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Published: 2009-08-03 19:57:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 2109; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 48
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yayz! It's finally finished! and its my first in ink too!
yayz I would like feedback on the anatomy please.(anatomy of a zombie)
And anything else please feel free to say something
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well...the anatomy of the zombie...since i dont know how zombie looks i ll compare it to human anatomy xd..just a little joke XD
Everything is cool, an like "it shoul be"
exept the shoulders, its like he doesnt have any, and that the only mistake,hes neck is to big to have that kind of shoulders...
thats it...exept of that really cool stuff
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you are welcome...i am happy if i helped you, just a bit
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thanks for favoriting my picture. check out my others. I like yours alot. theyre very unique
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Your welcome.
And thank you so much, it means alot
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lol. Same, especially since I just joined yesterday! when you you favorited my work I got so excited!
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I know the feeling
Good luck to you and I hope you meet lots of friends here on dA
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Anatomy? I think it's really good, all the more it's zombie... Your style's great! It looks like old caricature, I really like it
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Well, its kind of hard to comment on his anatomy since he a zombie after all. The only thing I can say that some of the lines are really thick and so his face lacks definition in some places.
Also, I'm not sure what the left side of his neck is up to.
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I want anatomy on zombie looks. Does he look deformed enough, like a zombie.
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Haha, oh yes. He certainly does.
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Nice inking technique! I like how you've used thicker and thinner lines and lots os black areas to create this picture. Cool!
And if we're speaking of anatomy, I got a couple of points you might be interested in hearing: His ears are supposed to be located higher up on the face. It is said that ears sit somewhere between the eyes and the nose, that's an "official" anatomy rule. On the other hand, I don't know if you located them that low by purpose, but I give you this tip anyway. I also get the feeling the nose is a bit too short, perhaps you should lower it a bit. But as I said, I'm not really sure if that's your intention when creating this character as well, it's pretty hard to give human anatomy critique on a Frankenstein's monster like creature like this lol. I hope you found the feedback useful anyway
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OMG! Thank you so much! You rulz!!
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From #GimmeFeedback .
Like someone else above me said, some shoulder would be good. Additionally, I would see about the ears being a little higher up on the head the next time, but I do seriously like the inking that you did on this. Well done, clear ink, nice detail, and I like the way that the theme of macabre holds together throughout the entire drawing.
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Eck... He's seriously nasty! His eyes are a little confusing, but you really got the macabre in there! If anything, I would give him more shoulder. He doesn't seem to have any.
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The lines of the shoulders are too low , looks like his arms have been amputated , and maybe the right side of the mouth must be a little more open. For the rest is very well done, the eyes looks really dead 
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Actually, I don't have much feedback to give. I think this would look great if you (or somebody) colored it.
Anatomically, I think it looks fine. The great thing about drawing decaying undead is that you don't have to worry so much about anatomy, because it's heavily altered by decay anyway.
I also think it might help, especially if you aren't going to paint it, to do some shading to emulate skin discoloration.
If you really want to work on making it look more accurate, look up some research on decay. That will give you a direction to go making it look more accurate.
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(Sorry if I happen to repeat what someone probably wrote before me)
Congrats on the cool zombie!
Otherwise, I would look into the proportions a bit - that part of the face from the nose down seems a bit large, even though it looks to me like the dude's mouth is shut
I like the lines and the style, and how it's distorted, even though the ears look a bit too low on the face (they have the same height and vertical position as the nose, usually), but I suppose this is perfectly fine for zombie standards. I would have tried defining the forehead/skull shape more evidently, but this is just me.
Keep up the good work
Hope this was useful
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Glad to hear (or read) that
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I like your thinking on the zombie. But the lines in his face are a little to thick in some places. And the shirt around his neck makes looks like he is choked or something. But otherwise this would be nice to see coloured.
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I also think itΒ΄s the best! and itΒ΄s very scary and that is good 
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i really love this!
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