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Published: 2011-02-22 02:21:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 357; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description 'please let me come' she said her hazel eyes filled with worry, he looked at her then looked away quickly. 'no. its not safe' he said she go up of the bed and went to him. she hugged him tight. 'please?' she asked he looked again at her pleading eyes then looked away. he broke from her grip and turned to her quickly making her jump. 'i said NO!' he said she backed up as he came towards her. he pushed her onto the bed and she coward. 'im sorry i just do get whyi cant help you!' she said he sighed, 'because. i need to do this alone, it will be easier then it will be safe for me to stay with you.' he said. 'what is this about?' she asked. 'i cant tell you until im done, but i will' he said she looked worried. 'when will you be back?' she asked he pushed her so she was laying on the bed and kissed her. 'as so as i can. when i come back i promise we an relax and i can be around more' he said she sighed. ' what if something happens and you dont come back?' she asked he kissed her again. 'it wont i promise' he said. 'i love you' she said quietly, he kissed her cheek. 'i love you to, dont worry i will be back....i promise' he said as he left, she laid on the bed and sighed. she felt like she made a mistake letting him leave.

a few weeks later there was still no sign of him. she was getting worried about his safty. ust then a note got sliped under the door. she gasped and got up and picked it up. she opened it nd the note said.

im sorry to have kept you waiting, it should be safe to come back in a few days and i promise to explain everything. please cut this note up put it in the shreder and BURN IT. or i will never be able to come back.
i love you.

she sighed deeply, she had to do what he said or she would never see him again. she wentto the shreder and put the note through, then she got the pieces and put them in a cup and lit it on fire. then dumped the ash out the window so it would blow away with the wind. she sat on the bed and sighed. she laid on the bed and slowly fell asleep. a few days later she went out onto the balcony and was looking over the city. all of the sudden a hand apeared on the railing. she gaspedand jumped back. "help..." someone said, she went up and looked over and saw him. 'RIDER!' she said 'jenny! help me over please!' he said she grabbed his arm and pulled him over the railing. 'what couldnt use the door?' jenny asked she giggled and he sighed. 'no i really couldent just to be safe. but im sure its ok now' rider said as he stood. jenny hugged him tight. 'come inside' she said as they both went inside and sat on the bed. 'now explain' she said fermly 'about?' rider asked she sighed. 'i want to know rider, why did you have to leave. what are you hiding from me!!' she said she raised her voice, rider pushed her onto the bed and kissed her. 'alright just calm down ok?' he said she nodded and then sat up.

rider sighed, 'alriht, the truth is...im in the secret service and one day i got word there was a gang out to...kill me....so for your safty i fled incase they came and killed you instead. and i couldnt say anything because i was afraid of being bugged or something. so i left...but its ok now because everyone in the group is dead now. so were both safe' rider said, jenny sat there in shock. 'w-why?' jenny asked rider looked confused. 'why what?' rider asked 'why did they want to kill you?' jenny asked 'because....a few months ago remember when i left?' rider asked jenny nodded 'well i put there leader behind bars for smuggling different drugs acrossed the boarder...after he got put away he swore his gang would kill me and anyone i cared about, so for your safty i left again and now the rest of his gang is dead' rider said 'what aboutthe leader? what if he breaks out or something?' jenny asked a few tears ran down her face. rider wiped them away and pulled her close. 'i wont happen, hes being put to death today...everything is going to be alright' rider said. jenny smiled and snuggled into him, she missed when rider left for no reason and couldnt say why. then she realized something. 'how long before you have to leave again!?' jenny asked rider puhed her ontothe bed and held her tight. 'not for a while, i asked to take a little vacation to spend time with you, and even when i go back i may not be needed right when i get back. as you know i dont leave THAT often' rider said jenny giggled. this was true he wasnt gone ALL the time. just then the phone rang, rider got up and answered it. 'hello?' rider said, all he heard was heavy breathing on the other end. 'hello...?' rider said again. 'im backkkk....' an eery voice said on the other line. rider's eyes widened and he hung up the phone, 'who was it?' jenny asked 'jenny we both need to get out of here, like now, pack yourthings were going to the base and your going into hideing' rider said.      
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Comments: 19

VioletteMusicluver [2011-03-27 15:49:41 +0000 UTC]

hey why havent you done part 2 of this?!

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luaisy4ever In reply to VioletteMusicluver [2011-03-27 18:15:16 +0000 UTC]

ive just been doing something more importent atm. ill do it assoon as can though.

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VioletteMusicluver In reply to luaisy4ever [2011-03-27 18:38:53 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

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luaisy4ever In reply to VioletteMusicluver [2011-03-27 19:27:28 +0000 UTC]

yeah :/

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VioletteMusicluver In reply to luaisy4ever [2011-03-27 19:32:48 +0000 UTC]

its ok i still enjoy reading this!

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luaisy4ever In reply to VioletteMusicluver [2011-03-27 20:08:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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VioletteMusicluver In reply to luaisy4ever [2011-03-27 20:34:30 +0000 UTC]

<(' '<) kirby is hugging you

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luaisy4ever In reply to VioletteMusicluver [2011-03-28 20:17:22 +0000 UTC]

(>'')> ahaha hug back

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VioletteMusicluver In reply to luaisy4ever [2011-03-28 20:40:36 +0000 UTC]

^^

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VioletteMusicluver [2011-02-24 21:10:05 +0000 UTC]

call it "hidden secret" and make another page! this is getting interesting...

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luaisy4ever In reply to VioletteMusicluver [2011-02-25 23:42:47 +0000 UTC]

ahah i might just do that <3 ill try maybe not today cuz i dont feel the greatest but as soon as i can <3

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VioletteMusicluver In reply to luaisy4ever [2011-02-26 00:21:47 +0000 UTC]

ok and awww YAAAHHH u did my idea yayz!

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luaisy4ever In reply to VioletteMusicluver [2011-02-26 00:59:33 +0000 UTC]

ahah i just loved the title <333

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VioletteMusicluver In reply to luaisy4ever [2011-02-26 02:53:32 +0000 UTC]

thank u my pleasure lol

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luaisy4ever In reply to VioletteMusicluver [2011-02-26 15:41:28 +0000 UTC]

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coolcomics [2011-02-22 02:29:43 +0000 UTC]

you could call it "please dont leave".

when i read this i immediatly thought of you and luigi and that he had to go and tell daisy that he's not interested in her anymore.

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luaisy4ever In reply to coolcomics [2011-02-22 02:30:36 +0000 UTC]

lol its not even mario idk what its about yet XD lol ill think out i later i guess

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coolcomics In reply to luaisy4ever [2011-02-22 02:56:47 +0000 UTC]

ok ^^

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luaisy4ever In reply to coolcomics [2011-02-22 03:01:02 +0000 UTC]

ahah :3

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