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Published: 2012-01-01 21:01:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 616; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 22
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Messing around with body shapes for IzzyShe's pretty chubby
and has a big nose
and relativity short legs, especially for my style
My art and style is still buggin me, for some reason I've had trouble getting my body proportions and back legs right
**sigh**
Critique on both anatomy and character design please....
Izzy and art (c) ME
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Comments: 9
Cloudfrost [2012-01-02 11:08:25 +0000 UTC]
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The Colouring and shading is spot on and you caught the expression very well. The pose is correct, you don't need to worry too much on the anatomy for it looks fine from here.
My only issue with this piece is the size of the ears, I don't know whether it's part of the breed but they same a bit small for the rest of the canine.
And, compared with the rest of the animal you may want to add fluff to the legs and belly to match the chest and head fur.
My last tip is that if you study a canines body you may see that it's belly isn't one flat line. It has more of a curve to it. A wolf has broad front body but a rather thin rear.
Otherwise, very good and I am now intrigued to view the rest of your gallery! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Just ask if you want more critique ^^)
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LttleGhost In reply to Cloudfrost [2012-01-02 15:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Ooohh thanks for the tips
Yeah, although I did want to make her ear kinda small just for her character, they do seem just a bit too small
Especially thanks for the tip on how the body differs in the front and the rear I'll keep that in mind
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Cloudfrost [2012-01-02 17:39:49 +0000 UTC]
Im not a premier member so I couldn't reply to your comment
No problem, I'm glad to help!
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Envykarp [2012-01-01 22:44:18 +0000 UTC]
I think the anatomy's pretty good! The legs length is fine and the hind legs are good too. I think the body should be a little longer, and maybe the ears are a little too small, but that's all. <: Btw, I really like her expression.
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LttleGhost In reply to Envykarp [2012-01-01 22:49:01 +0000 UTC]
yeey
Yeah that's been a problem of mine just lately, body length
and I purposefully made her ears kinda small but they do seem just a bit too small
I love drawing expressions
and that one kinda explains her whole personality XD
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