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I'm missing you already,Even though you just left.
I know I shouldn't be writing you,
But this letter has only one request.
Tell me you love me.
You don't have to mean it,
Or even feel it at all,
I just need to hear it.
I'm dying here alone,
No one to hold my hand.
I'm only asking for a white lie,
I think you'll understand.
I know it's selfish to ask you though,
So hate me if you will,
But I had to ask,
Before I took all these pills.
I know I should call a friend or at least stop writing,
But I can't stop thinking about you,
And without you there's no fighting.
Darkness and cold need shelter.
Fear and dread need hope.
Each forest fire needs lighting.
I'm not asking for even that much,
Just enough to cope.
So please say you love me,
That's all you have to do.
That's all I've ever wanted,
Well, that and also you.
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Comments: 17
Phode [2006-07-25 09:35:04 +0000 UTC]
This is Awsome!!! I love it! The final line in the first stanza bugged me a bit, but over-all, it was an awsome peice!
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LostPyroKitten In reply to Phode [2006-07-25 09:53:45 +0000 UTC]
What about that certain line bugged you?
Thank you! ^_^ for a second I thought you meant the last line in the last stanza...
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Phode In reply to LostPyroKitten [2006-07-25 10:57:58 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, it just was worded weirdly, like you have the idea, but...I dunno, it was like it didn't fit the style you formed for the poem if I make any sense
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andromache [2004-04-14 20:34:24 +0000 UTC]
ok i love this one. and i have no criticism at all. amazingly powerful especially the forest fires bit. u r one great poet there hun. xx
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LostPyroKitten In reply to andromache [2004-04-14 20:38:31 +0000 UTC]
*blushes* thanks alot.. No criticism? I think that's a very large compliment! By the way thanks for watching me...
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andromache In reply to LostPyroKitten [2004-04-14 20:39:44 +0000 UTC]
it's cool, ur awesome. my poems are pathetic in comparison
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LostPyroKitten In reply to andromache [2004-04-14 20:50:08 +0000 UTC]
aww I doubt that. Poets never like there own poetry.. I have strange feelings about mine.. I hate them but I couldn't live without them..
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andromache In reply to LostPyroKitten [2004-04-14 20:52:33 +0000 UTC]
i know what u mean. my poems are a way of dealing with my emotions, most of them are drawn from emotions or feelings that i have experienced at some time in my life, different emotions take longer to deal with so there are more poems about certain emotions than others.
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noirdeluxe [2004-01-16 16:58:03 +0000 UTC]
Craaaaaaaaaaaaaazy. I like this one too, has some great wording to it, and seems to have some other meaning to it. I dunno what it is tho, haha.
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LostPyroKitten In reply to noirdeluxe [2004-01-16 23:05:19 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks.. I try to create many points of view for a poem.. so everyone reading can connect in some way.. so if u read it again.. a year from now it might not mean the same thing to you. If i looked over my work it might not mean the same thing to me anymore
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oasisdreamer [2004-01-15 16:23:09 +0000 UTC]
amazzing, its really meaningful. you do a great job getting messages out.
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RavenC [2004-01-15 02:15:07 +0000 UTC]
Ok, now I need to worry about you. then again, My poems... I'm so cofused. wait, this is about that freind that I helped with those insults... Right? Right?
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spyre [2004-01-15 00:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Damn, that one'll make you think twice about your relationship. Very good though.
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LostPyroKitten In reply to spyre [2004-01-15 01:36:33 +0000 UTC]
lol it was meant to glad ya like it ^_^
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