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LostBlueDreams — Sociopath
Published: 2004-05-23 06:49:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 429; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 49
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Might I describe of what wants to be -Me in flash of golden grotesque,
Parade of flowering gentle sweets of thrash –
Devine bliss of purity gone once they clash.
Touché. They say. One or twice, as I –
Fall yonder, beyond the dreaming world,
My mind. Caught thrice! Through –
Withered fields. Like darkened sky.
They ask for morals. I say nay, the bleeding –
truth is I have nought but love for the freedom.
Strange, unusual, different, idiosyncratic,
They reply. Random thoughts stray from
the mind. What I see, is what I get. Nothing –
to expect. Faith in love, faith in Christ. Gone,
filth, evaporated. Died along with my urge to
Fly away. But I lived, you vision, happiness.
But once upon a time I was, you vision, in –
peace. Then my heart froze. Closed. Locked,
away. Gone to stray. Here I stand, alone, on the
bend, thinking of more. Intellect, strong, all I -
need. Strength. What I don’t need is, him,
her, it. Likewise. More or less, wondering,
Why then do you think, crazy? Perhaps,
perhaps not, even so, I believe I am more.
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Comments: 18
Wow, i like it man.
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whoa!!!
this is a great, but new, style of writing!!!! i like it!!!!
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Its an interesting piece to be sure, though I don't see it as sociopathic. Rather, I see it as the work of a mind that is tired of all the corruption and pain this world has to offer...I like it though, I feel I can relate to it in some ways, out in this Godforsaken land...
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Hardly sociopathic. I say that because i can relate to it. It is knowledge to say the least. Just because others or everyone thinks differently does not mean that you are wrong or insane. Everyone is insane or else they are mindless; there is no right and wrong, only a personal perception of such which is influenced by society. The fact that freedom is acknowledged and loved disproves a sociopathic nature, it is something held onto and if it were taken away, rebellion and disobedience would ensue. This is obviously how things already are with many of those who realize they already are being oppressed. -Individualism-
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Bravo! Excellent imagery and the emotional undercurrents; very well done.
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I really like this. Your way with words is bueatyfull! +fav
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That's vrry good, it reminded me of the Three Musketteers, and don't take that personally, it just triggered my untriggerable mind is all. Good work, and keep it up!
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I love your imagery and the way you break your lines.
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Rhyme is absolutely great 
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Mm.. well written free verse. The style seems kindda choppy between lines but that's what makes it special. I like this poem. Great job!
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I have to say that the rhymeing and rythem amuse me, and I can't figure out your reasoning behind some of the line breaks. all in all I have to say that I like it, the thoughts don't seem to flow, which fits the subject I think. good job
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Thankyou, that means a lot... Um year, thought I'd try something different 
Dreams~
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well while change is not always good, different went wonderfully with this piece!
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Thanks
Dreams~
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