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Published: 2014-04-28 01:11:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 742; Favourites: 183; Downloads: 2
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Description
This WAS suppose to be Cael crying but it looked more like a kitty ver. of Tweek from South park so I was like '' Fak it. Its Tweek now.'' And Tweek is one of my most FAVORITE SP charas of all time <3.Ignore the missing details. *n* WOW it's already 6:17 AM... Tweek and south park (c) not mine . Art (c) mine 3/26/14 ΒRelated content
Comments: 38
theme
Tears and rain... the composition theme that very deep in heart of viewer...
And you greatly achieve that theme...
Look at the blurry background, make the scene of heavy raina dn sadness is firm
COlor composition
Simple, the background already prensented with great dark color composition, enough said! It's great!
For the characters... You know... no problem with that
But it will be good if you add some "Dark blue purple-ish" for environment with low opacity, strengthen the content of sadness
Technique
Great technique! I love how you draw the rain overall!
And oh the tears! Love the refelction of tears anyway! The strength point of your artwork!
Here is some point you can improve:
1. The character is not had impact of rain, no wet clothes, wet skin, wet hair...and reflection of rain tears in shoulder
2. The character arm that bend is too long...
3. Darken the character a bit... add some blur just a bit with low opacity...
Like... when you see someone at heavy rain at that position...
4. Maybe you can make the eyebrow more... more sad...
Conclusion
This one is nice job artwork! As always the strong point of your artwork is expression!
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Ah Thank you for this one as well ^^. I gave some water on the clothes and skin but they aren't very visible.
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You need make it firm then ^^
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I was doing something , Yeah I know you.
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alrightyyyyyyyyyyyyy so supppppp im coming home today Β
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Can you go to my house? Also I knew u because of the lame name and the lame '' Hi.'' without a capital XD. GO TO MY HOUSE EEEH
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OMG MY NAME IS LAME I KNOW BUT DAMN I WANT TO GO TO Β UR HOUSE DAMMMMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT Β
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*looks up from video game in anger* BITCH PLZ HES MINEEEEEEEE Β Β Β
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I knew you were refering to ben when you kept saying '' *looks up from video game*''
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but uh.. just call my mom and ask her cuz i cant drive there remember
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ok well im coming back on sunday anyways i just found out.. Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
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like next week?my mom might say yes cuz i just texted her.
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basically..lets do join me cuz im playing aj and deviant art is getting annoying to have to switch back Β
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hahahaha really....hmm.......thats good..i guess so will i be able to comeoverΒ Β
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mom just went out the door baby bro is crying like WOAH. tito is gonna come in the house in like 30 minutes. yo ucould come.
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pluz.......i have legend of zelda...BOOOOOOOMMMM Β
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Sup I feel like I know you..
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are you lillytehneko gf...wtf..u call her bae unless ur rp
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i call everyone bae sorry :/
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ohhh ;-; no problem didnt mean to affend u .. its just lillytehneko is my bro Β Β
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no its fine 
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alright if you say so ^.^
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yes you are
except the inner coffee gowd
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