a corner of Equestria they'll be able to hide from me. I'll blind him, I-I'll tear him to bloody pieces, I'll-" Like Sunset, she too broke suddenly, crumpling into a weak, sobbing mess. "I'll..."

"Oh my." Moondancer reached out to touch her shoulder, comforting and gentle. "Ah...there, there, dear. Please, you shouldn't work yourself up like this. I assure you, there is no monster to be hunted down-please, assuming foul play will only cause you unnecessary stress." He said kindly. "If there was some wicked beast lurking about, stealing away magic in the dead of night, surely there would've been reports of it from all across Equestria? And surely it would've been hunted down by now?" He swallowed, letting his ears droop in sorrow. "...Although it's difficult to accept...I believe that what happened to Morning Glory may have been, ah...self-inflicted."

Starlight's eyes went wide, and she exchanged quick, terrified glances with Sunset. "W-what are you saying? You think....this might've been an accident?"

Moondancer nodded grimly. "Unfortunately. Morning Glory was truly your daughter-so very talented at magic. But she's always had her fixation with the dark arts...and it'd always worried me. Growing up, I always tried to guide her onto a less sinister path, but, ah...well, we all know what a headstrong young lady she was." He chuckled, a bit sadly. "She loved her witchcraft. But the fact is, its always been a very volatile, unpredictable branch of magic. It's quite possible that Morning was testing out some new hex, or curse...and something went terribly, terribly wrong."

Starlight Glimmer covered her mouth, and her wide eyes filled with tears. Sunset echoed her wife's look of horror. It was clear that they believed Moondancer without question...and they were quickly making the mental connections he'd hoped they would. Clever mares. They'd never discouraged their daughter's love of the dark arts...were they then, to blame for her death?


"Bullshit."


A deep voice suddenly cut through the air, startling the trio. It was Chakra Blossom, who seemed to be trembling with barely-contained anger. He stood to his hooves, locking eyes with Moondancer.

"You think Nighty was stupid enough to do this to herself? Midnight Abyss was a damned genius." Chakra growled. "And you'd know that if the two of you were as close as you say, friend."

Moondancer's mouth opened and closed, like a fish. He'd been taken off guard. "Well, I, ah-"

"I don't like your tone, Mister Blossom." Starlight Glimmer stepped boldly between the two stallions, guarding Moondancer. "Moony's just as distraught as the rest of us, and thus far, he's provided the only answer to all this that makes any sense. It...it may not be a pleasant answer, but it does make sense." She reached up to wipe at her wet eyes. "Celestia. Morning Glory was our baby. Our new beginning, our dawn. Sunset and I...we haven't always made the best choices. Haven't always been the best ponies. We'd always hoped that our daughter would be better than us. We were so proud when her magic developed early...Oh, but then the witchcraft business started....Our little filly didn't want to wear dresses and study under Princess Celestia, no, she wanted to brew ancient poisons and test out enchantments on cadavers." She sniffled. "Oh, we should have known no good could come of it..."

"She was happy, Miss Glim." Chakra reached out a comforting hoof. "I remember, back when we were kids, the first time I agreed to let her test out a potion in my ma's kitchen. It ended up exploding, total failure, took forever to clean all that salamander slime off the ceiling, but...you know, I think that's the first time I remember hearing her laugh." Chakra smiled then, and it was nostalgic, tinged with sadness.

He looked to Starlight, hoping that she too had found comfort in the memory, but the mare took a sudden step back from him.

"...That's right." She whispered, her eyes going wide, as though she'd just remembered something. "Morning Glory had always been a good little filly. She never tampered with witchcraft before....not until you came along." She lifted a hoof to her mouth, and her eyes met Chakra's.

"It was your fault."

The atmosphere in the room changed at once. In an instant, Sunset took her place at Starlight's side, and both mares advanced on Chakra, nearly bristling with maternal fury.

"Whoa, easy, easy!" Chakra lifted his hooves, trying to calm them. "Please. Up until not too long ago, Nighty was my friend. I always tried to give her space to be herself. I know she appreciated that-hell, she told me herself!"

Moondancer was nothing, if not an opportunist. A wicked wildfire was blooming in front of him. He only needed to feed it.

"I'm sorry to say it, but I always suspected he was a bad influence." Moondancer said, shaking his head. "I always told Morning Glory that nothing good would come of hanging around some deadbeat, good-for-nothing hippie."

