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LordOfTheFeathers — Redraw - Chapter 1 - Storm! RUN!!!

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Published: 2017-07-14 22:43:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 784; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 2
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My name is Storm Fly and I'm living my best life with my awesome mom and dad! We are travel ponies and we go everywhere and anywhere we want to go! But, lately we haven't gone anywhere real far but, that's OK I still like walking even though its a lot less active than riding my dad as he flew with my mom. But soon I can fly on my own and I can go anywhere like my parents!

As the sun set, we strolled under the trees of the forest like a roof or some kind if shelter. It protected us from the cold of the night. My Dad was in front looking for a spot to rest. As he walked, he looked at me and gave a little smile.
"What?" I asked smiling at him.
"Sorry Storm it's just... are you OK?"
" yeah I am just tired, that's all..." I answered slowing down a little.
He slowed down and walked to the side of me, like there was something in the trees watching us.
"How about here?" Mom called to my Dad. He looked over to where she was pointing too. It was small but, looked like a cozy place to sleep.
"Ok, This looks like the place to stay. Nice call!" Dad said proudly to Mom. We laid down in the middle of the trees where the only thing was light was the moon in the dark sky.
"Good night Mom and Dad, love you!" I said with a smile, closing my eyes.

"They will kill Storm! You can't! Please listen Blue! For are sake! We need to fly away from here and find somewhere else to stay!" Mom shouted, angrily at my dad.
"Over my dead body!" He yelled at her
"Exactly! They'll kill you too!" She answered back loudly.
"What is going on, Mom? Who is they? What is happening!?" I started to rase my voice because they weren't listing to me. "Mom!" They both looked at me, fear in their eyes. Dad opened his mouth then there was a loud howl braking the silence. "What was that? Dad? Mom! Please answer me!" Dad turns to me and puts his wing on my Shoulder and said in a shaky voice.
"Storm Fly, what ever happens now, just remember I will be always with you, and your mother. We will get through this! You just go to trust me."
"O-ok..." I started tearing up even my Dad, it was so scary and it happed so suddenly.
"I love you Storm" He whispered, hugging me.
"I lov-" I started to say as I herd Mom screaming, she was on the floor with a Wolf on top of her, attacking and scratching.
"Feather!" Dad ran and booked the Rabid Wolf in the ribs it hit a tree log near to us. Then suddenly two other wolfs pounded on Dad and they started clawing and biting him. He tried to get them off while my mom was being attacked by another one. I couldn't move, I was so sacred it was like time stopped. I could not hear or see anything, it was so dark.

In till my Dad yelled out "Storm! RUN!!!"
Something just clicked and I turned and ran as fast as I could. I didn't look back or say goodbye I ran and ran in to the darkness of the forest.

I didn't know how long I was running for it felt like hours. I slowed down and stopped, everything hurt I cried hoping Mom and Dad was ok. Looking back I was completely lost I didn't know where to go. It started to rain and it was cold. I used my wings to cover me from the rain, my tears masked the rain drops, and I was all alone.

First chapter! hope you like it! (I have redrew this first chapter as well! Hope you guys like his it came out!)

Chapter 2: www.deviantart.com/lordofthefe… (Some old art as well but I am going to redraw the 2nd and 3rd chapter)
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bluefeather46 [2017-07-24 19:43:18 +0000 UTC]

I have a wolf OC

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LordOfTheFeathers In reply to bluefeather46 [2017-07-24 19:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Cool! 😁

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