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Ooh, nice. I like the bold blackness. It adds suggestion of darkness or tragedy to the quote.
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i'm so glad! thanks very much. : )
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Both the nightstand and the little girl are fantastic. I like how it speaks as one piece but with the line of the bunnies you were able to bring the girl into the forefront next to the text.
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Thank you. The text isn't too difficult to read, then? Do you think it's a bit too busy? I appreciate your comments. : )
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Nope, I could make out the text just fine.
As for being busy, it's true that there is a lot going on but there's something I like about that and you want to be careful so as to not make it too symmetrical (particularly with the space above the bed). If anything I would suggest possibly removing the flower at the bottom of the little girl's right foot so that the vacuum cleaner stands more on its own. And then maybe removing the flower at the base of the nightstand so that it too can stand on its own. That's my two cents!
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Excellent! I love how you did the bed and night stand. The negative space of the foot board is great. Plus, what's not to like about bunnies across the floor?
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Thank you very much. I hoped that would work out all right with the foot board. I'm making this for my momma, and she really likes it so far. I think it's a little busy, though. Like, a few less flowers or something might be better. What do you think?
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You are welcome! I really like your designs and work.
I didn't find it busy when I first viewed it and still don't. Ultimately, I think that is your call.
It is true there are a number of repeating elements, but I don't think they overwhelm the piece. You could take out some of the repeating elements; the butterflies in flight are amazing, are they enough to convey what you want so you could remove the ones perched on the bed posts? The same could go for the flowers.
It must be challenging to figure out which ones to take out as it looks like some are need for support, like the flower between my and more.
I also want to take the time mention how adorable the little girl and the vacuum are; the details in each element are perfect.
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