"What, you think Midnight didn't know I was trash?" Chakra laughed, but it was bitter. His eyes were curiously shiny. "She was smart enough to think for herself, dipshit. She ditched me a while ago. Dumped me as a friend, because I was too mean to somepony I was supposed to care about. She hated that."

Moondancer paused, sensing victory. "...Dear me, Mister Blossom. I don't think you're making the best case for yourself."

"It's not about me." Chakra countered, looking round at everyone in the room. "It's about her. Look, I get it." He snorted. "Missus Glimmer, Missus Shimmer, you loved your daughter. I get it. And I do mean no offense here-but none of you knew Midnight like I knew her. She was never your smiling little sunshine fluff filly, or whatever the hell you wanted her to be. She was a person. She was mean, she was weird, she was creepy, and she'd been that way since the day I met her. She was smart. She loved all this witch stuff, she knew curses and hexes like the back of her hoof. There's no way in hell some accident got the better of Midnight Abyss. If she's dead, it's because someone killed her." Chakra's voice became a cold, deadly hiss, and he leaned forward, eyes boring into Moondancer's.

"....And this little prick knows something."


Time seemed to slow to a crawl. For a long, agonizing moment, Moondancer was paralyzed against Chakra's glare. Chakra knew. That damned layabout pegasus knew. Moondancer felt the terrified hammer of his own heart, and desperately, he wondered if it'd be better to confess to his crime, confess now, before the two powerful unicorns before him figured out Chakra's words for themselves-

The words felt heavy on Moondancer's tongue. "I-I..."

"How dare you."

In a heartbeat, Starlight Glimmer shoved in front of Moondancer, her eyes blazing like a volcano ready to erupt. "How dare you?!" She repeated, her voice shaking the walls like thunder. "How dare you accuse somepony in my home!" She bellowed at Chakra, "My daughter is dead, and if any miserable, wretched soul is to blame for it, it's you!"

Wide-eyed, Chakra took a step back, blindsided by her venom. Furious and wounded, he struggled to steady himself. "Ma'am, I'm only trying to help." He tried. "I don't know much, but there's one thing I'm sure of-Midnight hated this little jerk." Again, he turned a withering glare upon Moondancer. "I trust that she had a damned good reason to."

"Moondancer has been a loyal friend of our family since he was a colt." Starlight said coldly. "It's not his character being assessed right now, Mister Blossom. I'd much rather examine the pegasus right in front of me-the big, lumbering layabout that claims he knew our own daughter better than we did."

Chakra's ears slicked back in anger and hurt. "...You know, I'm starting to think that I did." He said darkly. "Some mothers you were."


Sunset flinched, and Starlight's wrath finally boiled over, her patience at its end. "Get out!" Starlight screamed, louder than Moondancer had ever heard her. She caught Sunset, who'd collapsed again into pained sobbing. "Get out of my house, and never come back!"  

Moondancer seized the opportunity. He lit his horn in warning, and took a bold step forward. "Mister Blossom, I believe it's time for you to go."

Chakra looked to him, eyes nearly smouldering with hate. He flared his wings wide, as though considering openly attacking the white unicorn-but suddenly seemed to think better of it. Instead, he simply turned and left, slamming the door on his way out.

 Starlight let out a heavy sigh, slumping against her wife. The fight seemed to have gone out of both mothers.

"I'm sorry you had to see that, Moony, dear." She apologized numbly, "What a terrible mess everything's becoming..."

Moondancer blinked, stunned that everything had clicked into place so smoothly. He hesitated, nearly afraid to believe that somehow, he'd come out victorious. Midnight's parents didn't suspect him. They trusted him. Starlight Glimmer placed a hoof on his back, comforting her daughter's killer.

"You'll stay for dinner, won't you? You're looking so pale these days..."

Moondancer smiled, warm and kind.

"Oh no, Missus Glimmer, I couldn't impose..."

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With a fond farewell to Sunset and Starlight, Moondancer had departed from Midnight's home. The weight of his traveling cloak felt familiar and warm, and it carefully hid the red-tipped horn tied around his neck. Moondancer trotted through the Everfree Forest, his hooves light with a renewed sense of confidence, a feeling of invincibility. The sun had set, casting the forest in still, eerie darkness, but Moondancer pressed on, unafraid.

A voice, faint and irritable, spoke suddenly in his mind.


You worm. You loathsome little scrap of toad waste.


"Celestia above." Moondancer drawled, "You'd be so much easier to mourn if you'd just stay quiet, Midnight."


You think you're clever, don't you? Think you've got my mothers fooled? They'll figure you out, and then they'll skin you alive.
 

