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Published: 2014-10-19 02:48:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 512; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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I made this for fun the other day but I was just so proud of it because of my improvements. I plan to finish this but it's an original animation. The finished version will be submitted to my original art account instead of this one.Let me know what you think. Should I add more tweens? How should I improve this? I love to animate so I am open to learn. I would also like to learn the in and outs of Flash badly so I can be familiar with it as much as Photoshop.
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It's pretty hard for me to judge the rough since it's not really 'on model' / consistent yet. I would mostly just watch the hair since it seems to have volume and then deflate and then inflate again. Adding a nice settle at the end might be good just so the viewer reads the action better.
Actually, I'm not sure what her action is clearly? To me it looks like she's punching? If that's the case I would add an antic to the punch to just give that that much 'more' to the over all animation.
Other than that, looks pretty good!
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No, no punching. Just turning around. For punching I will have to exaggerate more.
I do agree with the hair, though. She isn't moving much so there should be a reason for her hair to move that drastically. XD I will fix that but will also have to focus more on the clean up so the animation won't look vague.
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I think it's just her stance feels more like she's putting her hands up to punch rather than turn around. Maybe it'll read better in the clean-up though~ I can't judge your timing since I can't go frame by frame but it looks okay to me.
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Well, it's definitely cute, but IDK if it's current state is much for critiquing. Maybe for some one who's major in animation, but for regular folk, not sure there's much to say here .w.; Other than praise lol.
Though I heard you don't want to tween too much. Like, as rarely as possible.
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I'll keep that in mind. (Sorry for the late reply. XD )
I feel like I've gotten better but like with still drawings you can animate so much to the point that you are not sure what mistakes you made because they seem invisible. At least until there are future improvements. I like making quick animations because when getting stuck I won't know how to fix them. If I take long with one it doesn't count because the animation doesn't show what I am able to do currently and what I need improvements on at the moment. That and I want to learn how to animate fast successfully. :3
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