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Lorijn-Lammes — Pacemaker
Published: 2009-06-30 23:41:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 434; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I can peel off your skin
Like plastic melted on candles
Do you burn, are you on fire
Can you warm my freezing
Hands, heart, hands, hands. Heart.

Your dandelion like hair
Flutters with butterflies
And you hold on to nothing
Nothing's special, everything
Seems like nothing to you, doesn't it?

I scream, I dream, screaming dreaming
Sinking in your chest to hear
The beating of your pump
When will it stop will it, will it
Will it ever stop when I'm in here?
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Comments: 12

Jello-94 [2009-07-14 18:23:22 +0000 UTC]

I love the last two verses or stanza's or whatever you call them!
They are my favourite ones! <3

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Lorijn-Lammes In reply to Jello-94 [2009-07-26 23:35:34 +0000 UTC]

They're mine too.

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Jello-94 In reply to Lorijn-Lammes [2009-07-27 15:36:11 +0000 UTC]

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HelzCullen [2009-07-03 19:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Sleep some more (:

I think the second and third stanzas are the better ones, and I loveeeeee them. <3

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Lorijn-Lammes In reply to HelzCullen [2009-07-03 23:14:53 +0000 UTC]

I try, I try but even when I sleep 12 hours a day I'm tired.

Thank you. It really made my day.

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HelzCullen In reply to Lorijn-Lammes [2009-07-04 11:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Me too. >_<

(: Aww, you're so welcome.

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Black-Myst [2009-07-03 06:06:13 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Sometimes the best things seem to come when it's late and you can't sleep...

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Lorijn-Lammes In reply to Black-Myst [2009-07-03 11:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps sometimes. But sometimes I just want to sleep!

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Black-Myst In reply to Lorijn-Lammes [2009-07-04 10:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I know what you mean.

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sleepyfaerie [2009-07-02 16:48:51 +0000 UTC]

The pains of insomnia
But I like it
The half rhyme thing works well

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Lorijn-Lammes In reply to sleepyfaerie [2009-07-02 19:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes. But then I slept thirteen hours and still felt tired, so meh.

Thank you.

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sleepyfaerie In reply to Lorijn-Lammes [2009-07-04 12:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah, not so good then

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