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Description WHERE IS IMPROVEMENT I CANT SEE IT SOBS

and yeahhhh i cant do these memes i get lazy when i redraw-


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Comments: 12

Lillyrosejamie [2014-01-03 18:04:51 +0000 UTC]

I like both versions actually, the one from 2012 is kinda warm and cute and the recent one is so dark and mysterious, it has something creepy yet cool about it. I do see some improvement though: the right one is pretty static due to it's pose, like it's some sort of portray, and in the one on the left you see clearly movement because one side is a bit hidden behind the rest of her body and it's like she's walking away int hat kind of position, leaving an unlucky trespasser in a cursed magic spell circle. I don't really know the character and I dunno how the character usually is, either bright or dark but well she looks beautiful in both ways

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LucLightning In reply to Lillyrosejamie [2014-01-04 04:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Ahh thank you Lilly!

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Lillyrosejamie In reply to LucLightning [2014-01-05 09:21:24 +0000 UTC]

^^ You're welcome Luc ^^

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Bubbi-Robot [2013-12-31 00:31:40 +0000 UTC]

you've improved a lot! The shading and colors are a lot better and interesting

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LucLightning In reply to Bubbi-Robot [2013-12-31 01:26:55 +0000 UTC]

ohh thank you!

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171830 [2013-12-28 01:55:52 +0000 UTC]

shhhhhh ur coloring is much better, and so is the color choice? it's nice to look at

lighting is better

and the hand is also better

bows look better, hair has like weight to it

like i could go on

its just overall improvement alright )))

good job luc 

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LucLightning In reply to 171830 [2013-12-28 17:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Ohh thank you Sara!!

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Allispoon [2013-12-28 00:14:48 +0000 UTC]

I see massive proportion improvements :3 like in the hands and length of arms, and your colors used in the more recent one are more smooth and calming =u=

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LucLightning In reply to Allispoon [2013-12-28 00:24:11 +0000 UTC]

I see.. thank you!

((btw for the new one, do you have any bg suggestions for it?

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Allispoon In reply to LucLightning [2013-12-28 00:26:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem~

Maybe a nice night backdrop, something dark or soothing... nice library =u= bed room with a view? idk, thats just what I would imagine with the picture

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LucLightning In reply to Allispoon [2013-12-28 00:35:42 +0000 UTC]

i see~ thanks!

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Allispoon In reply to LucLightning [2013-12-28 00:43:18 +0000 UTC]

No trouble~

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