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peterjdejesus [2014-02-19 05:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


First and foremost, I'm really loving the use of the ISO to create the awesome feel and look of this shot. Yeah you could have used lights or a flash but then the emotion would have been lost in this shot. Bravo for that. Not many people dare venture over the "800" benchmark. I like that!!

I love the use of fore, mid and back ground in the composition. Curtains or drapes create the voyeur feel to it almost, like I'm watching someone or something I really shouldn't be. The dark feel even evokes the though of taboo rituals in a way. There's no clearly defined event here but the mind can go in a world of different directions and it's solely left up to us to determine what's going on, based on the lack of a description.

At this ISO I've never been able to get something CRISP but the candle and bottom of the flame are sharp and I'm liking the flame's lens flare/reflection in the lens. Probably would be hard to omit it and even if you can, I'm glad you didn't.

Background being out of focus really makes me question, as I said before, what's going on in this girl's world and in her head, and why am I peering through this shroud of mystery.

I'm sure there is something negative in this shot that could use improvement but not this time around. I really like this shot. If anything "bad" would be said, it should only be the mention of the flame lens flare reflection, but I like it in the shot so if you're happy enough to post it, it has purpose in my eyes. Great shot!!!

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LucienWittwer In reply to peterjdejesus [2014-02-19 15:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much having taken the time to write this long text Peter


My Picture isn't perfect but i appreciate your comment, it's very cool.


Re-tank you



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peterjdejesus In reply to LucienWittwer [2014-03-02 10:15:52 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome. 

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kk-art [2014-05-30 03:23:10 +0000 UTC]

Love it.

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LucienWittwer In reply to kk-art [2014-05-30 19:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you  

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