"They don't suspect a thing. They trust me. And why shouldn't they trust sweet, polite little Moony?" Moondancer sneered, mocking her. "I'm a model pony, after all."


Says the pony wandering alone through the woods, talking to himself.


Moondancer startled, realizing she was quite right. He'd been speaking aloud to a voice in his head. "....Shut up, Midnight." He whispered, cheeks turning pink.


So, you've managed to stumble your way into getting away with murder. For now. You're still a joke, Moondancer. Tell me, what's next? What's your plan here? Because I really can't wait to see how all this blows up in your stupid, smug little face.


Moondancer's face soured, and he opened his mouth to sneer a response-when quite suddenly, he caught sight of a lone unicorn walking through the forest. He was a thin, young stallion, with a basket of fresh-picked Everfree timber berries slung across his back. The pony was whistling merrily to himself as he skipped along. He hadn't noticed Moondancer yet.


Dimly, Moondancer felt the weight of the horn against his chest. A strange, faint hunger began to stir inside him.


What's next, Midnight? Hmm.


Moondancer began to slink forward, silently stalking the young unicorn. The pony's hind hoof snagged on a tree root, and some of the berries spilled from his baskets. With a swear, the pony lit his horn, trying to gather up the mess.

Poor thing. The woods weren't safe for a pony alone at night.

Moondancer licked his dry lips, and the horn at his chest began to glow a dim crimson, encouraging him onward. He'd take this pony. Just the one. Just one more soul....


Just to see what would happen. Nopony was around to see. Nopony would miss this young fool.


The woods weren't safe for a pony at night.


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so it continues




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ClassicalGlimmer [2023-06-18 02:41:04 +0000 UTC]

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TheSodaMerchant [2019-11-01 04:12:30 +0000 UTC]

i swear to god if moondancer is STILL anybody's favorite character at this point it is Punishable By Death

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ShinraCrimson In reply to TheSodaMerchant [2020-02-02 18:33:30 +0000 UTC]

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Kuvanku In reply to TheSodaMerchant [2020-01-31 20:31:00 +0000 UTC]

He is baby

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Budgie--Boye In reply to TheSodaMerchant [2019-11-04 16:09:28 +0000 UTC]

I'd say that he is still a really interesting character, and so is his story

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Colbyr [2019-09-03 05:14:40 +0000 UTC]

Was re-reading this after the most recent development in the arc you posted, and I noticed that Midnight's parents still call her Morning Glory - do they just ignore her preferred name, or has she kind of given up on them ever understanding her, or both? That seems like it would be a big point of contention in their relationship.

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Jackie-SugarSkull [2019-07-12 21:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Now I really can’t wait for Starlight to find out the truth, because hoo boy, Moondancer’s gonna get it.

Moondancer: What are you gonna do? Kill the son of one of your best friends? You know Mother would never forgive you.
Starlight: You’ve already taken everything from me, Moondancer. But I’m not gonna kill you. I’m just gonna make you wish I had...

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CopperyAtom345 [2019-06-14 02:42:17 +0000 UTC]

What happend?

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CrystalConfection In reply to CopperyAtom345 [2021-01-01 19:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Midnight was turned into stone.

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CopperyAtom345 In reply to CrystalConfection [2021-01-01 19:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah, ok.

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CrystalConfection In reply to CopperyAtom345 [2021-01-01 19:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Glad to be of service.

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DarkNightsAwait [2019-05-13 03:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Petition to kill Moondancer, sign here

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ColorPowder In reply to DarkNightsAwait [2019-09-12 15:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Signed.

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Novastar335 In reply to DarkNightsAwait [2019-08-30 09:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Alright let's go

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DepressedHeaddress In reply to DarkNightsAwait [2019-07-17 11:31:43 +0000 UTC]

May be a rlly old comment, but

Signed

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RhiTES In reply to DarkNightsAwait [2019-06-03 01:32:50 +0000 UTC]

signed!

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Reading4halfmylife In reply to DarkNightsAwait [2019-05-31 06:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Signed

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friendorfoe4 In reply to DarkNightsAwait [2019-05-26 18:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Signed

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DarkNightsAwait In reply to friendorfoe4 [2019-05-29 23:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Glad we got someone! I brought some knives, how about you?

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friendorfoe4 In reply to DarkNightsAwait [2019-05-31 01:33:28 +0000 UTC]

I've got an army of Pinkie Pies.

