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Published: 2012-06-03 19:05:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 803; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 13
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Kicking it with a new OC and his name is RADif u cant read it ask me and i will be less lazy and attach all the details in the description below
cant believe i actually made this
im proud to say this was all me for once
be warned he is dangerous but friendly
o yeah i also used texture 24 found here on DA
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Proluge
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When I was a child at the age of 4 I remember waking up to me mom and dad in a den
It was at night time so I get tired and sleep one off.
I did not have horns as you can see of now nor did i have wings
I was just a small pup living with a family in a den with no sis or brotha we still had family in the pack at the mountains. My dad left the clan in order to be with my mother
He was the alpha and He was amazing
When he howled at night Its almost as if him and the moon sang together
almost as if He and the moon had a connection
So when he wanted to be with my mother he uttered
i will be your moon. He couldnt take it
whenever he watched her his eyes always twinkled like the stars
a lot of past experiances I never really knew. He always gave me you will know when your older. I still dont even know
Later at the age of 5 I became more amused by my father
One day he asked me.
Z:What do you wanna be when you grow up?
I gave him a response and said.
Divinus: Dad I wanna be like you. He was so shocked and gave me a response.
Z:NO! Dont you dare become me!!!
I was scared and wondered why he said such a thing because I admired my father
He calmed down quickly and said..
Zivinus you can be anything in universe the stars even.
Divinus: Well I guess I dont know yet.
later the next day i knew something i wanted to do.
I called my father and he came and I brought up the subject
and told him this.
Divinus:I decided
Z: what?
Divinus:i wanted to help hunt
We set out at night with the moon so bright
we see not deer but
what is the animal gleaming in the moonlight
what the heck is that
it was a wabbit
a wolf hybrid rabbit
he said
Z: dont wor....* i rush off faster than he could finish those words*
I bite the neck And say hello .But he didnt know
I thought it was cute the rabbit bleeding
he was so surprised he asked w....
Z:who have u been practicing with
i said
Divinus:no one
He couldnt do such thing with even a blink
Z:do u know what u did?
Divinus|: I was running to say hi before I hunted him but i rushed to fast and my teeth went in
i knew i was lying
at the moment he was going to say dont worry
my blood was pumping so fast my heart thumping faster than the wabbits' could run
I was thinking dad i am going to do it
for you... I was thinking dad I am going to do it
I am going to not be like you but better
I thought when this all happend
what just happened
why do I taste something juicy?
hmph who wouldve know?. My first attempt and my speed matched my dad's
The only problem was when I killed the poor thing it was just sitting in the light beautifully
how could such a well structured and beautiful animal die? I thought that same thing right before my own death
As my dad carried the dead wabbit home with me I saw my cousins
They were from the mountain pack my dad left .They came to say hi
My first cousin same age as i was the best of all I knew as a good friend
His name was Go
His brothers name was Engral and his sister's name was Cadria
They were like my best friends
Go said when he saw the wabbit.
Go:wow Z(my fathers name) did u get em again
My dad placed the wabbit next to me
Z: "no Your blood right here did it".
I smiled oddly feeling a string of weird stuff in my chest either it was embarrasment or happiness
I was embarresed for killing such thing but i was happy i could impress others
im thinking is this right?
Cadria: "wow already hunting! I hunted at 6. Your only five and hunting just like Z
I was shocked I didnt know anything about my fathers past or hunting record and such. I just knew he was awesome.
It appeard I am just like him after all. At the moment of happiness i smiled and my teeth and fangs showed
The blood was still on em i never licked it off. They were shocked to see the blood on my fangs
Engral: Why didnt you lick the blood off your fangs yet?
I didnt know how to reply
Divinus: what was i suppose to do?
Engral: Cmon......
Engral thought i was being stupid.
Engral: has Z never fed u?
in sarcasm.
Engral: lick the blood off and taste the pleasure of your kill
i licked the nearly dried blood off my fangs with a sense of displeasure
it didnt feel right. why?
