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-Corbeau looked away, across the endless blue horizon, towards the slight figure on the hill."She is, afterall, the jewel of your eye, I suppose."
Reynard looked towards the elf in the distance, and it was a while before he responded.
"Yes..." his brother said softly, "She is my most precious treasure. My death is the only thing that would make me let her go."
Corbeau looked down at the ground below him, a sad smile on his lips. He closed his eyes and seemed to accept something that had been bugging him for some time.
Looking up, he gazed at Reynard with a blank expression.
"Very well. This is the path you have chosen, brother. I know you have not taken the decision lightly." Corbeau's gaze shifted slightly, but his voice remained guarded.
"The next time we meet, one of us will die."
Though the coldness of his brother's tone injured him deeply, Reynard knew that it was to be expected.
Bowing his head by a fraction he said, " So be it."
And with a grim smile, Corbeau flickered out like a candle's flame.
Reynard gazed at the spot where his brother had vanished and allowed himself a moment of peace. Like a man at a funeral, he stood stock still and let the grief he had been holding back take temporary control of his mind.
Minutes passed before he opened his eyes and gradually began to make his way through the tall grass, towards his future.
Towards his precious treasure.
- exerpt from my non-existent Coeurs de Lullaby script that i just made up on the spot.
yes, that's a tiara of flower/fruit shaped gems that Angevine is wearing. Well she is an elf, therefor she worships nature and its blessings, such as fruity goodness and flowery stuff.
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Comments: 23
Jade-Thyre [2007-09-17 17:02:54 +0000 UTC]
luvins it ^^ You show lotsa improvement. Yet I already said that to you in person. You better believe it.
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Lumikuu In reply to Bn70x7 [2007-09-08 06:32:19 +0000 UTC]
painter essentials. i want to get painter 8 though!
thanks!
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PepTalkForTightPants [2007-09-06 22:45:23 +0000 UTC]
...
Oh my god, bella.
It's beautiful.
Seriously.. This is my favourite of everything you've done (that I can think of)...
It's so detailed, and realistic... It's BRILLIANT.
And god, I LOVE the exerpt. Your writing is so addicting.. I swear, you keep getting better.. You're better than me!
<3<3<3
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Lumikuu In reply to PepTalkForTightPants [2007-09-08 06:22:11 +0000 UTC]
me better than you? pshaw, pshaw.
i do admit..it was pleased with the outcome..but looking back at it now i see that i could have cleaned up some lines a little better. oh well
i made the exerpt up on the spot, XDDDDD like, while typing the author's comments lol. it's...silly. and rough. i hate dialog. i realize how crap i am at dialog.
THANK YOU FOR THE LOVE.
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PepTalkForTightPants In reply to Lumikuu [2007-09-09 01:51:38 +0000 UTC]
Seriously! For doing it on the spot? You're so much better. Don't be so modest..
I love the outcome, I don't know what you're talking about.
YOU DESERVE THE LOVE.
<3
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dragonmarkaleb [2007-09-06 16:47:52 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it's lovely! I just love all the gems and how shiny they are!
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artauxeo [2007-09-02 18:50:37 +0000 UTC]
im seeing gems evrywhere
i love this one.
ummm...
what's she holdin?
a staff or a wand?
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Lumikuu In reply to artauxeo [2007-09-02 21:59:11 +0000 UTC]
i suppose it's a staff, but yeah...i can see why you're confused...it looks an awful lot like a wand.
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Goddel [2007-09-02 17:16:25 +0000 UTC]
Daayyymm.
Look at all those fanceh jewels.
-gimme!-
>
Cx
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FantasySyce [2007-09-02 13:50:25 +0000 UTC]
The attention to detail is amazing, and the quote from the non-existant passage is pure enchantment... Well played, my friend.
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Lumikuu In reply to FantasySyce [2007-09-02 14:08:02 +0000 UTC]
oh, stop now, im blushing.
xD
im still pretty bad at gold though. let's not talk about the jewels on the tiara, lol.
but yeah, i tried for the details this time.
haha, im a impulsive person, i just HAD to write that little bit.
thanks so much for the sweet comment.!!!
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Kagitsune [2007-09-02 13:47:41 +0000 UTC]
^___^ This is just so lovely and detailed. I love your little explanation of the fruit-shaped jewels...
Great work! ^3^
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SanguiniaSan [2007-09-02 13:47:06 +0000 UTC]
Woow, pretty n__n
Loved the details, just amazing
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Lumikuu In reply to KarriBabe [2007-09-02 13:50:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you!!
yeah, details used to be my enemy. but now..i think our relationship is improving, xD
thanks for the comment!
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AngelRamya [2007-09-02 13:44:23 +0000 UTC]
Les couleurs sont super jolis, notamment pour la coiffure. Dommage que le fond soit un peu tristounet par rapport au reste.
J'aime bien dans l'ensemble
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Lumikuu In reply to AngelRamya [2007-09-02 13:49:11 +0000 UTC]
merci trop! ouais, le fond...c'est plutot moche, je sais. c'est la cause d'aucune inspiration. lol.
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