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Tell me if this needs to be matured for the blood.

SSH Chapter 28
By *Chico-2013

[. . .] For the first time in what felt like years, a small smile cracked the weakened vesture of Tom's expression, and in an attempt to get a glimpse at his new friend in the darkness, he forced his tired eyes open once more. He held them open and blinked furiously until finally it came into view, and Tom was shocked to find himself only mildly surprised that a dark brown hawk with piercing yellow eyes was kneeling beside him. He then discovered that the blinding bits of light before were streaks of moonlight that broke through the canopy of trees above. He was outside. Once he realized this he soon began to catch the sounds of whippoorwills calling to each other through the gloom, and the high whine of crickets in the tall grass. Tom smiled again and looked back towards the hawk, who had pressed his hand against his chest again, the expression on his face telling Tom that he had feared that he had passed on during his lapse of silence. The feline's jaws worked as he tried to form words, but they were clumsy in his mouth, and his body refused to spend precious oxygen on speech; but he ignored this and forced out a raspy groan, "……y…..you're………..t…..ha….t……hawk……"

The hawk nodded and answered before Tom could speak again, "…I…I know. You gotta believe me though….I'm different now. I'm not in that gang anymore." A look of disgust flitted across the hawk's face for a split second, and then he continued, "I left the school….and I found this warehouse….and heard those people talking about you. So…when that female cat was dragged off and the other guy left, I snuck in and cut you down. He was going to throw you to those creatures of his, leaving you for dead." Tom chuckled weakly, closing his eyes again, "……m…might….as…..well….be….."

Rano bent closer to the cat and lifted his head slightly, gently keeping him as comfortable in the grass as he could. The old guitar lay still in its case not far away, as did the beret Tom always wore. Rano lifted his hands from Tom's body and leaned back on his talons, his eyes searching his broken body, terrified and unsure of what to do. This hawk was not a bad person in the least; he had just been drawn into the wrong crowd, and after realizing what it was managed to escape from its clutches before it was too late. Now however, his conscious was like a hungry wolf eating him relentlessly from the inside out. So saving this poor man's life was the best thing he could think to do, but it may already be too late….

The night air was suddenly rent with a horrible sound as Tom choked, coughing hard as a sudden hardness seemed to enclose his throat. Rano jumped violently and came closer to Tom again, crying with terror as he struggled to draw breath again, "Oh…Sir, are you alright? Sir!?" Dark crimson suddenly flowed in a fountain from his jaws for a split second, staining his front, and then it was over, and his head fell again back against the grass. Tom remained this way and made no attempt to move anymore, his eyes locked onto the pale image of the rising moon. A permanent smile etched upon his face, he took a measured deep breath and murmered softly, "…..you….done good for….me kid. …..Thank you… ….we…..we'll……meet again."

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You totally didn't see another entry comin', did ya. xD

This has to be one of the most memorable scenes from Chapter 28 (along with the revealing of Malachi). It was crazy sad and descriptive, as you can tell if you read the section above. The thing that makes it most touching is that these two don't even know each other... They both just happened to run into the wrong place at the wrong time.


I tried CRAZY hard to make the background half decent, but it still looks too light. I need to add darker shadows. o__o Whenever I place them, though, they don't look right. If anyone could give me some tips, that'd be nice~

Hope you like!

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Rano, Tom, and SSH copyright

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Comments: 24

ShadowsLastBreath [2011-06-07 01:03:16 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, keep it up!

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to ShadowsLastBreath [2011-06-15 14:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Thankies~ o3o I worked hard on it.

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wolfs-rain-amanda [2011-06-06 04:32:16 +0000 UTC]

TT_TT Poor Rano and Tom! I felt really bad for the both of them when I read that part of the chapter. *sob*

LOVE this picture, Abby! The colors in here look fantastic! The shading and lighting look pretty amazing, too!
Same goes for the really awesome lookin' posing! ^^

I can see that Chico really loved this. ^^ I love it, too! And I agree with everything she said, this is truly an amazing picture and everything~! It just takes my breath away! xD

Very well done, Abby! You did an amazing job!

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to wolfs-rain-amanda [2011-06-14 19:20:24 +0000 UTC]

I know! It was so sad and touching at the same time. T3T

Thanks! You have no idea how long it took to get Rano's pose to look right. I have a full length mirror in my room, and I was constantly running between the mirror and my laptop trying to figure out how to draw him. Gah!

Awwn~ Thanks again! 8D

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wolfs-rain-amanda In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2011-06-16 07:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it was. T_T

No prob~ Ah, yeah, drawing poses can be difficult sometimes. But I think you did great at Rano's posing~ ^_^

You're welcome! ^^

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DarcyEverlasting [2011-06-05 16:01:40 +0000 UTC]

D'= It's a beautifully sad picture.

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to DarcyEverlasting [2011-06-05 19:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~ T3T

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AbsoluteDream [2011-06-05 03:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Aw man, this looks so cool! 8'D

I love it! This is definitely one of the most memorable scenes for me as well. In fact, I was going to draw this exact same scene for the contest.... But I just couldn't bring myself to draw Tom so beaten up.

