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Published: 2012-11-13 21:42:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 636; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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One wip down, other million to go. Not couting the ones i name as "ahsajhashdl" or similar
Joana, getting clothes wet but getting her dinner. I think it was a good painting practice in the end. Btw does her head (even with hair tight by behind) looks too big ?
Photoshop cs6, 5-6 hours.
Joana © me
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What a cool piece!
As for her head, you said you've edited it already and I think it doesn't look too big. Maybe there's a bit too much hair but it doesn't really disturb me at least.
Joana's pose is really good and she has a very focused look! I like her skin tone a lot
The background has great colors and I really like the environment, too. Shallow water with lots of little fishies...
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I've realized I tend to add much volume sometimes without noticing. After doing this piece and received the critics here it helped me a lot to notice it more. Thank you so much for telling your thoughts ! I'm gonna try to fiz it more, but at the same time I'll try to let it lose as I picture in my mind
I didn't adde fishies, just one in fact, do you see some effect that causes it ? o3o Or Did i got the english word "fishies" wrong ? (I'm not much goot at english XD)
Thanks so much !
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No, you didn't get the word wrong and I didn't see even that one fish
You're welcome
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The head is a little too big. Her face is properly sized compared to her body, but the back of her head is too large (or she just has big hair, but it sounds like that's not what you're going for.) I think if you sketch the skull according to where her face is, you should be able to see where her head/hair should "end". I hope that helps!
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Heys !
Yes it helps a lot, thank you for letting a comment here :3
I took a look after editing it today and I think the head looks ok, but i put so much volume in the hair by the back part that ended up looking like she haves a head too big. Now I'm gonna try to fix it.
Thank you so much
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Ooh, I like her! Very cool looking character (love her outfit! -steals-) and beautifully colored.
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Thank ya ! <333 There's more of her in my scraps and gallery, and soon i'll finish her reference sheet OTL (i'm indecise with it for ages lol).
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You're welcome! I'll have to root around for it. Ooh, but reference sheets are such fun! And handy.
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