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EmbertheDragoness [2011-12-22 22:51:58 +0000 UTC]

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First off I really love this X3 I love their designs!! <3
Pose: I love it! They way Jay is shows like the desperation of the situation and the claws through the water are awesome! Flame looks so sad D: I want to hug him!!
Shading: I'm a bit confused on where the lighting is suppose to be coming from, I figure it's suppose to be coming from the hole since the ice would mute the lighting coming through the water. And Bone looks out of place because he isn't shaded
Background: I actually like the background, I'm rather terrible at them myself, about the best I suggest is maybe making the edge of ice more sharp? It kinda looks like a cloud but I like the hole, maybe add a bit more spiderweb cracks? the cracks would be easier to see under the water then they would be above X3 And I fucking love you bubbles XD I only suggest more of them especially around moving parts to show movement better X3
Overall: I really do adore this picture X3 It makes me really sad though D: even more so cause I have yet to reed the newest book or two XDXD But You have gotten so awesome I'm rather jeolous XDXD But I hope I have helped in someway e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>

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Sadie1413 [2015-06-05 00:35:29 +0000 UTC]

Anyone else think Flametail was a fucking dick? I mean, so was Dawnpelt and Tigerheart. I never liked Tawnypelt or Rowanclaw much either. It's just... Okay, so Dawnpelt basically nagged at Flametail until he came on the ice, and he fell through, Jayfeather was only trying to help, but stupid Rock had to stop him. (I hate him, too, btw) and she has the nerve to blame Jayfeather for it all, when SHE told Flametail to come on the ice. It's her fault he fell in. And Tigerheart was a jerk (I hate forbidden couples, except for Gray x Silver or Blue X Oak) but Dovewing was horrible, too. I really wish she had kits with Bumblestripe. Yeah I hate Tigerheart. And Flametail was just a plain douchebag. His whole personality was just really fucking annoying. And idk. I just am not a fan of Rowanclaw. And Tawnypelt/paw fled from her birth Clan like a coward, and she blames it on ThunderClan. (At least was a total coward, I think). And Rock was just a real prick. He was a grouchy, old bastard. Especially to poor Jayfeather. And yeah. I hate ShadowClan. A lot. ThunderClan and RiverClan are my favorite clans. WindClan bugs the hell outta me, and ShadowClan cats are just unfriendly asses. ShadowClan? Pfft. More like 'Shitload Clan'. Great pic, by the way.

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DarkWolfArtist [2012-05-06 04:08:38 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING HEHE

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WindingStream [2011-12-27 22:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Loovly(:

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JioZebra [2011-12-24 08:50:48 +0000 UTC]

flametail's death made me really sad when i first read it, and you really captured that emotion all over again ^^ two thumps up for frost, and four if you are by any chance a cat or a wolf... or an animal mammal thing that has those weird thumbs in the middle of their legs..... O.o

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HronawmonsTamer [2011-12-23 09:02:58 +0000 UTC]

...there sure are a lot of deaths in Warriors... like seriously...

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PacaPunch141 [2011-12-23 01:51:29 +0000 UTC]

i love this it looks so cool i love the backgrond to

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DragonessArya [2011-12-22 23:39:55 +0000 UTC]

This looks so amazing. c:
Awesome work bro.

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