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srag [2009-07-28 16:18:44 +0000 UTC]

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not bad...it just needed some work on the rain
and nice work on the shadows...but dont make them
anyway...in manips sometimes dont worry too much abt the shadow...it could ruin the piece..

and i like what u did with all the shredded parts of her cloth and how it flows in the wind...
but on the left theres a red ribbon that looks very..."artificial" like its made..not in harmony with the rest of the piece...its needs to be desaturated or burned a little bit
and dont get sucked in the "lost girl syndrome" e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
or ur gonna spend the rest of ur days here doing a lot of pieces that look alike...

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PyroDemi [2009-07-25 17:29:14 +0000 UTC]

i suck so bad at making blood LOL this is lovely I like the heart and the blood on the floor ;D

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