But in hopes of not disapointing everyone
Divinus: yum
after my first experiance it wasnt my last
now that I was able to be out there not haveing to be worried as much my dad let me visit the mountains
I followed Go everywhere as if he was a tour guide
If anything I was surprised he wasnt a bird he had great sight
I learned one thing for sure
funny thing is its true.
As Go looked over the edge into the front I tried to see what he was looking at. I had no idea. He was definitely hawk eyed he looked so intrigued. What could've he been looking at? I gave up wondering and admitted my lacking vision.
Divinus: What is so amazing down there? Your wagging your tail like crazy Go.
Go: sorry Divinus It's just the snow...It's covered in blood and the beta is down there. He is killing beer. ( a mix between bear and deer. A body of the dear and fur of a bear.)
Divinus: who is the beta?
Go: o yeah i forgot to mention his name. It's jamasca he is friends with my father and one rank under him. Jamasca is mauling em all. There is enough blood to taint a frozen river.
Divinus: 0_0!! really! Do you think he is stronger than uncle C
Go: No! of course not my Dad isnt the alpha for no reason and your dad is just as strong as mine. our fathers are the strongest wolves in our clans history for many moons and suns to come.
Divinus: (thinks to self) Dad will you show me one day your strength and why the moon chooses to shine on you? Will the day come when uncle C comes to our den and we can eat like a pack and eat over some nice beer. I wonder if it will be fantastic.
Okay u know how Divinus has horns and wings like an angelic demon right
well he has died and is back on earth now here is. how did he die die? becuase of the beta. Jamasca. over threw my uncle and when that happened.everyone was convinced to cull outsiders. I was an outsider since i lived with my father and mother alone out of the pack. even though some of the clan was my blood. i was an outsider regardless. My dad comes along and so does my mother.They were wondering where I was for dinner because mom ate everything. Then Jamasca sees my father. Jamasca always adored my father and hated my mom.He was Jealous.Jamasca promised my father back into the clan he left in order to keep me alive.My father accepted.my mother as of then went insane completely. I unknowingly at time of knew of her anger and smite and when her anger and blood lust kicks in she is unpredictable who knew her mind would spin craziness enough to fight me in return.
Jamasca: who shall live your only child or your wife
(heart braking isnt it)
when my mother was about to fight me. she didnt have tearsshe didnt really care as it appeared. she wanted only of my father .
Mom: Your nothing and I can have another child again dont worry you will die.
I was born again but not by her. She lunges at me first on .My father is painstakingly watching
two outsiders
your loved one
and your loved son
having to fight
My mom attacked my neck but she missed. It was easy to avoid due to her insanity. I didnt attack back because i was crushed emotiontionaly.
Divinus:why mom?why dad?someone help me
Divinus: I cant choose this
Divinus: I dont want this
I wanted to run but the cirlce of the clan didnt let me through
I was crying no one was holding me or caring.
Everyone just shouting barking.Not even a single tear was shed by the pack
until i heard 3 people say the words "dad!!".my 3 cousins who were my best friends they were crying .their father is dead and all because of that one man
my mother cuts my train of thought and attacks again
I was so gazed and sad all i did was nothing
I twiched quckly enough and she got my face my nose it felt like she scraped it clean
she is actually trying to kill me
why...why...why..all this? why now?what im only 6 why all of this now .my heart it hurts it pains me the screams alll bracing in quick the barking the tears
my uncle
my friends
my father
my mother
my cousins
its all to much
when my mother attack me once more I said nothing.........
All i did was scream. I screamed I yelled I tore her neck to shreds!!!!
my second kill she was so beautiful and she died by me
for some reason thoughthe blood tasted not bitter and disgusting
but lustful and delicious I am glad she was dead
but my cousin GO he saw this
like everything else so did engral
I licked my fangs in delight
Jamasca shocked he said Z
Z kill your son now before he kills us all HE was shocked and said
u promised me he would live if i rejoined
Jamasca:"isnt it obvious he can kill us all'
He killed your wife no problem with ease
Breaking into tears as the day was breaking to the near of night
He smashes His face into the mound He jumps over to me
and says
ivinus Get OUT OF HERE
Divinus: *shooken in fear* da...dad
Z: were going to die here if u dont leave now
Divinus: DAAAAAAAAAAD I dont wanna leave you plz dont make me leave
i didnt even say hi to mom shes not talking shes still bleeding
why?!! Dad...................
