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Published: 2003-11-12 20:21:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 212; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 30
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You slit your wrist with a smile,As you watch yourself bleed all over the dining room tile,
Your adrenalin flows like your blood,
On the floor lies your miniture flood.
You grab the phone and call Mum's cell,
and tell her about your living hell,
You tell her about your faded scars,
As you speak she's jumping into her little red car.
You hang up on her and call your friends,
Friends that will love you until the very end,
No answer, you look at the clock, they're at school,
You feel dizzy as you realize you are such a fool.
Out of the clouds peeks the morning sun,
Realality finally hits you as you mutter "Oh God what have I done?"
You hurriedy dial the nimbers 9-1-1,
And tell them about your shameful fun.
You try to stop the bleeding with your shirt,
But you wrist is too gravely hurt,
You pass out, but not before you hear the sirens from far away,
But you're not sure that you'll live to see another day.
You wake up to a faint beeping,
You're awake but wish you were still sleeping,
You move around and lift your head,
Your parents hug your and cry that they thought you were dead.
They don't ask you why,
They dont even so much as sigh,
It's these things that drive you to be inhumane,
It's these things that drive the murderer inside to go insane.
You scold yourself for being such a coward,
Self-hatred makes your soul bitter and soured,
You go home, your parents leave,
When they return, a suicide note is what they'll recieve.
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Comments: 13
DaRkSkE-D3 [2003-12-25 18:44:49 +0000 UTC]
Has a weird twist , now i wanna be dead , now i wonder what i've done , and then that note. Do like it some things were hard to understand cause my main language ain't english
there some typing mistakes in it also
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LostTrust In reply to DaRkSkE-D3 [2003-12-25 21:27:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks. yeah i probably have an ass load of typos. im just tolazy to correct them. i will one day. thanks.
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broeknarms [2003-12-14 01:13:15 +0000 UTC]
reminds me of some of my early work...though my early work that covered this subject in such a barebones way wasnt this good.
you got some very stark images here. well played *thumbs up*
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devildragonofhell [2003-11-21 12:33:54 +0000 UTC]
i love it as usal i am takewing over your emoticon
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darkhellian [2003-11-19 14:53:30 +0000 UTC]
its good kate. i think i like this one the best. ill for sure put it under my fave. dk how much time i got left im in studyhall still. ya know?
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Alexdria [2003-11-13 14:15:07 +0000 UTC]
This is really good...although I don't think I could write something like this...but it is good. I like it because it shows that your parents won't ask questions. They will always be there to love and take care of you. Good job
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the-sohi [2003-11-12 20:27:52 +0000 UTC]
hmm, what a happy poem, lets hope u dont follow example ey? just one criticism, if ur gonna rhyme the ends, y not use even syallble numbers 4 each pair in the future? this is really good but the rhymes make it really uneven. ohter wise some kick ass work, now im ognna check wht else you gots 2 offer
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