You did an excellent job drawing these two! I can almost feel the pain Tom's in just by looking at him. The one thing that really stood out to me was the veins in his eyes, I'm not sure why. But it makes me even more sad about the pain he went through. D:

Rano is looking great! He looks very cute in your style. XD I love the tears and the expression.

I personally think the background is looking very nice! You did an amazing job on this! 8D

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to AbsoluteDream [2011-06-05 14:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a ton, Dream!

That's really funny, because when Mary told me she was thinking of doing this scene, I said that I was too! Pffft. I don't know if she is anymore, but hey, two different artists means two different renditions. I'm excited to see what scene you end up doing!

Oh? You noticed the veins? Cool! I didn't think they were dark enough. I'm glad you noticed that little detail!

Daww~ Thanks! I think his head looks too big here, but that's probably because he has so much hair/feather-ness. xD

I still think it looks too flat. Thanks, though! I'm glad you think so!

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AbsoluteDream In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2011-06-06 20:20:29 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

Wow really? This scene seemed to stand out to many people. XD That's very interesting! I'm curious to see how she would draw this scene if she decided to do it.
Aw, thanks. XD I'm working on one scene that happens shortly after this one actually..... though, I'm not actually sure if I can finish it on time. D8

Nope, they look great! It was a nice addition. ;D

Personally I don't think so. For Sonic characters their heads are naturally big. XD

Well, (I hope you don't mind if I were to critique a little ) it might help to colour the trees a more pale colour the further away they are and darken some of the shadows on the trees up front as you've said in your description. But seriously, you've been improving like crazy with your backgrounds! 8D

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to AbsoluteDream [2011-06-17 21:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's kinda hard to forget when a character DIES. T^T
I see it up in my inbox! I have a lot of art to comment on yet. Sorry about the wait~ It looks AWESOME.

Oh? Thanks! I'll try that. I was doing the opposite. I was trying to make the trees darker as they got further away, but it didn't really work. Dawww~ You're too kind!

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AbsoluteDream In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2011-06-20 00:36:04 +0000 UTC]

XD It's not a problem.

You're very welcome! 8D

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Chico-2013 [2011-06-05 02:58:04 +0000 UTC]

HOLY FREAKING CRAP. JUST. WHAT. WOAH.

*imploded*

I-....Abby. This is AMAZING. A-MA-ZING. FREAKING GORGEOUS. EXACTLY HOW THE SCENE IS SUPPOSED TO LOOK.




NGNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

<33333333333333 You should see me falling all over myself right now. Not just saying this cause it's an entry to my contest, but because I honestly think this is one of your BEST works yet by FAR. BY FAR. The background- amazing. The poses- flawless. The emotion- SPOT. ON.


I can't stop gushing over this!! I LOVE IT!! AAHHHH *squeeeeing IRL*


<333333 Thank you SO much Abby!!! I cannot THANK you enough.


asdfhalksfhasjkdfhkasdhfaskjdf~

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to Chico-2013 [2011-06-05 03:10:07 +0000 UTC]

GAJKDFLJALDJSKL~~~ I'M SOO HAPPY! ^0^
I tried to fit the description as closely as possible. I'm glad all that studying-the-text paid off! I also used the pic in your animation as a ref. (On a random note, I bought Monster on Rock Band 2 with my extra Wii Points after watching that. I nearly freaked when I saw it in the online store.)

Really? I tried extra hard on this piece. I was focusing on details from the story so much that I couldn't just rush right through it. You truly think this is my best pic yet? Oh geeze, thanks sooo much~ <333 *crosses fingers for contest win*

Haha~ I'm glad! *smiling IRL*

I enjoyed drawing it! No need to thank me!


WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~

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MidevalExponents2sqr [2011-06-05 02:46:14 +0000 UTC]

I like seeing sonic fanfic characters that aren't hedgehogs/dogs/cats. Gives it a little unique feel.

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to MidevalExponents2sqr [2011-06-05 02:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~
Chi has a lot of unique characters. You should go check her out! She's a really great writer and artist. She's very nice too~

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MidevalExponents2sqr In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2011-06-05 15:05:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm not into the sonic shin-dig-palooza, I just see a whole bunch of sonic OCs. Can't say I didn't make a few myself...

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to MidevalExponents2sqr [2011-06-06 00:12:34 +0000 UTC]

I only have one Sonic char. She's not too original, but I've been working on it.

"Shin-dig-palooza"? Pfft. Lol.

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MidevalExponents2sqr In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2011-06-06 02:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Because of you, now I made one that wasn't ona dress up game >.< You should check her out. Miss Tao is her name.

Lol xD

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to MidevalExponents2sqr [2011-06-07 12:39:16 +0000 UTC]

I just did! <3 Very creative character! You did a nice job with her~

^3^

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MidevalExponents2sqr In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2011-06-07 18:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Thankies~

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JAVA-MOCHA [2011-06-05 02:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Awesome Right Here

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to JAVA-MOCHA [2011-06-05 02:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~ I'm glad you like it! 8D

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JAVA-MOCHA In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2011-06-05 03:13:54 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes

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