Z:He smacks meand nudges me
Z:if u dont leave now you will never be able to leave the cave again
Divinus:I cry and leave faster then the next sentence that will occur
Zivinus......you poor child why did u have to be like me if not better
Z:ENgral come here Now !!!
Engral: yes Z * yes Z ccrying in tears*
Plz run away from here with your brother and sister
this isnt yo..... our clan anymore
Engral: were to go then
Z: I dont know but please dont follow Divinus
Engral: why he is our cousin our friend your our uncle and our father is dead and our mother is gone what do u expect us to do !!!
Z: i expect u to live' your farther was the best man i knew
he was better in descions even in consideration me
All i know is for sure is. your farther doesnt want his 3 faveorite kids to die
Run for your lives before everyone kills each other
<*My father breaking down faster and the clouds turning orange*>
everything is a disater when i was 6
Go: Engral !!!
Engral : what
Go: come here
Engral : OMG......... that retard he is bleeding a trail and coming back
Go: you can see it too..... Divinus please dont come back I dont want to lose you like dad
******* transition*******
Divinus: I heard his words from where i was but i knew a descision
I am not going to leave my dad my family no one!!
Cadria: YEEELP! a wolf out of nowhere bites her
Jamasca: you all will die
your family will never wish u were bred to this clan nor the world
Heaven will spit you down and hell will burn you all alive
(o how those words now. he was wrong in so many ways about me )
Cadria: Jamasca why!!! you killed our father. WHy me>! U bastard
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR grrrrrrrreaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cadrai: IM ggoing to kill u like divinus would
Divinus: me... Cadria ?? u shouted my name what is going on
i cant move as fast but one thing is for sure. I am going back up that mountain .as my blood drips from my face i climb the mountain
*cadria bleeding*
cadria: Im going to kill u
Go: you are a monster
Engral: you will die no matter what if not by me
Z: you all better calm down noooooooooooooooooooooow!!
A wolf bites Z
Z: turns with evil face
Z: u dare bite me
pick up with his paw and brings him to his face gouges his eyes and throws him to the ground
*A gaint revlot of undecided manner is breaking out*
Divinus: I can hear it all
why? is this because of me
i cry as i reach near the mountain top
and a wolf falls on me. not dead though
he quickly reacts and tries biting me
easy enough to dodge he just jumped of a cliff
Divinus: Like my dad always says .Look before you take the next step
*Cadria bleeding out unable to move*
Cadria: you bastard
Jamasca: no one can kill me I was better than your weak father I control everyone and everything
this is all my dream coming true!!!
Engral : cadria .................
*Engral attacks*
Jamasca bites his jaw and rips off the bottom of it
*divinus reaches the top* *sees what has happned to his dad to his cousins and the blood shed of his loved ones*
Divnuis: I am going to kill u all
one wolf said
what your going to kill us like your mom
I said............. Exactly u treturous bastard i readied my fangs
Divinus: how bout all u weaklings play with jam jam over there and kiss his pelt some more
Because i am going to rip it off and clean my blood with it.
*All reacted hastedly*
*17 attackedd at once*
*I was looking at my father and family the whole time*
Divinus : or so i thought' *I was zoned out only one eye was looking at them the other was paying attention to the fight
I soon closed my eye that was looking at em because blood spattered in it I began laughing
Divnus: andsaying hey you all wanted Z dead
guess what hes dead u want me dead i am right here I am Z's sonZ is my dadGo is my friend
Cadria is my Sister Engral is my brother My uncle is my blood they all were!!!! MY FAMILY!!!!
and i will make sure my blood wasnt shed in vein
*I cried as i utterd those last wordss*23 dead alreadyby me. Jamasca was right
I am going to kill em all more dead along with the blood spread
my body not giving up but as i opend my eyes i noticed for a split second
my body its in shreds i am bleeding just like the wabbit' just like my familyI wont die dad
not yet I still wanna be like you
please. pleaseeeee help me!
