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LovingLifeInDisarray — The Walls
#clingy #doubt #slavery #unknowing #walls #whatthe #why #whatamireading #jealousy
Published: 2016-08-17 20:39:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 547; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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The walls enslave us, yet we do not see.
All walls are different for you and me.
Yes, they let us go out.
But, as if in doubt,
They call their friends to watch us while we are away from them.
But jealousy begins to stem,
And we almost always come back to our master walls.
Even though we don't really hear the calls,
Slavery still exists.
Even if you think this is just a myth,
If you sit down and think about it,
All the puzzle pieces fit.
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Hehehe. I laugh because I can relate to poems just popping out because the mind is feeling whacky.
I can appreciate this message all the same, with the walls that divide people in the literal and figurative sense all too common. 
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This goes hand in hand with the saying, " everyone is a slave to the walls they've built around them" this only proves it !
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I'm glad you liked it. Even though I meant it in the literal sense of actual walls, it's something that is to be perceived as the reader, not the writer. And I like seeing people's opinions on my writings because I don't think it's very good. But thank you so much for reading my work. ^_^
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Trust me friend, your writings are well done! And allowing your work to be perceived by someone else, and how they perceive it, is a part of the art in itself !
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