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DarkNightsAwait In reply to friendorfoe4 [2019-06-01 17:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Holy fuck that's even better than my knives.
That piece of heck is gonna get freaking dead-

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BC-LS [2019-04-10 00:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Too bad Sunset and Starlight are too blind to see Moondancer for what he really is.

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TheGayBird [2019-03-26 02:37:20 +0000 UTC]

I know who I’m hunting tonight

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ladyruthnineteen [2019-03-20 03:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Damn it....ooooh man...

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OkayKayeKay [2019-02-17 22:41:44 +0000 UTC]

YOU NEED TO MAKE A WEBTOON! !!!

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Hiki-Dashi [2018-09-12 08:31:26 +0000 UTC]

Why does Chakra remind me so much of Hagakure from Danganronpa in this photo? akak;dgha;sdkga;ksdg

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SixFoldDimension [2018-08-25 02:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Good thing for the heroes that Moon Dancer apparently can't absorb the intelligence of the ponies he captures. If Moony were a competent villain, he would've thought to get rid of Bertram and hide/destroy the statue. He also could've used his newfound magical power to disguise himself as Midnight, confront Sunset and Starlight alone individually disguised as MA (since they clearly don't know their daughter well at all, his imitation of MA probably doesn't even need to be that good), absorb their powers...

At that point, he'd have the magical prowess of three very powerful unicorns. He could probably go on a unicorn all-you-can-eat in Ponyville and become strong enough to take down even the princesses, and if he couldn't, he could hold the earth ponies and pegasi in Ponyville hostage and ransom them to absorb one of the princesses. ("There are hundreds of earth ponies and pegasi whom you might call friend back in Ponyville, all waiting for me to condemn them to most painful deaths. I could do it in an instant, you know. But I'll let all of them go if you sacrifice yourself here and now, Twilight. You have thirty seconds.") Then proceed to absorb all the unicorns, kill anybody else who could be a threat, ascend to pony godhood, etc.

But then again, if he did gain the intelligence, he'd be able to see all of this laid out in the future and realize that ruling all of Equestria with a cold, iron hoof wouldn't make him happy. Then go back to dancing.

So in a way, this entire fiasco relies on Moony being an idiot...?

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Lopoddity In reply to SixFoldDimension [2018-08-25 03:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Moondancer is intelligent and calculating, but one does not go from ordinary pony to omniscient murderous villain overnight. He's making this up as he goes along, and getting better along the way. Midnight summed it up best, "So, you've managed to stumble your way into getting away with murder. For now."



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SixFoldDimension In reply to Lopoddity [2018-08-25 05:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, I find him very endearing! It goes against all his best interests to become an omniscient murderous villain, period, so it makes sense for him be learning the ropes on the go... not that it's a lesson he should be learning anyhow, since I imagine that if he knew himself better, he would know to leave this path as soon as possible and return to dancing - but I digress.

I'm comparing him with actually sociopathic, highly competent villain geniuses who would completely destroy the narrative of the story in a single chapter if they had that power and motivation: people like Relius Clover from Blazblue, Doc Scratch from Homestuck, Quirrell from HPMOR... although these characters are typically so competent that they usually *win*, or at least succeed in their core motives. They reach a competence level where it is literally impossible to write them and have them lose, so the narrative crumbles from there...

Please don't take my comment as an insult; I am enjoying the story so far and I like your characters very much! Just teasing Moony for all those great Unbeatable Villain(tm) opportunities he missed. What would he think, if all the above were suggested to him right now~?

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IloveGasterSans [2018-08-04 14:13:35 +0000 UTC]

. . . I'm probably stupidly behind, but whatever happened here, and whatever is going on, I hope that Moondancer gets what's coming to him.

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Piponyo [2018-07-18 02:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Gosh this is getting good!! Moon Dancer makes me so angry.;-;

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Fluffy-Ghost [2018-06-12 23:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Poor Chakra.They were so close to finding the killer.Chakra even figured it out,but that sly Moondancer,And Midnight’s emotional mom’s.I wonder if they’ll believe Pandora.Or if Moondancer will find out Pandora knows first.Oh dear.This story makes me think darkly.

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Undertaletrasha [2018-05-24 02:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Why am I smiling at this? What are you turning me into?

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SamiTheCoolestDude [2018-05-17 08:24:59 +0000 UTC]

i feel kind of bad for chakra, because he knows moony is horrible and wants the others to find out what he did (spoilers for anyone reading this before they read the newest stuff) but i suppose panny and cupcake know now, dont they? either way, karma for chakra. it would feel good, if it weren't about midnights death. I really, really can not wait to see moondancer get found out. i wonder if they will kill him, or if he will have a life-long prison sentence. i, personally, hope for the former.