Jamasca: why do u keep asking for help your alone you always were u had no friends u had no family even your own mother didnt care for u. you were a mishap a mistake it was by luck that u were like Z. how u are now is unknown
your hhair is nothing like ours clans your just a black wolf your body is pitiful and your attitude is pathtic u should die just like that bitch Cadria.!
Divinus : !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u bastard .u unfathomable being u speak of the devil killing us all
u speak of heaven rejecting us u r the reason why we all will die and i will see to it that it happens *zones out blood drips* *faint reality slipping in *
*avoiding attacks tasting the different types of blood*
*unable to feel legs teeth almost as if growing pain seeping in will undying*
****later******
Jamasca: your a mere child you killed off everyone how could a six year old pup do such a thing?
*I never replied i only killed my eyes were closed*
my soul was open my emotions flowing like the blood
Jamasca: i will kill u like your uncle I know i said one thing
Divinus : Hi .....
*jamsacas head falls the ground *
all dead even i almost jam is dead cadria goengralZmy uncle my mother my friends the clan all dead. even i will fall
Divinus: Dad......howl with me plz I know the moon is watching
*i walk up next to him*
Divinus: Hooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwlllllllllllllll
one more time
Hooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww...................*blood spatters out of my mouth* *eyes faintly holding*
Divinus : Dad i love u . mom please I am sorry!
Go maybe we can look over the mountain once more
Cadria we should hunt one day together
Engral i bet you would of dragged home a nice bear if we ever grew older
Hoooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwllllllllllllllllll
*head collapses to the ground body bled out*
eyes close the moon hangs over us all maybe I felt the moon sing with me for one second in choir.
yeah, i'm one of the fastes reader xD
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Thanks
Who's your fave character besides divinus ???
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Really ??? Your the first to say her
Why ???
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idk, I love mysterious/bad chars xD
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Caria isn't bad she was a good guy but she died and she was trying to live but got killed by Jamasca
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Thanks I put good thoughts to it
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Thanks
Do u like how he is ?
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Yeah!!!! He indeed looks R.A.D.
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vjrfhbvkjhdfkvjhkfj this is absolutely amazing! i mean the anotamy is awesome even the paws r well done. along with the snout and the facial structure on the mask its all so amazing omg he is awesome!
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improvement galore! holy crap!!! your anatomy is improving a lot
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thanks and how is my new character
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thanks
no more divinus now
divinus is now going to b for the story
k maybe more but not as much
k as much but RAD is going to binvolved 4 sure
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no more divinus commissions
i should of clarifyed that
because look at the folder lol
[link]
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oh ok i was like oh no D:
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hehe
IM thinking bout making RAD a mutator
he mutates others because if radiation
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should i ?
for example if rad came up to kel she would turn into something like this
[link]
a monster of any imagination
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thats a pretty cool idea
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thanks
now i just need to start drawing RAD
u know whats funny
i feel more inspired to draw RAD instead of Divinus because its more in my high difficulty range
Also i already have a story for RAD
wanna here it
its how he is now and its short as heck in comparison to Divinus's prologue
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haha well thats awesome
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maybe later friend
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oooo no what happened ??
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dunno D: i've been extremely sick this weekend and it wont go away. it sucks
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that sucks
is it like bad sickness like . losing stuff sickness
or fever and u feel like u cant move sickness
or just coughing and crap
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achey back/headache/sore and swollen throat/tired/fever/sometimes nausea
i dont know what that is
its horribleeeee
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sounds like a bitch tbh
thats what u should call it
if anyone asks what u have
say i have a bitch and it sucks
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god thats exactly what it is.
uggghhh it needs to go away asap i hate feeling like crap!
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so u have a bitch and it sucks
did u not get the joke
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