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Original inks by Lewis-Paul [link]Colours by Me
UPDATE: Changed a few of the shades a bit, hope it looks a bit better
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Liquid-86 [2006-11-03 19:52:28 +0000 UTC]
hey looks pretty good. I colored the exact same piece. [link]
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TheVampireDred [2006-03-21 10:46:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this looks great, though I would think Wolverine would be much larger...
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LukeBatt In reply to TheVampireDred [2006-03-21 11:15:34 +0000 UTC]
Heh, well, he is in the background, a little ways behind Cyk, but still, he is a short man
Thanks for the comment, it's really appreciated
I was really proud of how the shading in Logans arm turned out, also, keep in my, only my colours, Lewis-Paul did all the lines for it
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TheVampireDred In reply to LukeBatt [2006-03-21 11:54:23 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, I try hard to colour...but then again, I need to improve my line art as well... ...
And Nightwing rocks... ...and Top Ten, have you read the series? It's so good right now...
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LukeBatt In reply to TheVampireDred [2006-03-21 20:13:49 +0000 UTC]
The Nightwing series is great, whats happening with OYL is gunna be awesome Sorry, but I don't know Top Ten thou? (other than a clothing label
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TheVampireDred In reply to LukeBatt [2006-03-23 01:21:42 +0000 UTC]
OYL?
Top Ten...go read it, it's about a world/city where everyone has some sort of power. Sort of a crime story thing, it's great. Written by Alan Moore...
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LukeBatt In reply to TheVampireDred [2006-03-23 06:13:27 +0000 UTC]
One Year Later - The Entire DC Universe jumps forward 1 year, all story arcs, the Nightwing series looks to breathe new life into the series
Hmmm, may have to see if I can find Top Ten somewhere
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garstu [2005-10-29 19:33:27 +0000 UTC]
Nice work, when modeling try using longer stokes instead of short ones... as this helps from looking choppy in areas. Like the choice in lineart.
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LukeBatt In reply to garstu [2005-10-30 04:14:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the advice. Yeh, :Lewis-Paul: does some nice line art, really talented guy, and his pics are quite good for practicing colouring
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Lewis-Paul [2005-10-27 20:34:35 +0000 UTC]
It looks great man, although my one critique would be with a problem i used to have. Cyclops' skin tone is rather pale, and would look much better being the same tone as Logan's.
Other than that, great job
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LukeBatt In reply to Lewis-Paul [2005-10-27 21:26:07 +0000 UTC]
Just made it a little darker
Yeh, when I woke up this morning, I found a few things I didn't like about the colouring, so I spent a bit changing it a tad, whats another 3min
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storyForge [2005-10-27 16:04:24 +0000 UTC]
thats awesome. some more interesting lighting or coloring would be good though.
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surfeit [2005-10-27 15:18:08 +0000 UTC]
Heh, I haven't seen Cyclops looking like that in a long time. Of course, I haven't kept up with comics in a good ten years now, but still.
For crits, I think the highlights on Cyclops's lowered arm look a little blurry compared to the rest of him. The highlights on his chest seem a bit sketchy, too--probably due to the circular strokes. Instead of going in circles, try following the contours of his chest. In this case, it would be more of a horizontal stroke with an upward arc.
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LukeBatt In reply to surfeit [2005-10-27 19:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment.
II may go back and fix up the things that tick me off about it later on, for now thou, it's done. But thanks for giving some crit, I can use that to try work on the next one better.
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JeezyKreezy [2005-10-27 13:06:57 +0000 UTC]
I am liking this very much, but am too tired to offer critique
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Rizzeld [2005-10-27 12:52:14 +0000 UTC]
dude that is sick, but i reckon ya yellows should be slightly different on them maybe a brighter yellow on cyc as he has very little of it in the first place
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HimmLeash [2005-10-27 12:47:03 +0000 UTC]
Looks nice, although I think it would look even better if you'd make the contrast a bit bigger. (=
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LukeBatt In reply to HimmLeash [2005-10-27 12:49:34 +0000 UTC]
You mean make it slightly brighter?
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HimmLeash In reply to LukeBatt [2005-10-27 12:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, my English is a bit crooked. What I meant to say: make the difference between the tones of the colors bigger. It now seems to be only a few variations of one kind of blue and yellow. Make the light parts lighter and darken the dark parts. That would make it look more vivid, more of an eye-catcher.
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