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Sanluris [2018-05-16 01:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Stone-cold.....I hope they can fix everything before any of them get too far gone....

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Chioro [2018-05-11 23:10:14 +0000 UTC]

They remind me of Pagent mothers living through their daughters.

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Eris-Draconequus [2018-04-13 18:08:03 +0000 UTC]

So.. I know I shouldn't ask for spoilers...but MY FAVORITE NECROMANCER MAN!.....anywho PLLLLLEASE say everything gets fixed in the end...happy ending....please

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Knightwolf1785 [2018-04-03 07:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Where is the next part to this? I want to see Moondancer pay for what he's done.

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urzapw2000 [2018-03-30 04:41:35 +0000 UTC]

quick fanfic
Midnight Abyss: you're a jerk
Moondancer: just admit that you are now a part of me
MA: I admit nothing of the sort
Moony: well your power is mine and yo-WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?
MA: hm? what was what?
Moony: th-th-th-there's a gh-gh-gh-
MA: a what?
Moony: GHOST!!!
MA: ...and?
Moony: IT'S A GHOST MIDNIGHT, A BLOODY GHOST!!!
MA: ...you act like you've never seen one before...
Moony: I HAVEN'T SEEN ONE, WHY ARE YOU SO CALM?!?!?!? oh starswirl, there's more of them...
MA: ...heh...
Moony: WHAT'S SO FUNNY?!?!
MA: very well Moondancer, I admit that my power is yours. i also admit that my natural abilities are yours as well
Moony: wha-what does that mean?! that one talked to me
MA: I see ghosts Moon-Moon. I always have and I always will. and right now, since i am part of you, you see them, too!
Moony: you-you mean that this is per-per
MA: Permanent... at least until I manage to free myself...
Moony: n-not happening
MA: I thought not... oh well, then. Night-night Moon-Moon
Moony: WAIT WHAT?!? tell me how to get rid of them
MA: get rid of them? I've never tried
Moony: but-but-but...
MA: night-night


and thus Moondancer didn't sleep for three nights after the events in the story above.

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MintyUniverse [2018-03-29 03:23:44 +0000 UTC]

I gotta be honest I love Moondancer. He's one of my fav characters. He's had so much shit thrown at him in life. I feel pretty bad for him when this all ends and everyone finds out the truth...

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thesaltypretzel [2018-03-28 14:47:20 +0000 UTC]

as much as i love Moondancer as a villain, i really can't wait, as Midnight said, for all of this to blow up in his stupid smug little face.


i can't wait to read more

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gh0stly--angels [2018-03-18 08:52:41 +0000 UTC]

I honestly don't know who to hate more
The pompous, power hungry little shit called Moon Dancer
or the fake hippie known as Chakra Blossom

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rachellyn1214 [2018-02-12 21:14:16 +0000 UTC]

I still despise moondancer as a character and kinda wish he was out of the story. I can't really explain the hate.

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Ehsol-namu [2018-01-22 15:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, this moment seems like karma for Chakra. You know, how deceived others while using his hippie-dippie-goodie facade, twisting and using others words for his benefit and hurting others along the way? Most namely Rosemary. He's getting a taste of his own medicine here. 

Moondancer...Moondancer....you're totally running down the path of villainy here. As much as I hate to say this, I kinda have the feeling that his biological parents being Trixie AND Vladimir Blueblood's might have hugely determined that he be selfish. 

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FennAndGold [2018-01-13 20:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Charaka you messed up LIKE BADLY! And Moony just why? WHY WOULD YOU LIE?! Also can I hug Starlight and Sunset it must be upsetting to know your daughter is no longer around to think that could do something... Also I love Starlight and Sunset's new hair!

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Rinstail [2018-01-09 20:48:17 +0000 UTC]

You pretty little shit

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kayanne21 [2017-12-13 01:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Moondancer. You utter shit. 

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Shadow-Ichigo [2017-11-30 10:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Is it wrong to ask for him to suffer a harsh fate? Cause I'm with Midnight on this; I hope it blows up all in his face here

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Herowebcomics [2017-11-27 01:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Omg!
Moon is getting his Saron on!

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AnonymousNavi [2017-11-23 04:48:17 +0000 UTC]

holy smokes this is so exciting I'm loving these turn of events

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