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Published: 2004-01-07 00:59:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 29
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It's amazing how many people are suicidal these days,Like the latest fad or craze.
But if they died,
I mean really died,
Could they face their creator?
Could they look them in the eye and say they had nothing left to live for?
I can hear their protests,
I can hear their pleas,
Over and over they resound in my head.
"What about me?
Where was my creator when my family fell apart?
When my lover stopped caring?
When everyone hated me?"
Why would the creator create you,
If it didn't love you,
For a split second absolutely love you?
The things it loves are dying off now,
Killing themselves and others without shame.
Blaming it- their creator- because the creator should be ashamed,
And it is.
Maybe it should lock itself in a closet,
So it can cry alone for ten thousand years,
Because it failed us.
It didn't create our dreams and destroy our fears,
"Where is my pony palace?"
Let it obey our whim or die trying!
But it can't die, it can't hide in a closet.
It can lock the gates to eternal bliss,
Send us all to hell with a single dismiss,
When we kill ourselves aren't we damning ourselves to this?
Is hell better then our mortal lives,
Is there anything we'd miss?
So before you kill yourself-
Think of the golden rule,
Turn on it, it will turn on you.
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Comments: 9
forgottenfairie [2004-10-03 21:06:44 +0000 UTC]
hey, ur 'attempt' at not rhyming has been amazingly successful!! this peice is stunning and thought provoking, something i think most have thought but have trouble expressing- uve got major talent!
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oasisdreamer [2004-01-09 00:15:08 +0000 UTC]
wow meg,this is really amazing! you really did it this time,its amazing.
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LostPyroKitten In reply to oasisdreamer [2004-01-09 00:54:59 +0000 UTC]
yea, *I* know.. lol I'm not that full of myself.. or am I? ^_^ thanks SO much.. *ego blows alittle bigger*
*Pinkie* hell no.. (Have u met pinkie?)
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LostPyroKitten In reply to Oblitter [2004-01-07 22:02:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. You very kind person
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RavenC [2004-01-07 01:58:51 +0000 UTC]
Ok. I need this for other freinds. so they can read it. this is a message i had to get out, but I couldn't, not like that. :fav: for sure.
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LostPyroKitten In reply to RavenC [2004-01-07 22:07:14 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks soooooooo much ^_^ mwahaha.
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darknessembraced [2004-01-07 01:23:42 +0000 UTC]
wow... just wow. Makes you think, doesn't it?
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LostPyroKitten In reply to darknessembraced [2004-01-07 22:13:10 +0000 UTC]
man.. thats nice of u to say.. Glad it made u think..
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