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Published: 2014-04-02 00:32:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 16112; Favourites: 537; Downloads: 27
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This is the first page of the story. There's a lot of things to define, but I think it's a trial for now.Only italian, sorry ç.ç I'm not so good with english, but I hope to translate it one day ç.ç
YOu can read it in Russian too, here: acomics.ru/~cotton-tales/1
Thanks to the super kind redgitanako.deviantart.com/
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And now I regret not taking my italian classes seriously x)
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I only speak a little Italian, this comic looks beautiful, so I will try to understand it.
(Parlo un poco italiano. Questo comico apparisce bello, cosi sarà provare capirlo.)
Haha, I hope I got that right. (:
This page says:
Looking out the only window, I used to admire the garden.
because Potevo is imperfect tense, which isn't used much in English, so I think this is the best translation?
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English: (I used google translate so it's far from perfect)
allunica looking out window
I could admire the garden
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I love this style, I hope you get to translate it one day so that I can read it! So gorgeous. <3
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Your style always pulls me in, regardless of whether or not I can understand the words of the story.
The subtle details convey plentiful amounts of wonder and emotion~
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If you would agree i could to translate it into English and Russian *___*
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Thank you so much! *^* It would be great!
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only into Russian, and take it to Author's Comics as a translation acomics.ru
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"Looking out the only window... I could admire the garden."
molto morbido e piacevole. I love it.
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this is so cute! xx I look forward to more pages <3
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Very cute comic~! I am learning Italian at the moment, and this is a fun way to notice some vocabulary! <3
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Ma sei bravissima*___* adoro questo stile, mi ricorda un pò quello francese x3
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bellissimo! attendo il seguito, sono molto curiosa *_*
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gauisdisahdkdjfh ;AAA; this is freaking cute and beautiful.
i hope someday i'll receive your story as a book \o/
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"looking out the only window... I could see the garden" I think, but my Italian is poor at best...
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"looking out the window I could only see the garden"? super cute!
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It's so wonderful and adorable! *^*
Details in background are really good C:
...and I love this unicorn bunny >u< ♥
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Wah this is so cute. Your coloring is always so soft and pretty!
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Those eyes.. ;-; I wish to hug the bunny...rabbit, whichever it is.
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Oddio quant'è carino!!! *^*
Questa pagina è già in sè un piccolo capolavoro, quindi direi che come "inizio/prova" è ottimo! Non vedo l'ora di vedere il proseguimento
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aaaww!! This is all so amazingly cute and beautiful! I really love your art my dear!!
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..... for being a 'trial' i think this looks really good and cute!
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English translation:
Looking out the only window...
... I could see the garden.
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omg thanks! ;v;
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